Talk:Fli4l

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I'm flagging this article NPOV and advert for, among others, the following:

• The distribution is particularly notable
• However, despite its age, the most recent release is very suitable for a basic firewall system, and remains customizable by its nature
• extensive usage of second person and lack of encyclopedic distance both to the subject and the reader in general
• overzealous list of features/advantages

Apart from that, general improvements of language appear necessary as well. 68.184.213.180 (talk) 21:53, 13 March 2008 (UTC)