Talk:Gallen Lo

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Hong Kong To-do: edit purge Clean up all MTR station pages. They are literally all over the place. Two model pages are Tsing Yi Station and Sheung Shui Station. They each describe a feature special to the station, Station layout, exit, and connections, as well as neighbouring stations and the station "box". We will also need plenty of updated pictures (e.g. removing all KCR-related images except those on the KCR article). Check that all pages have basically the same language structure as Tsing Yi Station and Sheung Shui Station. Links to location maps are good too. (Should also perform these checks on Chinese Wikipedia.) Clean-up pages that link with TVB, especially its series pages.

As well-intentioned as it may be, this article needs some cleanup specifically in the area of grammar. The article has the urge to shift back and forth from present to past tense for no particular reason. In addition, the original writer of this article (with all due respect to him/her) does not seem to grasp the English language properly, such as the word "whose", instead of "who", "enter" instead of "entered", and but not limited to, "had no any achievement" instead of "achieved little success", or "unsuccessfully" etc.

I've also noticed that there is a lack of sources supporting the original article writer(s) claim that Gallen Lo's popularity was "poorer and poorer". AWDRacer 05:27, 29 May 2006 (UTC)