Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Failed log/April 2008
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The list was not promoted 02:25, 1 May 2008.
[edit] List of United States Army four-star generals
This is quite honestly the most comprehensive list I have ever seen on the subject. All full generals in the history of the United States Army are listed, with birth and death year, source of commision, date of promotion to 4 star rank, assignments held as a full general with dates, blood relation to other four star officers, relief of commands, and government service, if any, after retirement from the military. It is also extremely well sourced, and a quick look shows only one redlink for the subjects on the list.--Nobunaga24 (talk) 00:00, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- Are there no inline citations?
- I'm not completely sure, but are images required for FLCs?
- Your lead is a bit short. Maybe at least an explanation of what a four-star general is would be nice.
- As per the MOS, you need to use a non-breaking space ( ) for "compound items in which numerical and non-numerical elements are separated by a space". Just for starters, I think you need one right after the first number. You also shouldn't start a sentence with a number ("193 were originally promoted...")
- Use n-dashs, not hyphens.
Noble Story (talk) 02:17, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
Phew, some list. Could do with having gone to peer review first in my opinion, as there are some clear WP:MOS violations. However, some comments...
- Please expand the lead per WP:LEAD.
- Use en-dashes per WP:DASH.
- Place citations immediately after punctuation where possible per WP:CITE.
- Any logic behind the table splits or just convenience?
- "an equivalent rank in a precursor organization" this makes no sense to me (admittedly a non-expert in four star US generals...)
- " 3 via other sources." - that needs explanation.
- I'd make the columns for each table the same width so they have a common appearance.
- Did I miss where you said what * meant?
- Be consistent with left/right aligns, and the dates could use the {{dts}} template.
- Explain USN, ADM.
- Institutes of commission need to be expanded before they're abbreviated.
- Timelines are hugely confusing to non-experts. Acronym-tastic and what do they add? A preamble to the images would be essential.
- See also section is in the wrong place.
That's a start, right now, since there's a lot to do here, it's an oppose. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:52, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Withdraw nomination
- At the request of the page creator, I'd like to withdraw this nomination. He would prefer more time to work on it and would like to get a peer review first, which for some reason I bypassed (it was Monday morning, I wasn't thinking straight). What the process is for that, I have no idea...--Nobunaga24 (talk) 07:08, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] List of storms in the 2006 Atlantic hurricane season
Based off of the 2003 Atlantic hurricane season and 2005 Atlantic hurricane season, I rewrote 2006 Atlantic hurricane season with the same format, splitting the storms section into its own list. While there might be very minor stuff that I can't see, I think after a few months of on-and-off work, this meets the FL criteria. If not, I will be happy to address any issues that come up. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 21:51, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
Hello Julian, good work as usual, so my comments are here:
- No image for the lead looks a little odd.
- References (currently [23] and [38]) need to be templated.
- " It started " I'd go back to "The season started..."
- "These dates conventionally delimit ..." can this be cited?
- " for 2 indirect " two.
- "least 7 people " seven, and why "at least"?
- The little Storms key/box thingy, what is it? To a non expert it's not very enlightening!
- Why are "main" articles placed in bold? I think the template should be modified to not bold, there's no reason for using bold here. Is there any reason why the normal {{main}} template isn't used in these articles?
- "45 mph.[6]" needs conversion.
- Why the bullet points and in-line linking?
- "19 foot seas (5.97 m)" shouldn't this be "19 feet (5.97 m) seas"?
- "10 feet " needs conversion.
- Merge last to paras of Enersto to avoid short paras.
- " 405 miles " needs conversion.
- "1000 miles " ditto.
- 4 injuries, 1 injury - four, one.
- Link relevant Ryder Cup
That's it for now, mainly trivial stuff. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:55, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Good comments and suggestions, as usual, thanks! As for the storms box thing, it's in the List of storms in the 2003 Atlantic hurricane season and the List of storms in the 2005 Atlantic hurricane season, so I fiqured I'd stick it in. I took it out, because your'e right, it really doesn't do much good. As for the bold main article links, most if not all of the tropical cyclone and season articles write them that way, so it's became a kind of custom, I would guess. I'm working on the other stuff in a different tab, so I should be done fixing this stuff in a half hour. Thanks, Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 12:18, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oh, and as for the bullet-point in-line linking, that's another thing that the Tropical Cyclone WikiProject does for all of the season articles and season lists. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 12:23, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, I saw that you hurricane guys use your own template instead of {{main}} - any reason why? The only difference I could see is that it's bold. Which is a little odd.... 12:24, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- It is a little odd, I guess. Remember, I didn't write the guidelines, I just follow by them. ;) Anyway, I think I got everything, so it should be good. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 12:29, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Of course, Julian, I understand, don't shoot the messenger, right?! Yeah, things like that which are project based I will probably keep pointing out until the projects in question fall in line with the general manual of style, seems strange for all of Wikipedia bar the Hurricane project to use {{main}}... Still, not to worry. I'll check over the article again shortly. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:35, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Well, the Tropical Cyclone Project has more than 100 pieces of featured content, so who's complaining about the guidelines? ;-) Anyway, the template that we use is {{hurricane main}}. Do you think it's OK to keep them, or would you suggest just switching to {{main}}? Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 12:39, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Well, WP:FOOTBALL have that and more!! ;-) I won't withold support, but it'd be useful to understand why your project uses its own, non-MOS template. Fancy starting a discussion up? The Rambling Man (talk) 13:08, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Sure, I'll start a discussion up to the project page. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 13:11, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Alright, discussion started, feel free to comment Regarding the article, do you think anything else needs to be done? Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 13:16, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Sure, I'll start a discussion up to the project page. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 13:11, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Well, WP:FOOTBALL have that and more!! ;-) I won't withold support, but it'd be useful to understand why your project uses its own, non-MOS template. Fancy starting a discussion up? The Rambling Man (talk) 13:08, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Well, the Tropical Cyclone Project has more than 100 pieces of featured content, so who's complaining about the guidelines? ;-) Anyway, the template that we use is {{hurricane main}}. Do you think it's OK to keep them, or would you suggest just switching to {{main}}? Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 12:39, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Of course, Julian, I understand, don't shoot the messenger, right?! Yeah, things like that which are project based I will probably keep pointing out until the projects in question fall in line with the general manual of style, seems strange for all of Wikipedia bar the Hurricane project to use {{main}}... Still, not to worry. I'll check over the article again shortly. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:35, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- It is a little odd, I guess. Remember, I didn't write the guidelines, I just follow by them. ;) Anyway, I think I got everything, so it should be good. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 12:29, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, I saw that you hurricane guys use your own template instead of {{main}} - any reason why? The only difference I could see is that it's bold. Which is a little odd.... 12:24, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Actually "working" at the moment, I'll get back to you! The Rambling Man (talk) 13:25, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
More
- Still don't think the in-line linking is good for featured content.
- Nor the bold See also but that won't kill it for me!
- CHC is used without explanation.
- Refs 28 and 30 need to use the {{cite web}} template.
The Rambling Man (talk) 16:53, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Alright, I can do most of those, but if you look at all FA and FL tropical cyclone season articles, they all have in-line links to the Tropical Cyclone Report and such. Also, I don't know what I can do about the bolding, because the majority of the WP:WPTC thinks we should maintain consistency with what we have always done. So, I'll see what I can do. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 00:16, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
- Done! Thanks for the suggestions. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 00:29, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
- Alright, I can do most of those, but if you look at all FA and FL tropical cyclone season articles, they all have in-line links to the Tropical Cyclone Report and such. Also, I don't know what I can do about the bolding, because the majority of the WP:WPTC thinks we should maintain consistency with what we have always done. So, I'll see what I can do. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 00:16, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
- Support - while I'm concerned over Wikiprojects using their own pseudo-templates in contravention of the general manual of style, this is not the place to get all uptight about it. My major concerns have been addressed and I'm happy to see this become a featured list. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:34, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
- As usual, thank you for your helpful comments and suggestions. I'll ask some people about those templates, and I'll see what I can do. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 17:36, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry to rain on the parade a little - but 11 dead links? Surely this needs rectifying? weburiedoursecretsinthegarden 19:22, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
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Huh? Those links worked a couple days ago when I checked. That is odd. I guess I have to find new sources, or wait for that bad website to work. Anyway, thanks for the comment. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 19:40, 19 April 2008 (UTC)- Fixed. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 01:37, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Support -
I will fully support once the article's dead links are fixed.Article now meets standards for a support.Mitch32contribs 19:02, 23 April 2008 (UTC)- Alright, I replaced or fixed all of the dead links. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 01:37, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose. There are a few sections that don't end with a reference. Be sure every paragraph ends with a ref. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:03, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- Alright, I think I added a reference to the end of every paragraph. Do you support, oppose? Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 01:10, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- If I have to decide, I oppose. Overall writing is weak. On June 10, an area of disturbed weather associated with a broad low pressure area off the coast of Belize organized over the warm waters of the Caribbean Sea and became the first tropical depression of the season. Just for example, there are redundancies, unexplained terms (and un-Wikilinked), and too many words for a single thought. Either split it into two sentences, or organize it better. That said, given that the first sentence in the article is poorly worded, I have concerns for the writing of the rest of the article, and indeed the first sentence of each of the remaining sections aren't the best they can be. I notice the writing wasn't changed at all from the original season article, which heightens my oppose. When the season was active, the storm summaries were being written at the same time, leaving the sections with a jumbled feel. The sourcing is weak in the article, with several sections having inappropriate referencing (first paragraph of Alberto is all sourced to one single discussion, though all of the info in the first para is clearly not in that ref). Also, the ref you put at the end of the Alberto section is inappropriate, since the TCR does not mention any damage totals. The section for Helene seems inappropriately short, given that Debby's is just as long, despite the latter lasting much shorter time and not being nearly as strong. The article needs a lot of work, IMO. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 03:21, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- I did exactly the same thing you did to the List of storms in the 2003 Atlantic hurricane season. So, it was fine when you did it, but you're going to oppose when I did it? Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 12:55, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Also, I don't see what you want to be further explained or Wikilinked. And what is jumbled about it? Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 13:08, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- JC, the difference is that I rewrote the sections before splitting it! This FLC is about this list, not about any other lists, so my objection remains. That first sentence I mentioned was 38 words long, with only one comma when I pointed it out. Since this list was once an article (and that it has a significant amount of prose), it needs to be well-written. A few other writing comments- a vigorous tropical wave formed off the coast of Africa - tropical waves generally don't form off the coast of Africa. At 3:15 p.m. EDT (1915 UTC) on August 24, - any reason so specific? In the Florence section, "science had prevailed" - is there any reason that quote was included? It appears it's the only quote in the article, and it doesn't seem NPOV, since it seems biased toward forecasters. As Florence moved away, a low-pressure system gradually became more organized northeast of the Lesser Antilles - this is very awkward how it opens the entire section. Outside of the writing, the sourcing is weak, as pointed out before. Double check the refs in the article, since many are to a single discussion that don't source the previous section. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:25, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Well, I gave it a copyedit and fixed all of the issues you pointed out, I made sure all of the references agreed with the information, I made sure everything is factually accurite. I'm sure you'll find more things to complain about, thought. :P Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 18:33, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- It's a little better, but I'm still opposed. For example, the entire section on Isaac is sourced by a single CHC statement that does not talk about the early history of the storm. The second half of the second paragraph on Gordon is sourced by a single NHC advisory; said advisory was released before the storm dissipated, so how does the ref also cover information that happened several days later when it was extratropical? The Florence section goes way too much into the early portion of its storm history. The last sentence, which is unsourced, jumbles the peak intensity and extratropical transition without going into detail of impacts. Additionally, six lines in the Florence section are referenced to a single NHC discussion that doesn't even cover those six lines. I could go on, but given all of these problems, and how many problems that were unnoticed until FLC, means I am opposed to this being considered the very best work of Wikipedia. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 21:18, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
- Well, I gave it a copyedit and fixed all of the issues you pointed out, I made sure all of the references agreed with the information, I made sure everything is factually accurite. I'm sure you'll find more things to complain about, thought. :P Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 18:33, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- JC, the difference is that I rewrote the sections before splitting it! This FLC is about this list, not about any other lists, so my objection remains. That first sentence I mentioned was 38 words long, with only one comma when I pointed it out. Since this list was once an article (and that it has a significant amount of prose), it needs to be well-written. A few other writing comments- a vigorous tropical wave formed off the coast of Africa - tropical waves generally don't form off the coast of Africa. At 3:15 p.m. EDT (1915 UTC) on August 24, - any reason so specific? In the Florence section, "science had prevailed" - is there any reason that quote was included? It appears it's the only quote in the article, and it doesn't seem NPOV, since it seems biased toward forecasters. As Florence moved away, a low-pressure system gradually became more organized northeast of the Lesser Antilles - this is very awkward how it opens the entire section. Outside of the writing, the sourcing is weak, as pointed out before. Double check the refs in the article, since many are to a single discussion that don't source the previous section. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:25, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- If I have to decide, I oppose. Overall writing is weak. On June 10, an area of disturbed weather associated with a broad low pressure area off the coast of Belize organized over the warm waters of the Caribbean Sea and became the first tropical depression of the season. Just for example, there are redundancies, unexplained terms (and un-Wikilinked), and too many words for a single thought. Either split it into two sentences, or organize it better. That said, given that the first sentence in the article is poorly worded, I have concerns for the writing of the rest of the article, and indeed the first sentence of each of the remaining sections aren't the best they can be. I notice the writing wasn't changed at all from the original season article, which heightens my oppose. When the season was active, the storm summaries were being written at the same time, leaving the sections with a jumbled feel. The sourcing is weak in the article, with several sections having inappropriate referencing (first paragraph of Alberto is all sourced to one single discussion, though all of the info in the first para is clearly not in that ref). Also, the ref you put at the end of the Alberto section is inappropriate, since the TCR does not mention any damage totals. The section for Helene seems inappropriately short, given that Debby's is just as long, despite the latter lasting much shorter time and not being nearly as strong. The article needs a lot of work, IMO. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 03:21, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Alright, I think I added a reference to the end of every paragraph. Do you support, oppose? Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 01:10, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] List of Minnesota Wild players
Another NHL player list to nominate. It's fairly similar to List of Columbus Blue Jackets players in that both teams joined the league in the same year and have comparable numbers of players. Comments welcome. Kaiser matias (talk) 01:48, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- Avoid wikilinking the bold title in the lead, per WP:LEAD
- Those two pictures of the goalies make the table shift half-way down the screen
- "1999–00" should be "1999–2000"
- "2000–01, then "2000–2001". Be consistent
That's all I can see. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 07:05, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
- All fixed up. Kaiser matias (talk) 19:09, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- Don't put bold links in the lead per WP:LEAD#Bold title.
