Talk:GenderPAC
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[edit] Revisions
- The introductory paragraph should be changed to remove the repetition of the word "by".
- The section titled "GenderPAC in popular culture" must be revised for two reasons. Firstly, it fails to describe in sufficient detail how the GenderPAC has been referenced in popular culture. Secondly, it's not made clear how the described events relate to oneanother.
- I think the section listing the current members of staff is redundant.
