Talk:First Macedonian War
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[edit] Contemporaneously?
Contemporaneously? is such prodigious phraseology necessitous? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 209.144.254.51 (talk • contribs) 16:38, June 22, 2004
[edit] I've changed assessment from "B" to "A"
MadMax originally added an assessment of "B" for this article, as part of the Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment project. However (quoting from the assessment table given there) I don't see any "significant gaps or missing elements or references", nor do I think it "needs substantial editing for English language usage and/or clarity, balance of content, or contains other policy problems such as copyright, NPOV or NOR." I've changed the the assesment to "A", since I think it meets the "A-class" description. I would be happy to discuss this with anyone who sees things differently from me ;-) Paul August ☎ 18:07, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] GA Sweeps Review: Pass
As part of the WikiProject Good Articles, we're doing sweeps to go over all of the current GAs and see if they still meet the requirements of the GA criteria. I'm specifically going over all of the "Conflicts, battles and military exercises" articles. I made several corrections myself throughout the article. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. As a side note, I'd recommend condensing down the excerpt in the "Philip makes peace with Aetolia" section, as such a large block of text overwhelms the section. Remove some of the irrelevant statements, replacing them with "..." and maybe summarize some of the points at the end. If you have any questions, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I have edited the article history to reflect this review. Happy editing! --Nehrams2020 05:42, 13 November 2007 (UTC)