- Removed
- Says it was founded in 2000 but joined the NHL for the 1999-2000 season. The last sentence of the first para in the lead and the first sentence of the second para have significant overlap - I'd consider reworking it a bit. Oh, and "eight" goaltenders, not 8.
- Fixed
- Don't force image sizes per WP:MOS#Images - use
upright
as your size parameter. And put the images in the right section - the first goaltender overlaps a section boundary.
- Don't quite understand the size issue your talking about, but removed the two images. There weren't any problems on my screen, and were in the proper spot, but are gone regardless.
- References 2 and 3 need full stops.
- Done
- Image captions, when complete sentences, need full stops.
- Done
- "during 2007-08 season" all instances of this should use the en-dash as separator.
- Same for 2006-07, should read as 2006–07. The whole of the Skaters table seems to need to be remedied.
- All fixed
- Pity you haven't got more images for such a lengthy table...
- It is a problem I'll agree, but is all that are available. One of the reasons why I waited this long to nominate it was to find more images to use.
- Seasons in the table are e.g. 2000-2001 while seasons in the lead are 2000-01. Be consitent.
- Is consistent now
- Empty cells in the Goaltender key table should be removed.
- Thats there partly for uniformity, and partly because I haven't a clue how to change it.
That's all from me for the moment. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:08, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
- I've addressed all your concerns. Kaiser matias (talk) 19:09, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment Many links go to redirect pages. --Krm500 (talk) 11:06, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- Do you think you could give an example? Kaiser matias (talk) 23:43, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- That's mostly names with diacritics: Peter Bartos, Niklas Backstrom. Gimmetrow 06:30, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Do you think you could give an example? Kaiser matias (talk) 23:43, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment calling the team "the" Minnesota Wild seems a colloquialism, borne out by the list title. Suggest dropping all the "the"s! --Dweller (talk) 15:40, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
Oppose—Criterion 2a and the requirement for "professional standards of writing".
- Is NHL Canadian or US? I think it should inserted just before the first mention, since many readers won't remember that Minnesota is a US state.
- "players that have played"— "who"; they're not robots. Players ... played is a little tedious. "participated"? "appeared in"?
- In both the lead and the tables, there's inconsistent use of two- and four-digit closing year ranges. Space limitations suggest that two would be preferable, and neater to boot.
- MOS breach: "from 2000–2001"—nope, when one preposition is spelt out, we need "to" in the middle.
- MOS breach: hyphen used in a year range (at least three instances).
- Should "References" be "External references"? Unsure. I assume there's a good reason that the three titles of the three links there are identical. Shouldn't the owner of the second sourced site be the NHOF?
- "The Wild have a rotating captaincy, with a different player being named captain each month." --> "The Wild have a monthly rotating captaincy."
- Just a visitor's query: why do the keys have to be in a tiny font? It's not as though there's a space crisis there.
- "the first year of the season of the player's first game and the last year of the season of the player's last game" of the ... of the ... Can it be straightened out? "the year of the player's first game"? (I may be suffering from non-expert status, though.)
- The lead does seem a little short and choppy—three parastubs. 2a: "a concise lead section that summarizes the scope of the list and prepares the reader for the higher level of detail in sections subsequent to the lead." Was the information it contains selected arbitrarily? To what extent should a brief overview of the topic be given in a list (as opposed to the related article)? I'd have thought a bit more of the big-picture; it seems to be pitched at experts alone. Is the team a notable one in the US? Capture general readers' interest? Or tell me whether FLCs do not have to be stand-alone pages with a sense of wholeness, but are always assumed to be arrived at from (and dependent on) a related article? TONY (talk) 17:16, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Support with two caveats:
- Shouldn't use the abbreviation "Stats", use statistics
- Pierre-Marc Bouchard has spent his entire NHL career with the Wild, joining the team in 2002. should be reworded, maybe something like Bouchard joined the Wild in 2002, and has spent his entire NHL career with that team.
- Tuf-Kat (talk) 19:51, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 15:22, 26 April 2008.
[edit] List of islets of Caroline Island
User:Viriditas recently suggested that I nominate this as a featured list; it was created in support of Caroline Island, which has been a featured article since 2006. -- Sethant (talk) 20:44, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment What's with the strange background colors? Gary King (talk) 20:50, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Wikipedia often uses background colors to create contrast and enhance readability (see the top of this page, for instance), and that's what has been done with this list. -- Sethant (talk) 21:18, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- List of Presidents of the United States makes a great use of background colors. For this list, I assumed that colors were related (i.e. one color indiciated something) but from your reply, it seems like that is not the case. I think that would decrease readability rather than increase it. At the very least, I would suggest to use a lighter color. Some off the top of my head are #eef and #fee, which I believe are light and 'warm' colors.
- I would also consider adding headers to the last two columns that don't have one.
- Left-align the second last column with the large paragraphs. Gary King (talk) 21:20, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Wikipedia often uses background colors to create contrast and enhance readability (see the top of this page, for instance), and that's what has been done with this list. -- Sethant (talk) 21:18, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments from - MILK'S FAVORITE COOKIE (Talk)
- The article currently has no citations.
- The lead title needs to be bolded and the links should be removed per WP:LEAD
- The closest thing to the article title in the lead was already bolded. I see nothing in WP:LEAD that prohibits links with the lead section; in fact, most Wikipedia articles and list contain links within the lead. - Sethant (talk) 21:18, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- They shouldn't contain links in the bold part of the lead. That's what the WP:MOS says, specifically at WP:LEAD#Bold title. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:35, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
- The closest thing to the article title in the lead was already bolded. I see nothing in WP:LEAD that prohibits links with the lead section; in fact, most Wikipedia articles and list contain links within the lead. - Sethant (talk) 21:18, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Some/All of the images should have captions. What is the lead image?
- MILK'S FAVORITE COOKIE (Talk) 21:10, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- I'd prefer to see the title of the list in the lead, bolded, rather than the current opening.
- Image caption for lead is a fragment so lose the full stop. And check all other images.
- Link islet somewhere.
- None of the lead is cited, for example the claim of 39 islets. Can this be proved?
- "the most distinguishing feature of each islet" - according to whom?
- "speak to prior human habitation," - perhaps my BritEng is the problem here, but I guess we'd say "prove" or "hint to", definitely not "speak to".
- Convert the areas from hectares to acres (or square miles, whatever) so the Imperial-ists can understand.
- 18m, 14m , these should be converted to Imperial too.
- " only abour 300 m " - typo, use the convert template.
- Motu links to a dab page.
- Why the occasional link to 10^4, 10^5 etc for the areas?
- Why is the table multi-coloured? Does it mean something?
- Some of the entries appear left-aligned, some are centrally aligned, it should be consistent.
I have to oppose at the moment, it's a confusing list, it has a few MOS issues as above. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:34, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose Very confusing, no in-line citations, MoS issues, odd table, etc. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 18:42, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] List of Los Angeles County Sheriff's Department officers killed in the line of duty
SELF-NOM For those people who are looking at this thinking, "isn't this already nominated?", the Los Angeles County Sheriff's Department is in charge of the law enforcement of Unincorporated areas of Los Angeles County, and also for the many incorporated cities who have contracted the Department. They also provide Bailiffs for the courthouses in LA County, operate the county's jails, and have their own training academy, which is also contracted to train smaller police departments. In contrast, the LAPD is in charge of law enforcement in the city of Los Angeles only.
So this is another fallen officers list, comparable I think to the List of Los Angeles Police Department officers killed in the line of duty, which was nominated some days ago. As usual, all comments and concerns will be addressed. Thank you. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 05:55, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- Difficult with a short lead but avoid squashing text between images per WP:MOS#Images.
- "recognised" - US article, run with a zee here.
- You have STARS but never use it, any need for the abbreviation?
- " This includes law enforcement officers who, while in an off-duty capacity, act in response to a law violation, or is driving to or from work.[1]" - officers (plural) versus "or is" (singular)...
- Put (LASD) after the second time you use the expanded version (so it's a) not in the bold and b) the last time you use the expanded version).
- Sacramento is linked twice in quick succession.
- "Whittier, CA." - avoid CA, just use California so us non-US centric types get it.
- What does 1' mean? (in Little's row)
- Tenure doesn't sort properly for me.
- Ref 10 needs work and be consistent with the use of pp or not for pages.
- Support my concerns addressed. Good work. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:55, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- Support Looks like a good list, great work. Gary King (talk) 07:48, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Support This list looks to be of high quality and in my opinion it is worthy of Featured Status. --Mifter (talk) 15:40, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose for many some of the same layout issues as in the other list.
- Cause of deaths seem too generic, and I'd rather see short summaries of each entry to give the "story" when few will ever be notable enough to have their own article. If not in a field at the end, maybe a single merged cell under each entry (similar to how episode articles have summaries under the cells with their basic info).
- The notes are confusing tacked in a column at the end, along with the codes and color-coding. It doesn't make it very easy to read or comprehend entries and causes readers to have to keep scrolling up and down to find out what each means.
- The list says it is a list of "officers killed in the line of duty" so why are there entries for people who died of a heart attack? That isn't being killed, it is dying of natural causes. And one entry died during surgery on his knee. His receiving the injury to his knee on the job doesn't mean his dying during the surgery is "being killed in the line of duty." Another who died in a train crash on the way to work doesn't seem like being "killed" in the line of duty either. I realize the criteria in the list seems to be just to be on the official list, but if that's all it is, we aren't doing much but replicating the official list.
- Minor note: See also should be above Refs.
Collectonian (talk) 17:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose, as before:
- The criticism of the other list did not seem to have any effect on this there is still the use of color to emphasize the unimportant, such as the differentiation of those who died on the same day as the incident and those who died on later days. Much more important, there is still the hazy criteria. Unlike the previous commentator, I am personally willing to accept people who died during knee surgery after an accident actually on the line of duty, and someone dying of a heart attack during a chase (for example) is also OK with me--but these disagreements highlight the uncertain criteria. In particular I am not willing to accept as reasonable the department's definition of line of duty as including traveling to and from work--I regard that as a dubious publicity device, possibly to increase survivor's benefits. I see no reason why we should accept the designation as significant used by a source with an obvious COI in increasing the impressiveness of the list--that is not exercising NPOV or even common sense.
- Again, the details are unsourced. We need to assume the proper research of the authority we're using, and almost all the information that might be of value to a reader is eliminated. I see, for example, someone who died of gunfire, but not a work. I'd like to know more about it--was it a domestic dispute, or was it perhaps something more distinctive for better or worse--did he get into a extra-curricular gunfight, or was he surprised by a robber, or whatever?There's a fall at work--was it actually during a chase (as frequently occurs in the movies), or did he misstep in the station house stairway, or what? Car accidents have a very different meaning if they occur during a police action or otherwise; struck by vehicle--was this a by a suspect, or an accident at a traffic stop? Note G is an example of the sort of person who does not belong on this list. But note A sounds fascinating, and is certainly worth a full article--there must be full accessible sources for this. and
- Notes D and F are good examples of the type of information that's wanted. Now get similar information for all the others, and then propose as a featured list. Ity will then be a very good one! DGG (talk) 18:57, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 15:22, 26 April 2008.
