Talk:Florinda Donner
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[edit] References
I appreciate the work that's been put into this wiki article. The references, however, could use some editing.
Some references point to an empty google page and should be deleted. Many references point to the sustained action home page. These should be edited to point to the actual page where the supporting data can be found, and/or consolidated into one reference at the beginning of the section. Some references point to blogs and blogs are not considered appropriate as verifiable references per wiki guidelines. Finally, some references point to second tier articles. The primary article reference should be used exclusively for wiki article references. Mmyotis (talk) 04:21, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Biography
The Biography section would better be called a Timeline of events since that's actually what it is. Comments? Also, I removed the following sentence recently added to the biography section, since it's relevance to Donner or the time line is not apparent:
The Jump into the Abyss was a central turning point in the path of a seer.
