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I resent the use of wods like 'gallant' and 'bravery'. Though undoubtedly correct, they do not belong in an encyclopedic article. It ruins an otherwise good article. Please rewrite. 81.107.34.65 02:03, 23 May 2006 (UTC)

I've reworded that part of the intro to take a more neutral tone. -- Wmahan . 18:35, 24 May 2006 (UTC)

Though I may be biased with regards to the subject matter, (Pvt George Phillips was my great uncle) I don't see how one could resent the use of those terms. Especially when taken in the context of his actions. How did it ruin the article?(Bokland (talk) 00:46, 20 January 2008 (UTC))