[edit] List of acquisitions by Apple Inc.
I am self-nominating this article. This article is based on List of acquisitions by Google, a recently promoted list that I also worked on. Gary King (talk) 20:58, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
- It looks pretty good to me, but I have to ask, did they not make any acquisitions before 1996? Lovelac7 21:34, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
- Since Apple has been a hardware company from its founding to early 2000s, they hired other companies to build their computer parts and then assembled the parts themselves, therefore there was very little need to acquire other companies. It is only recently that they have had to acquire companies in order to quickly expand into the software industry. Gary King (talk) 21:43, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments Just 2 little ones
- Your above reply is interesting and wouldn't be detrimental to the article if it was included.
- Does "Inc." have to be included every time after the bold lead and wikilink?
-- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 22:48, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Nothing else to add, so support. Another fine list. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 23:19, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Support I just made some edits to the lead, and I think it's a quality list that meets all the criteria. Tuf-Kat (talk) 18:16, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
Image caption is a fragment so lose the full stop. It's also not a good description of the image itself, just the postal address of the company (which is interesting but could be explained).- Forgive me but this may be a backlash against modern US English - is "headquarter" a verb nowadays? Like "headquartered"...
- If it's a problem I can change it, but this says that it's acceptable. Gary King (talk) 20:30, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
"and hired other companies to build parts" reads clumsily, parts of what? What did they actually supply?Why is Chairman capitalised?"a large percentage of these companies are based in or around the San Francisco Bay Area. " - that info isn't proved clearly in this list.You use three different ways to express US dollars and link them all. Pick one and stick to it!I'd make ref's unsortable and make value sortable.Proximity doesn't link to a company.
That's it for me. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:35, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- As per previous concerns, only 4 of the 13 previous company names aren't redirects to other products. It's misleading and I'd like it to be fixed before I can support. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:17, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose from Collectonian (talk · contribs)
- entire lead is almost completely unreferenced
- Table is using international format while prose uses American
- Needs to be American or ISO, but not international in the table
- Are you talking about dates? I'm using {{dts}} to sort the column correctly, and it formats the dates accordingly so I don't control that in the article. Gary King (talk) 18:26, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yes :) Collectonian (talk) 18:31, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- I'd prefer to continue using {{dts}} to add sort functionality to that column. Maybe the better question should be how to make that template follow the same date standards that are used in each article? We should probably tackle that rather than this on an article-by-article basis, because the template is used in a few hundred articles. Gary King (talk) 18:34, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yes :) Collectonian (talk) 18:31, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- Are you talking about dates? I'm using {{dts}} to sort the column correctly, and it formats the dates accordingly so I don't control that in the article. Gary King (talk) 18:26, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- Table seems incomplete with so many values missing. If its not readily available, maybe drop the column all together.
- What is country referencing? The country the acquired company was in?
- Last item's ref is off center
- Fixed. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:37, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- Lead prose seems stilted, confusing, and out of center. The explanation on the table formatting should be the last thing in the lead, with the rest covering the topic. Copyediting would be good.
- As someone else pointed out, prose says 13, able has 14 listings :P
- Fixed. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:37, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- Why a picture of the Apple headquarters? I doubt all 14 companies were moved to the building, so why use that instead of something like the Apple logo.
Collectonian (talk) 16:38, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose Have to agree with Tony (commenting elsewhere) that the prose in the lead is poor. The quality of English isn't "professional", is way too wordy and repetitive, it contradicts itself and is imprecise in places.
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- The first sentence and the first clause of the second sentence contradict each other. Apple has always been both a hardware and software company.
- Apple no more "hired other companies to build computer parts" than I hired Tesco to put milk into cartons. In fact, the examples you give (CPUs, memory and disc drives) are very much commodity components that were almost certainly not specially made for Apple.
- Saying "Apple assembled these parts into computers" places them about the same level as any number of bit-player PC computer builders. Apple designed computers.
- "giving the company little reason to acquire other corporations" I couldn't find this in your sources, but didn't look hard (and couldn't read one). I don't believe this is true and suspect it is OR. Even if you can source it, it is opinion that I suspect is not in the majority.
- "Beginning in the early 2000s, however, Apple has begun creating computer software" Awful English, I'm afraid. Apple always wrote its own operating systems and a fair amount of the associated software.
- The circular story of Steve Jobs and Apple is not well explained.
- "headquartered" !!
- Looking at just one acquisition makes me doubt the list is accurate. The Raycer entry says 2nd Nov 1999 and $20 million. The source is The Register a tech tabloid that isn't always reliable. An update on 5th Nov from The Register say's it is "all but done" for $15 million and that Monday (8th) will probably be the date. You need to find a reliable source that confirms the date, the amount and rather than speculate on what Apple might gain or do with the purchase, should state what it actually did with the purchase.
- Colin°Talk 19:19, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Problems should be resolved now. I've switched out iffy references for more reliable ones, such as NYT, WSJ, CNET, etc. Gary King (talk) 23:16, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Lead prose is still choppy and the final paragraph tedious. I just checked two more names: Proximity and Fingerworks. Read your sources. Those dates are wrong. It isn't even certain that Fingerworks, the company, was actually bought. It shouldn't be this easy to find mistakes. Colin°Talk 18:55, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
- I've cleaned up the lead a bit more. I've removed FingerWorks and used a new reference for Proximity. In my defense, this was the first 'acquisition' list I built and Apple is also known for being secretive about its business dealings; for my other acquisition lists, the information regarding acquisitions is more transparent and is communicated through official press releases. Gary King (talk) 19:33, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
- Have you checked the SEC filings? While they are secretive, even they have to file those being publicly traded, and such filings will usually include information on acquisitions. I've found SEC Info to be useful for pulling those up. Here is their page for Apple: http://www.secinfo.com/$/SEC/Registrant.asp?CIK=320193. Might help some. Collectonian (talk) 19:46, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
- I've looked to there as a last resort, because a press release would be many times easier to read and use. I searched SEC Info for Apple and FingerWorks before, but only came up with the lawsuit that a company put forward, with Apple Inc. and FingerWorks as defendants. Also, I think that NeXT was the only company acquired by Apple that was publicly traded. Gary King (talk) 19:51, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
- Have you checked the SEC filings? While they are secretive, even they have to file those being publicly traded, and such filings will usually include information on acquisitions. I've found SEC Info to be useful for pulling those up. Here is their page for Apple: http://www.secinfo.com/$/SEC/Registrant.asp?CIK=320193. Might help some. Collectonian (talk) 19:46, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
- I've cleaned up the lead a bit more. I've removed FingerWorks and used a new reference for Proximity. In my defense, this was the first 'acquisition' list I built and Apple is also known for being secretive about its business dealings; for my other acquisition lists, the information regarding acquisitions is more transparent and is communicated through official press releases. Gary King (talk) 19:33, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
- Lead prose is still choppy and the final paragraph tedious. I just checked two more names: Proximity and Fingerworks. Read your sources. Those dates are wrong. It isn't even certain that Fingerworks, the company, was actually bought. It shouldn't be this easy to find mistakes. Colin°Talk 18:55, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
- Problems should be resolved now. I've switched out iffy references for more reliable ones, such as NYT, WSJ, CNET, etc. Gary King (talk) 23:16, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 18:08, 24 April 2008.
[edit] List of Boston Red Sox seasons
previous FLC (07:29, 25 February 2008)
Self nomination. I cleaned up the sections and made this more like a FL since the last nom. The lead has also been expanded, and I think this article is ready. STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 12:21, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
Much, much better, and much more what FLs are about. Some specific comments.
First para of lead could use citation, as could the claims over their nickname origins, as could the third paragraph entirely.STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 21:48, 13 April 2008 (UTC)Use WP:MOS#Images for guidance on image sizing. For images other than lead images, just useSTORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 21:35, 13 April 2008 (UTC)thumb
for landscape andthumb|upright
for portraits. Consider moving on of the images into the lead.There's a stray full stop between the key and the table.Get rid of the 2008 row. The lead says it's a list of completed seasons.STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 21:38, 13 April 2008 (UTC)If columns are sortable, they should be useful, sorting on Results when you have things like "Tied for..." isn't useful.STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 21:41, 13 April 2008 (UTC)Games Behind should be Games behind and, also, doesn't sort correctly, probably because of the 1/2 character you use.STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 21:41, 13 April 2008 (UTC)Why is Canceled in capitals?STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 21:39, 13 April 2008 (UTC)And what is the relevance of italics? It's not clear.STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 21:39, 13 April 2008 (UTC)Image captions, if fragments, shouldn't have full stops.You're using an image which appears to be at WP:CSD. It needs to go.- Note 9 should use an en-dash.
- I don't see the need for one. Could you please be more specific? STORMTRACKER 94
Go Irish! 22:00, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
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Now it's note 13, where you have a page range, it needs to use the en-dash not the hyphen to separate. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:05, 14 April 2008 (UTC)- Milk's favorite Cookie 18:52, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
Where do you actually get these stats from? Do you have a general reference? It's not clear.STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 21:56, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
So, oppose for now, but these can all be fixed. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:58, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Remove spaces before citations per WP:CITE.STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 20:09, 15 April 2008 (UTC)At least have the wins and losses sortable.STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 20:08, 15 April 2008 (UTC)- Consider the use of the {{sort}} template for the Games behind column.
Avoid the use of the small text at the top of the table in the key, not needed.MLB should be in parentheses after its first use so people understand the acronym.STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 20:11, 15 April 2008 (UTC)- Where is AL expanded?
- American League. I'm not sure if this is what you mean, though. STORMTRACKER 94 Go Irish! 20:14, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
Some more to deal with. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:31, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose I am confused, very, very confused. Please take a look at Boston Red Sox seasons and explain to me how come we have two lists on the same subject. Also by looking at Category:Major League Baseball teams seasons, I notice that most of the MLB season lists are named just "Team seasons". I am opposing until this confusion is resolved. As a side note, I'd like to add that the table at Boston Red Sox seasons provides a lot more useful information than the table in the nominated list.--Crzycheetah 21:02, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose per Crzycheetah. Peanut4 (talk) 03:27, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 20:55, 23 April 2008.
[edit] List of Gizmondo games
Heres a list I worked on based on the List of Virtual Boy games format, which is featured. I used several different references including IGN, Gamespot, and Modojo.-- Coasttocoast (talk) 01:07, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment The lead is far too short and there should be citations for the cancelled games section. -- Scorpion0422 01:27, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Ok I cited every cancelled game, I extended the lead, long enough? Should every game be cited?-- Coasttocoast (talk) 03:06, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Support Awesome list! Very nicely done. I only have one small suggestions: the publisher values in the General references (IGN, Gamespot, etc), should be wikilinked. Drewcifer (talk) 09:17, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Done -- Coasttocoast (talk) 18:46, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- Why not make the list sortable and remove the "alphabetically" from the lead? All columns would work really well, you could split EU and US release dates into separate columns (and thus avoid any MOS issues using those flags) and the table would become inherently more useful. Plus, it'd help fill out the width since right now it's struggling to fill the screen!
- No image at all? Nothing? Seems a shame.
- Not sure why 14 is bold in the lead. You could always start the lead with "This is a list of games for the Gizmondo console." and then carry on to discuss and link stuff like you already have.
- When was the DS launched in the US (for comparison sake, you state when it was released in Europe)?
- I think blue tooth should always be Bluetooth.
- "25,000 unit sold" - units.
- "GPS" - explain to non-experts.
- "multilayer features" what does that mean?
- "The accessibility to purchase Gizmondo games was limited. In the United States, games were only available trough a small numbers ..."
- First sentence is odd - the availability of Gizmondo games was limited?
- trough - I guess this is through.
- No references for the claims in the lead.
- General ref "Gamespot Gizmondo game datebase" - database?
- "Many unreleased games were playable at E3 and at CES. Many screenshots of cancelled games were also released." does this have a reference?
So I have to oppose at the moment with so many concerns. I'm sure they can be remedied and please let me know when you'd like me to look the article again. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:47, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
- Withdrawal After re-checking the list I found out that the sources I used contradict eachother. For example IGN states that Motorcross 2005 was developed Fathammer, but Gamespot says the game was developed by Housemarque. IGN and Gamespot are both reliable sources so I don't who is right. Almost every game on the list is contradicted by different sources. -- Coasttocoast (talk) 22:39, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 15:43, 23 April 2008.
