Talk:Franz Augsberger

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[edit] Unencyclopedic detail

Probably an expert should do the trimming, but there's way too much of a blow-by-blow service record here. Some paragraphs could be summarized in as little as one sentence. Highlight the important stuff, don't bury it in a mass of information. --Dhartung | Talk 21:33, 31 July 2007 (UTC)

The reason for this is that it is a literal translation from this source [1]. Ekki01 15:39, 26 August 2007 (UTC)