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[edit] DOB

IIRC Gary was born in '53. Anyone has the correct data on this? (Also on Skid Row 1st LP it says "He's almost 17". That LP was released in '70 (but may have been recorded in '69) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.170.124.81 (talk) 16:33, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Equipment

does anyone know what gear uses gary? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.78.125.89 (talk • contribs)

Not sure. I have a feeling he liked Les Paul guitars, at least for a while. --Mal 01:02, 8 October 2006 (UTC)

He plays a Les Paul; Gibson made a custom Les Paul with his name on it.

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