[edit] Green Wing (series 2)
Having successfully promoted Green Wing (series 1) to featured list, I am trying to do the same with the second series. I have followed the same prinicples as I did with the previous list and I believe that this list is now of the same quality. ISD (talk) 11:21, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- Sally Phillips has two l's in her surname.
- " in the episodes that he appears in" - "in the episodes in which he appears"
- "Other than Harley, other Green Wing writers make cameos. These include Fay Rusling and Oriane Messina.[10]" merge... "..make cameos, including..."
- "was received less well " clumsy...
- "one- off" rogue space.
- "who steals some of Mac's semen and makes herself pregent." typo and exactly how did this occur?!
- " so he tries to trick her " -who, Guy or Alan?
- "while still trying to convince Joanna that he is having it. " reads strangely to me.
- "and make her fly" what does this mean?
- " takes the tape of Sue" off Sue?
- " aSwiss Army Knife" space required.
- "of what he thinks is her favourite thing." what was it actually?
- " trains station" singular train.
That's it from me. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:44, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- Can the stubby sentences "The second series was considered worse than the first by critics." and "The second series was considered worse than series one." be expanded?
- "Amongst" sounds archaic compared to "Among"
- Cathy Prior's review relates only to the first episode, not the series
- Add a wikilink to Dada
-- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 17:00, 28 March, 2008
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The list was not promoted 00:36, 22 April 2008.
[edit] Tiësto discography
Self-nominator I'm nominating this article for featured article because it meets the FAC criteria and is as complete as it needs to be to show the discography of mentioned artist. Lonelysoulq (talk) 23:08, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
- Note I think you may be looking for featured list candidates; the current article features no prose and does not meet the featured artice requirements. BuddingJournalist 23:11, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- WP:Lead is nowhere near large enough
- Please follow the examples of other discographies at Wikipedia:Featured lists#Music for the layout of albums, compilations and singles. (The singles table that is already there is the way to go)
- Wow.. super huge singles table. It goes off the edge of my screen, and now I have a hoizontal scroll bar on every wikipedia page I look at
- What do the acronyms in the US charts mean? Especially the one that isn't linked.
- My personal opinion — I know others disagree with me — "B sides" shouldn't be included, it's a discography, not a songography. I don't see every album track listed...
- Don't use small writing that is too small for poor-sighted people to read
- Instruments isn't complete; it says "some of", and fails the criteria 1b
- References do not attribute accessdate or work. For help, use WP:Citation templates
That's all. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 00:08, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
Oppose For all of the reasons above, as well as a general disregard for established discography style. Check out any of the other FL discogs to see what I mean. Drewcifer (talk) 00:29, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
Oppose Per all of the above. Burningclean [speak] 03:41, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 00:36, 22 April 2008.
[edit] List of Los Angeles Police Department officers killed in the line of duty
My next lists were going to be season articles for Degrassi Junior High, but I'm getting really annoyed with that whole thing at the moment. Instead, here's something that isn't media or sports related.
So, yeah. A list of LAPD cops killed in the line of duty. Every cop is listed, some, especially the more recent ones, have specfic references, the others can be referenced by the three general references given. If I'm forced to I suppose I can make a trip to the county library in downtown LA, which has archived the Los Angeles Herald, but I'd rather not. I've tried to keep the Lead WP:Neutral, but let me know if it needs tightening, and as always, any other comments and concerns will be addressed. Thank you. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 05:07, 9 April 2008 (UTC) Support as nominator -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:19, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- When I sort by 'time on force', for some reason, Dorris and Schmid come after Villalobos. --Golbez (talk) 16:25, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
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- This is why I hate making sortable tables :) Y Done -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 18:36, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- Not sure you've completely justified your inclusion of the other four individuals who aren't classed as LAPD officers... (same old title vs content argument)
- I can see the two mentioned in the lead who aren't LAPD, not 4, but actually one of them really was part of the LAPD. The 2nd City Marshal in the list was the head of the LAPD (which was founded in 1869) before his murder in 1876, upon which the title Chief was used. I included the one before him as he was also a City Marshal, which was the only law enforcement agency before the LAPD was founded, even though the title was carried over for the first 7 years of operation. Do you have any ideas on a reword? -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 18:38, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- "who isn't " - is not. Avoid these naughty contractions!
- Put (LAPD) after first full use of the expression.
- "such as that for the most recently killed officer, " avoid this - as soon as the next LAPD officer is killed you'll need significant rework. Same for the image caption, I'd just stick to absolute fact rather than timeframing it.
- "..Arnold Schwarzenegger.[7] and featured .." - bad full stop there.
- I'd avoid spaces between notes and refs in the notes column.
- "James H." sorts strangely. As does "William H." and "John M." (that's in Safari by the way).
- Why allow the notes column to sort?
Y Done— forgot to add the code. Hmmm... I can't find the code to add to do this. Can someone point me in the right direction please- I think I've done it using
class=unsortable
in the table heading. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:17, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- I think I've done it using
- "Assault|Vehicular assault" for Beatty needs sorting out.
- 1876 and 1853 don't sort properly in the date of death col.
- That's probably because only their year of death is known. How can this be fixed using {{dts2}}? -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 18:38, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Pratt's six month tenure isn't sorted correctly. Ricardo Lizarraga has a similar issue. As does David Charles Schmid.
- Y Done
- Simmons age in the table is given as 31 while 27 years in the service.
- Y Done — should have been 51
- Notes C to F need references I think.
- As I said above when I nominated, their deaths came either before, or while the internet was in its early years. Also, the Los Angeles Times is notable for ignoring its website readers, and has been slammed for it numerous times. I have to make an 80 mile trip into LA to the only county library that has archived an old local newspaper, alternatively, each officer has a page at the Officer Down site, which I could link to, but I gave the LAPD page at Officer Down as a general reference. It's no hassle to add those, though. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 18:38, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
That's me done! The Rambling Man (talk) 16:57, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Support Detailed, filled with all sorts of information, and utilises innovative ways of organising it, and representing the different kinds of incident, late deaths and so on, and incorporates a useful lead section as well. --SGGH speak! 14:34, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
Oppose I dont think the entire list is encyclopedic, and I notice the FA nomination as I was about to list it for AfD. They have a web site for the purpose, referenced above. I do not think it needs a WP article. DGG (talk) 03:04, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Well, I began creating a few articles for some officers who had been killed. They were deleted, but those deletions were reverted. They were then prodded. After five days, the prod was removed, and the articles still stand. However, as a result of the prods, deletes and reverts, it was suggested that a list would be more suitable, and would be unlikely to be deleted. I don't see why the fact that there is a website which also has the information is a reason not to have the list here. There are plenty of other lists based off of 3 main reference points which still stand. It would have more references, except that the internet dates back maybe 15 years, and the earlier deaths, while reported on in newspapers, aren't available online. If it is absolutely necessary, then I will make the trip to the library in LA which has archived the local newspapers, but I'm not looking forward to that hassle, let me tell you!
- I also added your oppose back in; it had been removed because it was a H2 header, but the oppose still stands. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:09, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry for messing up the format. Here is my view in more detail.
- I am willing to accept the inclusion in an official department list as evidence of the basic facts--obviously not for notability such as would make an individual article, but certainly the basic facts of the name and the date. As for the details of how the person died, that might take the actual news story. And that brings me to the more basic point that :
- These of of very different notability. There is a difference to the public between those killed in traffic accidents and those shot by criminals. One is unfortunate, worthy of commemoration within the department, worthy of a special pension, but not really of public interest, then or now. It's really just the same if a policeman is killed by in a car accident while going to work as if anyone else is. And even slightly more job related, if a policeman is struck by a truck while making a roadside car stop, it is not more noteworthy than if a member of a road repair crew is killed in a similar manner. These are misfortunes common to anyone who works on highways. The public interest and notability for an encyclopedia is the people who are killed while carrying out their duties by criminals, or in some similar manner very specifically job-related to the peculiar aspects of the profession. The drama attaching to this is why people care about the topic. (I'm aware that some of the deaths by traffic and the like may have been directly caused by criminals, such as being run over by the people being stopped for investigation--that's one reason why more exact sourcing is needed.)
- I agree that being killed in a traffic accident isn't as wowish as being shot up by a gangsta, but the National Law Enforcement Officers Memorial states that those deaths (and those happening while off duty) are in the line of duty. Those who have died by being knocked over by a car, or from traffic accidents, both on and off duty, are listed at the LAPD's fallen officer webpage, the California Peace Officer's Memorial etc etc. The websites also indicate how they died. That's why each officer doesn't have their own article, but a list of all of them covers all bases. To include the officers who were killed as a result of someone else's actions, but leave out those who died by some sort of accident would be POVish in my opinion. It isn't a List of murdered LAPD officers, it's those that have died in the line of duty, and the provisions of that statement have been verified in the article. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:15, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- I accept the use of the lists to indicate the basic facts about individuals, but a greater number of the more recent people where there are not specific references should be findable online. This may not be practical immediately, but it should be done relatively soon. I do not think it can be called a FA while this is incomplete. A FA is supposed to have complete sourcing, not a portion of it that still needs to be done. DGG (talk) 17:50, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, the LA Times doesn't keep its articles online once they're about 3 years old, unless it's really big news such as the 94 Northridge earthquake. The LA Daily News is a little better, and that's really it. I will keep Googling though. If there was a way of Googling through newspaper articles from 1998 that have been archived by Wayback, that'd be wonderful, but I don't think there is so it's kind of impossible to search. Each cause of death is given by the three references at the start of the reference section, though. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:15, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- A lot of what you're opposing, however, seems to me to be more to do with the subject of the list, as in importance, rather than the quality of the list, which is what Featured status is about. FL is about presenting all the facts (which this does), verifiable (it is), well written (IMO it is!) and everything else at the Featured list criteria. Each individual death may or may not be on its own notable, but when put together like this, I believe as a whole it is notable. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:15, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from DGG (talk) 17:50, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- The use of color seems inappropriate--color is usually used to highlight something as being particularly distinctive or different. Here it is used merely to indicate a degree of uncertainty or particular minor point about the exact day of death, & its relationship to the event causing it. This really should be done by something like a footnote marker, and asterisk or the like, that would be less conspicuous.
- This one I have less of a problem addressing, although I do feel it helps quickly identify certain things. It's not like different shading isn't being used to identify different causes of death, and I would say that more than one officer dying in a particular incident is distinctive or different. Those who died off duty is also distinctive IMO, especially when the term in the line of duty is used. It's not a list of every officer who died while employed by the agency, after all, which would then call for all those who died of duty, sitting at home watching TV with a beer in hand, for example. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:15, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- since the LAPD & the NLEOMemorial define "in the line of duty" as including those killed in accidents going to and from work, those people are not conceivably significant in an encyclopedic sense. Whatever they think for purposes of publicity or morale, it is not publicly significant, even for article content. Agreed individuals in this sort of list do not have to be individually notable, but they have to have some encyclopedic relevance. Since the currently easily available data does not provide for sorting them out adequately, it is possible that they might have to be included temporarily as a matter of practicality--but I think that dubiousness is enough to disqualify the list for featured status. It actually would take finding true sources to justify placement on the list. The LA Times is available via Proquest back to vol. 1. It is available at UCLA and other UC campuses, & the LA public library--and probably other libraries. (It is also possible that the LAPD maintains an information center with clippings) Doing a featured article takes doing the necessary research. DGG (talk) 18:23, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- This one I have less of a problem addressing, although I do feel it helps quickly identify certain things. It's not like different shading isn't being used to identify different causes of death, and I would say that more than one officer dying in a particular incident is distinctive or different. Those who died off duty is also distinctive IMO, especially when the term in the line of duty is used. It's not a list of every officer who died while employed by the agency, after all, which would then call for all those who died of duty, sitting at home watching TV with a beer in hand, for example. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:15, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- The use of color seems inappropriate--color is usually used to highlight something as being particularly distinctive or different. Here it is used merely to indicate a degree of uncertainty or particular minor point about the exact day of death, & its relationship to the event causing it. This really should be done by something like a footnote marker, and asterisk or the like, that would be less conspicuous.
