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This article lacks an overall continuity and pattern. In particular:
- Much in the introduction falls outside its purpose - ie to sum up the article.
- The History section, which should not be subparagraphed, includes much that is inappropriate (eg Schools, which are all included in the article List of schools in Kent, the purpose of which is to obviate listing them all; only important notes about education should appear here).
- There is no Geography section (and little to say about it). This needs to better describe its site and situation (does it really lie "at the foot" of the North Downs? Surely that is only because the sea has carved them out at this point ... surely better to say on the cliffs where the N Downs meets the sea?). The piece on Industry should be included here (including the resurrected ferry service; and the future plans); as should notes on the light industry (there must be some). Details of the town need to be included here: "suburbs" and housing estates. Earthquake.
- Climate?
- Transport?
- Government There is nothing about the town council, nor that it is part of the Shepway district.
- A Culture section could include many of the odd pieces throughout the article (Museum, sport, art, theatre)
- A religion section - details of churches
- Military connection (Shorncliffe)
- Famous people - there is a Category:People from Folkestone, but no article - see List of people from Ashford, Kent as a comparison. Again it would obviate what is in effect a list here
Peter Shearan (talk) 19:17, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
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used information from http://www.fantasyfacup.com/matthew/essays/folk.htm which i wrote.
I have no expertise whatsoever in regarding Folkestone, but I'd like to politely point out one small but significant factual error. Daniel Defoe is quoted as writing about Folkestone during the Napoleonic Wars, but he was long dead by Napoleon's era (Defoe, born 1660, died 1731).
I'm speculating, but perhaps the article is meant to say that the first quote is from Defoe's 'Tour Through...' and the quote following, regarding smuggling gold to French soldiers during the Napoleonic Wars, came from Edward Hasted, who is mentioned right afterwards and was apparently alive during the appropriate time period.
Other than that, thanks for an interesting article that piqued my interest in several things. If I ever get the chance to travel through England, a stop there will be on my list. (Anon.)
- Hasted's Kent was in its 2nd edition in 1793 and Hasted died in 1812, so the quote about the Napoleonic War is not likely from Hasted either. --Wetman 08:50, 11 August 2006 (UTC)
Links to forum communities: It's come to my attention that a forum has readded their link to the wiki under a slightly different and misleading title. "Online Community Featuring Photographs". I believe this should be removed as other rival forums have been. 19:23, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
[edit] pronunciation
The pronunciation was contradictory: a secondary stress mark, but then a superscript schwa, indicating no stress. Please correct me if I interpreted it incorrectly. The IPA link takes you to a key. kwami 05:25, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
[edit] places of worship in folkestone
Would it be worth noting all the places of worship in folkestone? i think it would be of significant interest given that there is a list of schools? a discussion perhaps and a draft list of all the places of worship?... 217.33.150.4 (talk) 17:43, 20 February 2008 (UTC)