Talk:Front for Victory
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"The main opposition of the FPV from inside the PJ are the supporters of former presidents Eduardo Duhalde and Carlos Menem, many of whom have migrated to Kirchner's faction."
I'm totally confused as to what this sentence is supposed to mean. Aren't "the FPV" and "Kirchner's faction" the same thing? So who migrated, Duhalde and Menem? I doubt it. Unless someone clarifies this, I might delete "many of whom have migrated to Kirchner's faction", since it seems safe to assume that the people who still support those guys are the main opponents of the FPV. --Brian Z 02:56, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
- It's a difficult sentence. It should say something along the lines of "The main opposition are the remaining supporters..." and clarify that many supporters of Duhalde and Menem (that is, with the exception of the aforementioned remaining ones) have turned their backs of them and migrated to the FPV. I don't know how to express it any less clumsily, so be my guest. —Pablo D. Flores (Talk) 21:39, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
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- OK, I gave it a shot. --Brian Z 03:12, 9 May 2007 (UTC)