Comments from Collectonian Collectonian (talk) 06:22, 13 April 2008 (UTC):
- the image of Randal Simmons seems unnecessary, though if it has a justifable purpose, it should be moved to the right side as it is totally messing up the menu. Collectonian (talk) 06:22, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- I'll move it to the right for now, if any more objections come in, then I'll remove it. It's there basically to show Simmons, as he is discussed in the paragraph along side it. Y Done-- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:45, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- I also must question the inclusion of two city marshals. They died before the LAPD existed, and as such can not be considered Los Angeles Police Department officers. It would be one thing if the list were List of Los Angeles law enforcement officers, but as it specifies "Los Angeles Police Department," it should only include those who were actually LAPD officers.Collectonian (talk) 06:22, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- As above to TRM, the city marshal was the highest ranking of the LAPD from 1869 when the force was created, to 1876, when the second marshal in the list died. They then changed the title to "Chief". The first one in the list is there because although he wasn't part of the LAPD, his position was. I can see this is contentious though, so it may be better to simply remove it. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:45, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- I also must question the way the Cause of Death's are listed. For example, the footnote on Ian James Campbell seems to indicate he was kidnapped and murdered, but his cause of death is only listed as Gunfire. While it would make the list longer, perhaps if the notes in the notes column were put with the names, and the badge number dropped (which seems to be rather personal information, even for deceased officers, as well as somewhat superflous as their badge numbers is unrelated to their deaths), the column on cause could have room for longer comments where necessary. This would allow a more accurate reflection for cause, and some small story as most of these will never have articles and so I think some brief summary should be included here.Collectonian (talk) 06:22, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- He was still murdered by gunshots. The fact that he was kidnapped may have contributed to it, but it wasn't the cause of death. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 05:37, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- I'll remove the badge number column tomorrow, but I'm not sure if removing it will give that much room to add even a sentence of additional information. Doing... -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 05:37, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- He was still murdered by gunshots. The fact that he was kidnapped may have contributed to it, but it wasn't the cause of death. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 05:37, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- I believe the MOS requires the dates to be in full format, as ISO dates are generally discouraged except in references. Collectonian (talk) 06:22, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- DATE#Dates says "ISO 8601 dates are uncommon in English prose, and are generally not used in Wikipedia. However, they may be useful in long lists and tables for conciseness and ease of comparison." -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:45, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
I will change them tomorrow when I do the badge numbers though.- N Not done I can't seem to make the sorting work when written out as full dates, and the MOS says it's okay for use in tables, so I'm going to leave it for now. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 05:37, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- If its needed for sorting, then its fine. Collectonian (talk) 05:53, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- N Not done I can't seem to make the sorting work when written out as full dates, and the MOS says it's okay for use in tables, so I'm going to leave it for now. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 05:37, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- DATE#Dates says "ISO 8601 dates are uncommon in English prose, and are generally not used in Wikipedia. However, they may be useful in long lists and tables for conciseness and ease of comparison." -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:45, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- I also must echo the other remarks on the last column and the color coding, particularly the numbering to indicate two officers died in the same incident. I'm not sure how to better format it though, if it should be done with a notes column under some items, or notes to the side, but the current system seems confusing. Collectonian (talk) 05:53, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- I could make footnote links for those who died in the same incident. Do you think all the different shading should go, or just some of it? -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 07:14, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
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- as currently used, all the different shading should go. The one thing I can think of that would be valuable--as you in fact suggest earlier--is to distinguish those who were actually killed directly by criminals, from accidents--except that you do not actually have full information on that for many of the people. On duty/off duty is not the same thing. If you want to brighten up the table, use color for those awarded stars or medals, instead of symbols. Color should be used to mark the more significant, not the less significant. DGG (talk) 18:23, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- Something I noticed in the other list, before noticing here but the list is declared to be a list "officers killed in the line of duty" so why are there entries for people who died of a heart attack? That's natural causes, not being killed. As I said in the other, I realize the criteria in the list seems to be just to be on the official list, but if that's all it is, we aren't doing much but replicating the official list which would call to question, as others have, whether the list belongs at all. Collectonian (talk) 17:25, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments
- I really don't like the use of numbers in the last column to indicate ones who died in the same incident; they look too much like footnotes, and the numbers have no actual meaning. --Golbez (talk) 07:06, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- I thought it was an easy way of identifying, for when the list is sorted by anything other than date. The bolded 1s can be distinguihed from the 2s, can you think of any other identifier that would be more suitable? -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 05:31, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- I really don't like the use of numbers in the last column to indicate ones who died in the same incident; they look too much like footnotes, and the numbers have no actual meaning. --Golbez (talk) 07:06, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose — in my opinion, it's not encyclopedic; it's an original research. MOJSKA 666 - Leave a message here 05:43, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Thanks for commenting, although I'm puzzled as to which part you feel is original research. Each officer and his/her death is referenced through three different sources, and others have addtional sourcing where it's available online. If you can tell me which bits are OR, I'll attempt to make it not so. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 06:27, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose. I agree with DGG. Notability of this list is at most borderline. A list of officers who were killed intentionally because of their work might be a different matter, but this list is no more notable than the List of USC Medical Center staff who died at work. List of USC Medical Center staff who died from a disease they caught at work might be more notable though, especially if it was unusually long. (Which I suppose it isn't, because I just picked this hospital at random.) The list currently looks more like propaganda for a police department, and this needs to be corrected. --Hans Adler (talk) 08:46, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- Propaganda? I don't really know what to say to that... -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 05:14, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
- Propaganda is an old-fashioned word for advertising. It used to be used for everything, including consumer products, but for propaganda reasons it was renamed in that context. Now it's mainly used in political contexts, and this is a political context. To quote from Propaganda: "The most effective propaganda is often completely truthful, but some propaganda presents facts selectively (thus lying by omission) to encourage a particular synthesis, or gives loaded messages in order to produce an emotional rather than rational response to the information presented." That's what this list is doing, whether it is intentional or not. --Hans Adler (talk) 09:53, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 21:50, 16 April 2008.
[edit] The Trial of a Time Lord
I'm nominating this article because I feel that is an exemplary example of a season page. I know that the story blurs the line between serial and season a lot, as it's a season-long serial, but given that it was produced in three different blocks, and is considered by the exec producers and most fans as four closely linked serials, I'm leaning to nominating this as a season page, and am nominating it here to follow precedent. Sceptre (talk) 20:16, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment I think this should be an FAC instead. The only "list" is the episode summarises and that is very much a table. See Smallville (season 1). Alientraveller (talk) 21:34, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- I was split on what it should be, to be honest. Other season pages, like The Simpsons (season 8), 30 Rock (season 1), and Lost (season 2) went through FLC, and I didn't know about the Smallville season article going through FLC. Sceptre (talk) 21:43, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- I definitely think it is an article: you've done some nice formatting to separate the plot synopses, but that doesn't make it a list. Alientraveller (talk) 21:46, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- {{Episode list}}. Sceptre (talk) 21:47, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- I definitely think it is an article: you've done some nice formatting to separate the plot synopses, but that doesn't make it a list. Alientraveller (talk) 21:46, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- I was split on what it should be, to be honest. Other season pages, like The Simpsons (season 8), 30 Rock (season 1), and Lost (season 2) went through FLC, and I didn't know about the Smallville season article going through FLC. Sceptre (talk) 21:43, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 21:33, 15 April 2008.
[edit] List of the 100 wealthiest people
This list is based off of List of billionaires (2007), a list I submitted that became WP:FL a few weeks ago. Gary King (talk) 17:45, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
Support I delinked the word "billionaire" in the enboldened part of the lead, but apart from that, it's very similar to List of billionaires (2007). Congrats (once again!) on your hard work. PeterSymonds | talk 17:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
SupportIt's been a long road, but the article's looking very nice! Great work. Drewcifer (talk) 07:02, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
Abstain Since it seems I'm in the minority (see below), I'll just withdraw my vote. For my own piece of mind, however, I'd still like to bring up the topic at WP:RS or something like that, but for now I'll let the cards fall as they may for this FLC. I'll try and keep everyone posted. Drewcifer (talk) 20:58, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
- The topic has been brought up here, so feel free to take a look and chime in. Drewcifer (talk) 21:30, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
Comment The # column doesn't sort. That, and I don't think a column should be named by a symbol. Drewcifer (talk) 17:56, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
:It sorts for me. Plus, the column is small, so a whole word would widen the cells unnecessarily. The symbol # is widely known as a number, but that's just my humble opinion. [[User:PeterSymonds|PeterSymonds]] | [[User talk:PeterSymonds|<small>talk</small>]] 17:59, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
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- My mistake about the sorting thing. But I do still think the column shouldn't be a symbol. Howabout "No."? As in Dischord Records discography and Load Records discography. Unrelated examples, I know, but similar enough. Also, I am a little concerned with the single source. Sure it's reliable, but a single source is just asking for trouble. Aren't there plenty of sources that might echo the forbes article? Such as CNN? Lastly, after taking a look at the forbes page, they have alot more types of lists and information then is provided here. I'm not saying a list of youngest billionares is required of this FLC, but it might be good to add an age column. Also, the fact that the sources of income column is sorable really isn't helpful. Whatabout a Industry column, so we could sort by people who became rich by energy, technology, retail, etc. Drewcifer (talk) 21:43, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- Okay, No. it is. The list is based on the Forbes list so that's why that's the primary source. If another source, like CNN, were to compile a similar list, the net worths and rankings would be different because different methods are used to calculate the lists. This article specifically states that it is based only off the Forbes list. Gary King (talk) 22:05, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- Then that begs the question: if the article is based solely on a single source, then why is this list even necessary? I'm not saying it should be deleted, or that I agree with that line of reasoning, but the list does seem to be on shaky ground here. What I would suggest (as I did above), would be to expand the list a bit with extra columns, extra info, or whatever. That way it's a) more useful to the reader, and b) not a verbatim copy of another source, rather it goes above and beyond what the reader could learn from going directly to Forbes. Drewcifer (talk) 22:27, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- Okay, No. it is. The list is based on the Forbes list so that's why that's the primary source. If another source, like CNN, were to compile a similar list, the net worths and rankings would be different because different methods are used to calculate the lists. This article specifically states that it is based only off the Forbes list. Gary King (talk) 22:05, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- My mistake about the sorting thing. But I do still think the column shouldn't be a symbol. Howabout "No."? As in Dischord Records discography and Load Records discography. Unrelated examples, I know, but similar enough. Also, I am a little concerned with the single source. Sure it's reliable, but a single source is just asking for trouble. Aren't there plenty of sources that might echo the forbes article? Such as CNN? Lastly, after taking a look at the forbes page, they have alot more types of lists and information then is provided here. I'm not saying a list of youngest billionares is required of this FLC, but it might be good to add an age column. Also, the fact that the sources of income column is sorable really isn't helpful. Whatabout a Industry column, so we could sort by people who became rich by energy, technology, retail, etc. Drewcifer (talk) 21:43, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- There are indeed a number of sources to get the net worth of each billionaire, but the problem is that each one uses a different methodology to do so. Therefore, we need a single source that uses the same methodology to get the values of each billionaire instead of hashing values from different sources using different methodologies together. Gary King (talk) 16:01, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- That's fair enough, but the list still needs to stand apart from it's source(s). If it were based on multiple sources, at least it could accrue an aggregate amount of information and centralize it all in one place. As it stands, the list is actually inferior to the single source provided, and provides nothing that the source does not, except for wikilinks. I understand that different sources calculate these things differently, but as it stands right now the list isn't a "List of billionaires in 2008", it's a "List of billionaires in 2008 according exclusively to Forbes". Which yet, again begs the question, why is this list even neccessary? Or, perhaps more relevant to this FLC, how does a direct transcription of a single source exemplify Wikipedia's best work? Drewcifer (talk) 17:15, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- I've added an age column. Gary King (talk) 18:34, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Ok, good start, but that doesn't really address the single-source thing. And looking at Colin's comments here and at the 2006 page, I have to agree with him on those points too. Drewcifer (talk) 22:38, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- I've looked around, and the only articles that mention the people on the list and their wealth use Forbes as their reference. Gary King (talk) 03:19, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- The shortcomings of other articles doesn't really have anything to do with this list. Sorry to say it, but I really don't see any way to justify a single source for the entire list. Drewcifer (talk) 05:38, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- If I used other articles that used Forbes as a reference, would that be considered another source? That would mean they also consider Forbes to be a verifiable source. The problem is that Forbes is really the only publication that is willing to spend time to calculate the net worths of people around the world. Gary King (talk) 05:41, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- The shortcomings of other articles doesn't really have anything to do with this list. Sorry to say it, but I really don't see any way to justify a single source for the entire list. Drewcifer (talk) 05:38, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- I've looked around, and the only articles that mention the people on the list and their wealth use Forbes as their reference. Gary King (talk) 03:19, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Ok, good start, but that doesn't really address the single-source thing. And looking at Colin's comments here and at the 2006 page, I have to agree with him on those points too. Drewcifer (talk) 22:38, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- I've added an age column. Gary King (talk) 18:34, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- That's fair enough, but the list still needs to stand apart from it's source(s). If it were based on multiple sources, at least it could accrue an aggregate amount of information and centralize it all in one place. As it stands, the list is actually inferior to the single source provided, and provides nothing that the source does not, except for wikilinks. I understand that different sources calculate these things differently, but as it stands right now the list isn't a "List of billionaires in 2008", it's a "List of billionaires in 2008 according exclusively to Forbes". Which yet, again begs the question, why is this list even neccessary? Or, perhaps more relevant to this FLC, how does a direct transcription of a single source exemplify Wikipedia's best work? Drewcifer (talk) 17:15, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
