Talk:Ferdinand Magellan/Comments

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Could use some more inline citations. Needs a good copyedit-- found instances where people were mentioned for the first time with just their last name and no context, who are they? -- also places where the wording is awkward or even words missing. Trivia items need to be worked into prose or removed. Also, do we know why they turned on him and killed him? Just states that they did, but not why the change of heart. Also sometimes not clear who's directing events "he was sent" -- who sent him? The Portugese crown? --plange 04:25, 13 October 2006 (UTC)