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[edit] Opening sentence.
This is the current opening sentance.
Genius Loci is a novel by Ben Aaronovitch from The Adventures of Bernice Summerfield with the fictional archaeologist Bernice Summerfield as its main character. It depicts her early career.
I know I'm the author but couldn't this be changed to...
Genius Loci is a novel by Ben Aaronovitch. Part of The Adventures of Bernice Summerfield it focuses on the early career of the fictional archaeologost Bernice Summerfield.
Ben
[edit] Opening sentence.
It's the '...from The Adventures of...' phrasing, it just seems so clumsy.