←Ohh, sorry. I thought you were referring to other Wikipedia articles. My fault. Yes, that would certainly be a good start. You could use the Forbes thing as a general resource, then have specific in-lines from wherever else. However, you said up above that "There are indeed a number of sources to get the net worth of each billionaire". Those other sources should definitely be used. Drewcifer (talk) 05:44, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- I said that when I saw several resources, but then afterwards noticed they were using Forbes. I'll add in some references now; let me know if it's acceptable in the next few minutes. Gary King (talk) 05:47, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Definitely looking better. I'd say I'm satisfied citation-wise. So, I only have two more concerns with the article (which I haven't mentioned yet, so apologies for being an endless supply of complaints): first, the title of the article isn't really accurate. If it was truly a list of billionaires, it would go all the way down to people who have less than 8.9 billion. So if I had 1.6 billion in the bank, I would be up there. At least according to the title. So, either a bigger list is necessary, or (the easier option), to change the scope slightly (and I suppose title) to the "100 wealthiest people" or something like that. Second, and this is more of a meta-concern, but since the scope of the list has been changed from just 2008 to a current list of billionaires (which is a good change), what will happen to the list in February 2009? And, what will happen to the 2007 and prior lists? Drewcifer (talk) 03:38, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- List of the 100 wealthiest people now. If you asked me, I'd just say to leave those lists. Also, I would imagine that this current list should be kept up to date as much as possible? Gary King (talk) 04:03, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Cool. I would assume that the list would get updated once a year, hence making year-by-year lists unnecessary. So, I also realize that everything from this FLC is kinda messing up alot of other billionaire-related articles, so I'd recommend taking another look at all of them and considering whether they're really worth keeping, or at least how to change/improve them to reflect all the decisions made here. That said, all of that has very little to do with this particular FLC. So, I only have a few more suggestions (yes, I know I keep saying that): first, I think it's generally good form to center align columns with numbers, and left align columns with text. So, you should center align the "No," and "Age" columns, and possibly the "Net worth" column. Second, the References column is really wide for what it does: I'd recommend abbreviating References to Ref. Lastly, as I mentioned earlier, it would be good to have one more column concerning the person's industry. So we can sort by those who have earned their fortunes from technology, telecom, banking, etc. However, this last one is just a suggestion, not something I'll necessarily hold you to. Drewcifer (talk) 04:12, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- There's a lot of billionaire articles... I'll see when I can get around to doing them. Industry is hard since I either don't know a lot of these companies or the billionaires have very diversified interests. Industry is better suited for each company's articles. Gary King (talk) 04:28, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Fair enough, ignore that last point. The center align looks good, except for a couple where the code is haywire. Also, I don't think it's necessary to have the Ref column sortable. Also, I don't think 17 references requires the 3-column references section. Might not even warrant 2-columns. Drewcifer (talk) 05:26, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- There's a lot of billionaire articles... I'll see when I can get around to doing them. Industry is hard since I either don't know a lot of these companies or the billionaires have very diversified interests. Industry is better suited for each company's articles. Gary King (talk) 04:28, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Cool. I would assume that the list would get updated once a year, hence making year-by-year lists unnecessary. So, I also realize that everything from this FLC is kinda messing up alot of other billionaire-related articles, so I'd recommend taking another look at all of them and considering whether they're really worth keeping, or at least how to change/improve them to reflect all the decisions made here. That said, all of that has very little to do with this particular FLC. So, I only have a few more suggestions (yes, I know I keep saying that): first, I think it's generally good form to center align columns with numbers, and left align columns with text. So, you should center align the "No," and "Age" columns, and possibly the "Net worth" column. Second, the References column is really wide for what it does: I'd recommend abbreviating References to Ref. Lastly, as I mentioned earlier, it would be good to have one more column concerning the person's industry. So we can sort by those who have earned their fortunes from technology, telecom, banking, etc. However, this last one is just a suggestion, not something I'll necessarily hold you to. Drewcifer (talk) 04:12, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- List of the 100 wealthiest people now. If you asked me, I'd just say to leave those lists. Also, I would imagine that this current list should be kept up to date as much as possible? Gary King (talk) 04:03, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- Surprised billionaire isn't linked anywhere.
- Probably need specific context that it relates to the year 2008 in the lead, not just assume we get from the fact Forbes released the list in 2008.
- Millhouse Capital redirects back to Abramovich (there may be other examples) - as per the Google acquisitions, I'm not too happy with this. Either unlink or write the article.
Not much else to moan about though, besides the slightly excessive external links and the dependency on a single primary source. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:59, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- There's what seems to me to be a stray comma in "Forbes is an American, national business magazine"
- I would change the key from "last year's list" to "2007's list" or something else more concrete.
- "As of 2008" links to 2008, and I don't think MOS:UNLINKYEARS likes it.
- Apart from one person, the residence is the same as the citizenship. I think it's a bit unnecessary, and I'd rather see where the business is based, I think.
- I'm not sure if the residency column is correct. As far as I know, Roman Abramovich lives in the UK, and according to his Wikipedia page, lives in Rogate, West Sussex.
- Per TRM's comments above, Corral Petroleum Holdings redirects to Mohammed Al Amoudi
- PPF Group redirects to Petr Kellner
- Unitech Group redirects to Ramesh Chandra
- Grupo Bal redirects to Alberto Baillères
- Quiñenco redirects to Antofagasta PLC
- Votorantim Group redirects to Antônio Ermírio de Moraes
- Uralskaya Gorno-Metallurgicheskaya Kompaniya redirects to Iskander Makhmudov
- There are other redirects which I think should be fixed, for example "MashreqBank" redirects to "Mashreq Bank",
- "Echostar" redirects to "Dish Network Corporation"
- "Bharti Telecom" redirects to "Bharti Airtel"
- "Uralkali" redirects to "Mobile TeleSystems"
- Can August von Finck's source of wealth be more specific than simply "Investments"? All the others are businesses, and by simply reading the list one would think that "Investments" is a business name.
- Also August von Finck links to a disambig page
- Ronald Perelman's is also "investments", but this time with a little i
- There are a couple of others which is given as "investments", but I'd like to know what they invested in
- I think "MMK" should be written out fully as "Magnitogorsk Iron and Steel Works"
- "Lukoil" as "LUKoil"
- "Thomson Corporation" as "The Thomson Corporation"
- "LVMH" as "LVMH Moët Hennessy – Louis Vuitton"
- Shouldn't the Duke of Westminster be given as his real name?
- Raymond Kwok links to Raymond, while Thomas and Walter link to Sun Hung Kai and Walter Kwok respectively. I think they should all be given a last name, too, or written as "Raymond, Thomas and Walter Kwok"
- "Sun Hung Kai and Companies" redirects to Sun Hung Kai
- Iris Fontbona redirects to Antofagasta PLC
- Beau Bray redirects to Namco
- Nassef Sawiris and Alexei Kuzmichev redirect to their companies
- Dmitry Rybolovlev links to Mobile TeleSystems
- David Koch links to a disambig page
- "Suleiman Kerimov" links to Suleyman Kerimov
That's it. Mainly a lot of redirects to fix. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:59, 25 March, 2008 More
- The reference section doesn't need formatting like that as there's only 1 reference
- According to WP:SOURCES and WP:PSTS, the article needs secondary and tertiary sources. Try to include some other sources for everyone's wealth and source of wealth.
-- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 20:04, 25 March, 2008
More comments
- The link at the top to List of billionaires (2008) is now a double-redirect to List of the 100 wealthiest people via List of billionaires. The template at the bottom of the 100 wealthiest also needs fixing.
- There are two dates. The Lead section says March 5, but the "Top billionaires" section says Feb 11
- Roman Abramovitch I'm sure lives in the UK (see my comment above), and I think he'll get some income from Chelsea FC.
- Now this list has been moved, what's going to happen in 2009 in regards to a 2008 list? Will this be moved, and then a new list compiled at List of the 100 wealthiest people, or will it be lost in time?
-- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 22:54, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments Following the recent vandalism, there still seems to be a conflicting entry at 73. Where it used to be Beau Brady and Namco, it is now Phillip Knight and Nike. (see the diff from the last known good edit on the 25th, to now). I don't want to change it though because I haven't verified it.
Unfortunately, Criteria 1c (factually correct) and 1e (stability) are the problem right now, although 1c is easily fixed (see above), but the list is being vandalised, is currently edit-protected until April 10, and so I'm currently hesitant to support. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 20:18, 27 March, 2008
Comment I believe the links in the See also section are redundant, since those links are already in the "billionaire" template. I realize that by removing this section, the ToC will disappear, but it's not needed anyway.--Crzycheetah 22:30, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose per WP:NOT. We don't act as a statistical repository for old data. Yes I know this is the 2008 list and I didn't see the 2007 slip through as an FL. Rename this to List of billionaires and ensure you keep it up-to-date. See List of countries by Human Development Index and Global Peace Index for examples. Apart from a few sporting lists, Wikipedia presents current data. If a featured list contains data that is updated periodically, we expect editors to keep it refreshed in a timely manner or else it is defeatured. Colin°Talk 13:01, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Well, what about articles such as Opinion polling for the United States presidential election, 2008 which is just a list of statistics (opinion polls, no less, meaning they may not even have any bearing on the final outcome), and I would say is far more unwieldy than this article. Gary King (talk) 16:05, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Let's discuss this issue at 2006 rather than repeat stuff here. Colin°Talk 17:09, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- List of billionaires (2008) has been moved to List of billionaires. Gary King (talk) 18:34, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Let's discuss this issue at 2006 rather than repeat stuff here. Colin°Talk 17:09, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- The issue with this just being a snapshot in time has been resolved: this list will be maintained as the current top billionaires. However, its scope and sourcing is now confused. Previously it was all according to Forbes on one day (yearly updated). If this is still the case (ie. the amount and rank come from Forbes) then Forbes should be a general reference, not a footnote (i.e, it has a bullet point and is listed at the end of the References section.) At the moment, it looks like many of the entries are unsourced since they have no entry in the ref column. If the entries now come from a mix of sources then the lead is totally misleading and you are conducting original research. It would be original research to collect people and valuations from multiple sources and then rank them in a top 100 order. In addition to being OR this would be statistically nonsense since your sources are all for different dates so the precise ranking is not possible. Finally, some of your "sources" are just news articles repeating Forbes. The Forbes list is a totally reliable source, in so far as you trust anyone to compile such a list. Why are any other sources required? At the moment I'm strongly opposed to this being featured. Sorry. Colin°Talk 10:25, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- So... should I follow this line of reasoning or Drewcifer3000 (talk · contribs)'s? This Wikipedia stuff is confusing. Gary King (talk) 19:11, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Well this is certainly an interesting situation. However, I don't think that my suggestions and Colin's are necessarily mutually exclusive. Colin's suggestion of making the Forbes source a general reference rather than an in-line is a very good suggestion. From what I can tell, the majority of the other sources merely echo the Forbes source, so I don't think there's a problem of ranking based on differing scales/moments in time. I suppose sourcing an article like that is a bit redundant, but I stand by the fact that a single source was a problem. The only thing left to do is to make sure that the Lead is worded very carefully, so that the scope/sourcing of the list is no longer confusing. Drewcifer (talk) 20:10, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Hopefully it's better now? Gary King (talk) 20:16, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry, no. I've just looked at nearly all your extra "references" and they all cite the Forbes list. They add nothing. Some of them aren't even citing the 2008 Forbes list, so they are one or two years out of date. I really don't see what Drewcifer's problem is with citing just Forbes. If the list is based on Forbes 11 February 2008 list then there is no getting away from it. Colin°Talk 20:41, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- Basically because an article that is based on a single source is a) redundant, b) about as useful as a single external link, and c) goes against WP:RS, (specifically the fact that the guideline often uses the word "sources" (plural).) Here's what I think we should do: this seems to have become more of a meta-Wiki issue, so I recommend this FLC be closed (since it appears we're deadlocked anywys), and we can bring up the issue at WP:RS or WP:V or something like that. That way, we can get a broader set of opinions, and maybe the guideline can be reworded a bit to avoid confusion like this in the future. Drewcifer (talk) 21:41, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
- It would be a real shame to fail this list, because it is nearly there. I don't have any problem with only having a single source, especially when that source is the only one with any authority in the matter. The newspaper articles that repeat (possibly with errors) the Forbes list do not add anything (though they make us all aware, if we weren't already, of the importance of the Forbes list). The list serves a navigational purpose to the billionaire articles. All WP material duplicates what is out there; that doesn't stop us having our own version. I'm sure there are other FLs with one source (or lots of sources pointing to the same web site). Colin°Talk 07:18, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- There's not shame in failing an FLC, especially when the issues raised are beyond that of the single article. The list has been "nearly there" for sometime now (the FLC is almost 4 weeks old now), but for one reason or another seems to not quite make it according to someone for some reason. I just think it would be more productive to bring this issue up elsewhere, with the intention of renominating this list once the issue is settled. Drewcifer (talk) 09:16, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
- It would be a real shame to fail this list, because it is nearly there. I don't have any problem with only having a single source, especially when that source is the only one with any authority in the matter. The newspaper articles that repeat (possibly with errors) the Forbes list do not add anything (though they make us all aware, if we weren't already, of the importance of the Forbes list). The list serves a navigational purpose to the billionaire articles. All WP material duplicates what is out there; that doesn't stop us having our own version. I'm sure there are other FLs with one source (or lots of sources pointing to the same web site). Colin°Talk 07:18, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- Basically because an article that is based on a single source is a) redundant, b) about as useful as a single external link, and c) goes against WP:RS, (specifically the fact that the guideline often uses the word "sources" (plural).) Here's what I think we should do: this seems to have become more of a meta-Wiki issue, so I recommend this FLC be closed (since it appears we're deadlocked anywys), and we can bring up the issue at WP:RS or WP:V or something like that. That way, we can get a broader set of opinions, and maybe the guideline can be reworded a bit to avoid confusion like this in the future. Drewcifer (talk) 21:41, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry, no. I've just looked at nearly all your extra "references" and they all cite the Forbes list. They add nothing. Some of them aren't even citing the 2008 Forbes list, so they are one or two years out of date. I really don't see what Drewcifer's problem is with citing just Forbes. If the list is based on Forbes 11 February 2008 list then there is no getting away from it. Colin°Talk 20:41, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- Hopefully it's better now? Gary King (talk) 20:16, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm not sure how I feel about this page now, since its move. I preferred it when it was "List of billionaires (2008)", as it met criteria 1a3 and 1e. As soon as February 2009 rolls around, somebody had better update this list immediately, or it will become unfeatured. Sure, we expect editors to update it, but it doesn't mean they will. I didn't see the harm in having it set to one year; season pages for TV shows do this, as do lists of hurricanes (albeit for a longer period of perhaps a decade). It's also still semi-protected, which since that's an automatic fail for a GA, it should be an automatic fail for featured status. When does the protect expire? -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 23:52, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Whether we should have (2006), (2007), (2008) is more the sort of discussion AfD handles. There are precedents for lists like this to be "current" and for the editors to be expected to keep it so in a timely manner. I don't think that should be a problem. Forbes have been doing this for over 20 years and it isn't WP's job to act as their archive. The semi-protection issue can be resolved by asking an admin to remove it -- and they will monitor if the trouble returns. Colin°Talk 07:18, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment I agree with Colin that the list should be based completely off of the Forbes list and shouldn't mix things up by using other citations. Some of them are from last year (one is from 2006) so they are hardly up to date. As well, the lead should be expanded a bit. -- Scorpion0422 15:31, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
- Okay, I removed the references. What else can I add to the lead? Gary King (talk) 16:17, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
- I hate to sound like a pain, but the lead needs at least one citation, perhaps for "Stock prices are defined as shares of ownership in a corporation, and exchange rates are defined as how much one currency is worth in terms of another."
