Talk:Geoffrey Kleinman

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took the notes by Redvers and toned it down —Preceding unsigned comment added by Gkleinman (talkcontribs)

  • Not nearly by enough. You need to provide reliable sources for each assertion you make about yourself, for a start. You also need to use encyclopedic language and avoid self-aggrandizement and advertising yourself. You also need to read our guideline on conflicts of interest and why we don't like people to write about themselves. Bear in mind that people who have written their own biographies here have often been pilloried on Slashdot and the like for doing so. ➔ REDVEЯS says: at the third stroke the time will be 12:29, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

OK Working on it. Please bear with me. Gkleinman (talk) 12:50, 28 December 2007 (UTC)