Talk:Gas-guzzler

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More of a dictionary entry than an encyclopedia article. And it's not that accurate, since gas guzzler can refer to many things besides SUVs. The term is much older than that. I recommend deletion.

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This is however very questionable action, seeing that it's illegal, and generally, burning for instance a Hummer H2 generates a lot more of smog-forming pollutants, such as nitrogen oxides than running the vehicle for a considerable amount of time.

Run-on with excessive commas. Also, not sure "such as nitrogen oxides than running the vehicle for a considerable amount of time" is a complete thought.
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This is however a very questionable action, seeing that it's illegal. It also produces the opposite of the desired effect. For instance, burning a Hummer H2 would generate a lot more of smog-forming pollutants, such as nitrogen oxides, than running the vehicle for a considerable amount of time.

| Exsellion89 18:43, 21 June 2007 (UTC) |