- As for how to expand the lead, you could add who Warren Buffett replaced as the wealthiest man (Bill Gates?) and how long that person reigned for. You could also include things like which country has the most billionaires, who the richest woman is, and the fact that it is based entirely on the Forbes list should be mentioned in the lead. -- Scorpion0422 16:38, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
- Okay, I removed the references. What else can I add to the lead? Gary King (talk) 16:17, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
- Strong oppose - If there was at least SOMETHING added from other sources - short biographies, say - then this would be an encyclopaedic list. As it stands, however, this is not only a straight reproduction of the ranking in Forbes list, this pretty much is Forbes' list, even including the up and down arrow symbols to compare with the previous year. Something that uses one source and copies all information from it except changing the biographies (which are at least in the online version) to a list of companies mentioned in the biographies is not Wikipedia's best content. What it is is a copy violation. While it's certainly salvageable if you do some research, cut the Forbes-specific things like the moves in ranking (instead describing how their fortune has fared and changed over the last year), and make it Wikipedia's own, as it stands, it is a copyright violation. A very attractive derivative work that has had a lot of work put into it, but derivative works that are this similar to the original are still copyvios. Since information cannot be copyrighted, we can use Forbes' list as the basis for our own, but we cannot simply reproduce it while adding no new information. Shoemaker's Holiday (talk) 21:48, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
- Strong Oppose. This seems to be nothing more than a repackaging of the Forbes list (which is the article's only source)... the two are virtually identical... the only difference is that the Wikipedia article has a (unsourced) column for "sources of wealth", listing the various companies that the people own. Instead of being a good candidate for Featured List, it is closer to being a good candidate for deletion. Blueboar (talk) 22:21, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] List of 7th Heaven episodes
Self nomination All the concerns I think have been addressed since the last FLC. It no longer looks like a Skittleopedia, and has all the relevent information, with a suitable Lead section, and is fully referenced. All concerns/comments will be addressed. Thanks -- Matthew | talk | Contribs 04:44, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comment I made some changes. You need to explain what a "prod code" is. –thedemonhog talk • edits 07:22, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
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- Image caption is fragment - remove the full stop.
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- Spaces between the years and the en-dash in the tables for "originally aired" should be removed.
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- Per above, what's a "prod code"?
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- Decap Airdate in the tables.
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- Why aren't there any episode synopses?
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- Purely for WP:SIZE reasons. Episode summaries for 240 episodes would be a strain on the page. I'm not opposed to doing episode summaries, I'd just rather make individual season pages. Also, the summaries that were there were direct copies of those at tv.com and had to be removed as Copyvio. -- Matthew 16:17, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
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- That's it for now. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:29, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
- Support my major concerns addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:33, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments:
- A list of episodes page usually does not use a show infobox, having only an captioned image in the upper right corner. Why use one here?
- Rather than have refs in the season table headers, why not divide the refs into a General and a Specific section as is seen with other featured episode lists?
- Where are the specific season articles with summaries?
- I, or rather, the Wiki community haven't created them yet. I don't mind doing them, and I will if no one else gets around to it.
- Individual season sections should be subsections under the first season header.
- I'd go ahead and remove the template at the bottom since its pretty clear it will be deleted.
Collectonian (talk) 00:34, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for your comments so far! -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 04:17, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- No problem. I changed the list to show you what I meant about the general episode section. Feel free to change it back if you don't like. :) Beyond that my only concern is the lack of summaries and season pages. It would be one thing to have no summaries but seasonal pages, but I'm not sure an episode list that doesn't have them yet is ready for FL until it does. ~thinking~ Collectonian (talk) 04:30, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- I don't know why I put done when it wasn't! Thanks though. I don't mind doing the season pages but if they need to be there for this to be passed then maybe it should be closed, because as quick as I was with the Degrassi season pages it still took me an entire day to write each one. That would mean the season pages wouldn't be complete for at least another 11 days from now. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:11, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- I'm not sure that it would need to take that long. You'd basically need to make an episode template hack (or use an existing one of it works for what you need). Then cutting and pasting the tables into the new articles, adding at least a basic intro and front matter, change the template name (search/replace), and then include those pages into the main list. Then the tables don't have to be repeated. If you aren't sure what I mean, take a look at List of Lassie episodes and then List of Lassie episodes (season 1) to see how this works. :) Collectonian (talk) 02:43, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- I don't know why I put done when it wasn't! Thanks though. I don't mind doing the season pages but if they need to be there for this to be passed then maybe it should be closed, because as quick as I was with the Degrassi season pages it still took me an entire day to write each one. That would mean the season pages wouldn't be complete for at least another 11 days from now. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:11, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- More formally opposing. While its a good start, without summaries or season pages, I do not feel it meets the completion requirements to be featured at this time. Collectonian (talk) 07:50, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- No problem. I changed the list to show you what I meant about the general episode section. Feel free to change it back if you don't like. :) Beyond that my only concern is the lack of summaries and season pages. It would be one thing to have no summaries but seasonal pages, but I'm not sure an episode list that doesn't have them yet is ready for FL until it does. ~thinking~ Collectonian (talk) 04:30, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments I would like to see seasonal pages created as well before featuring this list. Also, could you remove <br /> from production code, season #, and series #? The reason is that it forces wide headers for users with higher screen resolution. "Another" also, could you change the table widths from pixels to percentages? --Crzycheetah 07:29, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Removed the line breaks. Why do the table widths need changing from pixels to percentages though? It's going to be kinda difficult to calculate the changes necessary. Also, see above my reply to Collectonian about season pages. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:11, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Could you compare the tables of seasons 6 and 7 located in my sandbox to List of 7th Heaven episodes#Season 6? Then tell me if you see any difference.--Crzycheetah 19:51, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- Not in the column widths, the only change I see is that all the headers are centered now. I'll adjust all the seasons to fit your sandbox, though. Thank you for the effort. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 23:49, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- What I wanted you to see is that the "prod code" column of season 6, for example, looks wider than the "prod code" column of season 7 in List of 7th Heaven episodes's current version. Meanwhile, in my sandbox those two columns have the same width.--Crzycheetah 00:11, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- I've changed it already, but I looked at the old diff and I can see what you mean now. I also think it all depends what browser is being used. Firefox recognises pixels, whereas IE7 doesn't. They both recognise percentages though, so it was a good suggestion. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 00:23, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, I keep forgetting about those differences in browsers. It looks good now. Seasons 7-11 don't have heading colors because there is no DVD available yet, I assume. But missing seasonal pages is an obstacle here, though. I am going to stay neutral because of that. I think this will set a bad precedence, i.e. passing lists of episodes without summaries.--Crzycheetah 02:31, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yup. No DVD; no color. That's okay. I understand and respect where you're coming from. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 05:26, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, I keep forgetting about those differences in browsers. It looks good now. Seasons 7-11 don't have heading colors because there is no DVD available yet, I assume. But missing seasonal pages is an obstacle here, though. I am going to stay neutral because of that. I think this will set a bad precedence, i.e. passing lists of episodes without summaries.--Crzycheetah 02:31, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- I've changed it already, but I looked at the old diff and I can see what you mean now. I also think it all depends what browser is being used. Firefox recognises pixels, whereas IE7 doesn't. They both recognise percentages though, so it was a good suggestion. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 00:23, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- What I wanted you to see is that the "prod code" column of season 6, for example, looks wider than the "prod code" column of season 7 in List of 7th Heaven episodes's current version. Meanwhile, in my sandbox those two columns have the same width.--Crzycheetah 00:11, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 21:33, 15 April 2008.
[edit] List of Medal of Honor recipients
I believe that this list os worthy of being a Featured list. Please let me know if additional changes need to be made.--Kumioko (talk) 13:57, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
I think linking to things in headers is generally discouraged, and it would be great if you could explain what the purpose of the "Foreign" section is.-- Scorpion0422 14:07, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
- Support This is an excellent list, very comprehensive and detailed. The only thing I could say is to find a refences beside the U.S. Army Center of Military History Medal of Honor Citations Archive to further validate all of the listings. bahamut0013♠♣ 15:13, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comments a few quick things...
**Dates should all be formatted per WP:DATE and date ranges should separate using an en-dash per WP:DASH.
**Avoid links in bold sections of the lead per WP:LEAD#Bold title.
**Why are there several sections which just link to other articles? If there are no medal of honor recipients for those campaigns they shouldn't be linked to here. If there are recipients for those campaigns then they should be included here otherwise this list will be incomplete.
