Talk:Frank DeSimone
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[edit] Editing
As I am assuming you meant the article needed copyediting, I shall move the tag over to the article and then begin work.--Song 23:07, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
- There; I have done all I could. I shall now put this page up for proofreading, and it has our stamp of approval on it. :) Best regards.--Song 19:25, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Copyedit
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There are several contextual issues with this article--please see the hidden comments in the article preceded by "PROOFREADER'S NOTES" for details.
[edit] Dragna: dead or alive?
There is a sentence at the end of the "Mob Life" section which I have commented out because it makes no sense: "DeSimone then held meetings with Jack Dragna and John Rosselli in his firm's office." Jack Dragna is supposed to be dead by this stage. Could someone who knows more about the subject please take a look at this? Thanks. Cricketgirl 00:56, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
- Sorry about that, I kept losing track of who did what when. I'll look it up online and get back to you in a few.--Song 15:27, 10 August 2007 (UTC)