- So, oppose until these are resolved. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:45, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comment regarding the "completeness" of the list. It may be worthwhile you reading what's going on with a current candidate for delisting, the List of Arsenal F.C. players, considered incomplete because not all Arsenal players are listed. Wikipedia:Featured list removal candidates/List of Arsenal F.C. players is where you'll find the debate. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:33, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- In my opinion this is different, in the article you mention not all players are listed, so in my opinion it does NOT meet the criteria. In this case all of the Medal of Honor recipients are listed but for ease of use and to ensure that the page doesn't reach critical mass they are split up. They are all there, they just are not on one page. To list all 3500+ on one page would not only make the article difficult to read, navigate and edit it would far exceed the reasonable length an article should be.--Kumioko (talk) 15:24, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, that's an interesting outlook. The debate at WP:FOOTBALL is ongoing and I'm interested to see how it pans out before I can commit to supporting any article which doesn't meet similar requirements. I understand length is an issue. In fact, the Arsenal list would be around 1000 long if the debate ends in the conclusion that all players should be listed. In fact, I think this is an interesting point. Thanks, I'll take your opinion there! More soon. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:00, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Just FYI I've added this perspective to the on-going debate. I think its valid and would be interested in the opinion of the wider community. Until it's resolved, however, I'll have to reserve my support. Sorry, nothing personal, but there's little point in promoting this list just to see it delisted under an ongoing debate. All the best, The Rambling Man (talk) 18:05, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, that's an interesting outlook. The debate at WP:FOOTBALL is ongoing and I'm interested to see how it pans out before I can commit to supporting any article which doesn't meet similar requirements. I understand length is an issue. In fact, the Arsenal list would be around 1000 long if the debate ends in the conclusion that all players should be listed. In fact, I think this is an interesting point. Thanks, I'll take your opinion there! More soon. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:00, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- In my opinion this is different, in the article you mention not all players are listed, so in my opinion it does NOT meet the criteria. In this case all of the Medal of Honor recipients are listed but for ease of use and to ensure that the page doesn't reach critical mass they are split up. They are all there, they just are not on one page. To list all 3500+ on one page would not only make the article difficult to read, navigate and edit it would far exceed the reasonable length an article should be.--Kumioko (talk) 15:24, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Further comments
- "the 3,464th will be presented April 8th, 2008)" makes the list unstable, and see WP:DATE for that date.
- "1863-1973 " en-dash needed.
- "The following is a complete "... not really, it's a list of some and a lot of forks to other articles which may or may not be complete.
- Y Done, It is a complete list if you include all the forks. Again, it is not reasonable to include all of the recipients on one page so this is the only way to do it without the article hitting critical mass. If wikipedia has a rule that says that an article cannot become GA status or higher if it has forks then we need to add an exception for extremely large articles. If an article can never be allowed to achieve greatness then it should be deleted. Otherwise it would just be a waste of time.--Kumioko (talk) 16:26, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Not sure why it's unreasonable to include all recipients on one page. That's what's being discussed at the Arsenal players list. That's why I can't support right now. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:38, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- If you check out List of Medal of Honor recipients for the American Civil War: A-L you will see that list has exceeded 100kb and it has been suggested that it be split up. Also bear in mind that the American Civil war list is already 1 of 2 and that it doesn't have anywhere near the info it will need to reach GA status some day. If you add together all of the recipients and assuming the page has all the info required for GA status I suspect they will be close to a 500k article.
- Not if you transclude the articles. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:50, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Not sure what you mean, could you give me an example?--Kumioko (talk) 21:09, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Sure, have a look at List of Latin phrases (full) - it transcludes three large lists into a single page. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:09, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- I see what you mean now but that list is extremely long, its knowwhere near FL status and its less than half the size of what the Medal of Honor list would be.--Kumioko (talk) 16:46, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Not sure what you mean, could you give me an example?--Kumioko (talk) 21:09, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Not if you transclude the articles. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:50, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- If you check out List of Medal of Honor recipients for the American Civil War: A-L you will see that list has exceeded 100kb and it has been suggested that it be split up. Also bear in mind that the American Civil war list is already 1 of 2 and that it doesn't have anywhere near the info it will need to reach GA status some day. If you add together all of the recipients and assuming the page has all the info required for GA status I suspect they will be close to a 500k article.
- Not sure why it's unreasonable to include all recipients on one page. That's what's being discussed at the Arsenal players list. That's why I can't support right now. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:38, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- (Outdent) The List of Victoria Cross recipients by nationality has a similar pattern, I do believe. It's an acceptable standard for long lists with easily defined sections to have the exceedingly large parts moved into seperate lists. The list of latin phrases is not a FL, but VC is, so it has a precedent that is applicable here, especially since it is a list almost exactly like the Medal of Honor listing. Cromdog (talk) 23:20, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- Y Done, It is a complete list if you include all the forks. Again, it is not reasonable to include all of the recipients on one page so this is the only way to do it without the article hitting critical mass. If wikipedia has a rule that says that an article cannot become GA status or higher if it has forks then we need to add an exception for extremely large articles. If an article can never be allowed to achieve greatness then it should be deleted. Otherwise it would just be a waste of time.--Kumioko (talk) 16:26, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- "The Medal of Honor" = avoid The in headings per WP:HEAD.
- Ref [2] needs placing after the comma.
- The rest of the Medal of Honor section has no citation, e.g. the quote and the comparisons with the VC etc.
- Korean expedition has no references.
- Nor does Samoan Civil War.
- Nor the whole of the Boxer Rebellion section.
- " Two time " in captions, why not two-time?
- "1916-1924." en dash required.Y Done and no citations in this section either.
- "The immediate cause of the war was the June 28, 1914 assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand, heir to the Austro-Hungarian throne, by Gavrilo Princip, a Bosnian Serb citizen of Austria-Hungary and member of the Black Hand. The retaliation by Austria-Hungary against Serbia activated a series of alliances that set off a chain reaction of war declarations. Within a month, much of Europe was in a state of open warfare." no citations.
- So according to your key, none of the awards were made posthumously until 1993?
- Y Done Again, if you look at the forks they were, its just that on this page there are none until you get to that. You seem to be stuck on the forks thing, if you insist that is the only way to pass it I will add all of the recipients to one page, but I don't recommend it.--Kumioko (talk) 16:26, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, no, I was just ensuring that none of the other recipients on this page were posthumous recipients. The thing is that in the lead you say more posthumous awards are made than not, and this table (exc. forks) tells the opposite story. That's confusing. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- The list of unknown soldiers is odd, you talk about Canadians and then there's just a list of unknown soldiers.
- So some more work and still the outcome of the Arsenal list before I can support. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:22, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- I am going to wait on doing any more changes until the Arsenal debate stabilizes, because if they come back and say that it must contain all players/recipients then this article will never reach GA status because it will be too big to edit or read. Sorry if my attitude seems bad but for this article to be held up because we chose to split it up into digestible peaces is ridiculous to me.--Kumioko (talk) 16:53, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry that this has occurred while you're mid-FLC, but please don't take just my opinion into account. The consensus rules and just because I'm going to oppose until the Arsenal situation has resolved itself, it doesn't mean others will. You're perfectly entitled to hold the opinion that the entire list in one page is ridiculous, just as a lot of us have at WP:FOOTBALL. But the NHL guys are arguing the list is incomplete without everyone. Your forks may or may not contain every person but that now means that a FLC would need to check all subforks for completeness, so the whole FLC process would involve reviewing every fork from the main FL. If this is the way forward, then so be it. But in the meantime, don't be disheartened by me, please continue and resolve the other issues (which need to be sorted anyway, most are MOS issues) and other folks may overlook the ongoing strife and support anyway. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:58, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- I am going to wait on doing any more changes until the Arsenal debate stabilizes, because if they come back and say that it must contain all players/recipients then this article will never reach GA status because it will be too big to edit or read. Sorry if my attitude seems bad but for this article to be held up because we chose to split it up into digestible peaces is ridiculous to me.--Kumioko (talk) 16:53, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- "For years, the citations highlighting these acts resided in archives" Try to be more specific on how many years
- "and only sporadically were printed" sounds like Yoda language when compared with "and were only sporadically printed"
- As the "American Civil War", "Indian Wars", "Spanish-American War" "Philippine-American War", "Boxer Rebellion", "United States occupation of Veracruz, 1914", "World War II", "Korean War", "Vietnam War", and "Peacetime" sections send the reader off to another page, some prose is needed here.
- For this one I would like to request some clarification. I believe since the page that the actual list resides on will have an outline of the battle or war I shouldn't put it on this list as well, but I could put a shortened version and say something referring the reader to the corect list page. Would that be acceptable? I did the American Civil War and the Indian Wars entries as an example.--Kumioko (talk) 22:09, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Something like that is fine, although I don't think the sentence "See the link below" is necessary. Also, those main page links should go before the prose. -- Matthew 22:38, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- For this one I would like to request some clarification. I believe since the page that the actual list resides on will have an outline of the battle or war I shouldn't put it on this list as well, but I could put a shortened version and say something referring the reader to the corect list page. Would that be acceptable? I did the American Civil War and the Indian Wars entries as an example.--Kumioko (talk) 22:09, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- All the prose needs citations now:
- Anything in quotes, such as ""…conspicuously by gallantry and intrepidity at the..."
- The sentence Because of its nature, the medal is commonly awarded posthumously.
- The Medal of Honor is the highest military decoration awarded by the United States government
- I would say each sentence in the Civil war section
- Unbold "American Civil War"Y Done--Kumioko (talk) 20:18, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- and "Indian Wars" in the prose, and wikilink
- More info on Indian Wars: How many were awarded, how many posthumously, etc
- Unbold "United States expedition to Korea", and link to United States expedition to Korea instead, at the same time removing {{main}}
- Y Done--Kumioko (talk) 20:18, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- Again, all facts presented need referencing
- The rows for John Andrews, Patrick H. Grace, Michael McNamara (Medal of Honor), and Hugh Purvis aren't inline with the others
- Use piping to link the names with "(Medal of Honor)" so instead of John Andrews (Medal of Honor), it's just John Andrews
- If you can make this work please do, I have yet to figure out how to use pipes in the name when useing the nowrap and sort name templates.--Kumioko (talk) 21:54, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- Hmm.. TRM will probably be able to help if you ask. I've only used sortable tables once and don't know how to do it either. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 00:19, 28 March, 2008
- If you can make this work please do, I have yet to figure out how to use pipes in the name when useing the nowrap and sort name templates.--Kumioko (talk) 21:54, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- Unbold "Spanish American War" and link per comment above
- Reference each fact
- Same for
Samoan WarEvery other section — Unbolded and link, remove {{main}} where it links to the War and not the list, and reference each presented fact - The Haiti list is really narrow. I'd move those pictures to a horizontal gallery
- " This along with the *, indicates that the Medal of Honor was awarded posthumously" — "This along with the *," sounds clumsy
- This is the standard formatting and statement used on all the other lists that have made it to featured status which contain posthumous recipients. If I change it here it should be changed on ALL of the others and something should be documented to say what it should say. For now I am leaving this as is.--Kumioko (talk) 20:21, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- Why "War in Afghanistan (2001–present)" when no other has the date in the header?
- Y Done--Kumioko (talk) 20:18, 27 March 2008 (UTC)-- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 18:51, 27 March, 2008
- Are you kidding, some of this is exactly what was already there and I changed per somone elses comments. Some of this makes sense though and I will start working on it.--Kumioko (talk) 19:16, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- No, I'm not kidding, and which parts were already there? this diff between the 17th when the nom was put forward and now would suggest otherwise. If any other clarification is needed though, let me know.
- Just a quick note - it's better not to strike out, hide, or otherwise alter people's comments, per the FLC procedure "Contributors should allow reviewers the opportunity to do this themselves; if you feel that the matter has been addressed, say so rather than striking out the reviewer's text." Many people will do this when they feel their comments have been addressed to their satisfaction. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 00:19, 28 March, 2008
- No, I'm not kidding, and which parts were already there? this diff between the 17th when the nom was put forward and now would suggest otherwise. If any other clarification is needed though, let me know.
- Why no prose for the Second Haiti section?
- There is no article on wikipedia yet for this. Once its created I will gladly add it.--Kumioko (talk) 20:22, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
- Just because there's no existing Wikipedia article, doesn't mean nothing can be added. If we looked at things that way, Wikipedia would never have gotten off the ground -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 00:19, 28 March, 2008
- Thats not what I meant, there is very little information for that period, other than the fact that 2 Marines got the Medal of Honor I have not seen any other documentation that documents the 2nd Campaign. Perhaps you can find some or know someone who does have some.--Kumioko (talk) 18:30, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
- Ah, now I understand. If that is the case, is it definitely a second campaign? Note the wording for the first one: "[It] began on July 28, 1915 and ended in mid-August, 1934. Other occupations include ones that began in 1994 and 2004 (though under the UN banner, the US was the prime mover of the actions)." Perhaps it would be better to move these two recipients to this main section as the dates, 1919-20 coincide with the dates given for the first, 1915-1934? -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 18:58, 28 March, 2008
- Thats not what I meant, there is very little information for that period, other than the fact that 2 Marines got the Medal of Honor I have not seen any other documentation that documents the 2nd Campaign. Perhaps you can find some or know someone who does have some.--Kumioko (talk) 18:30, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
- Just because there's no existing Wikipedia article, doesn't mean nothing can be added. If we looked at things that way, Wikipedia would never have gotten off the ground -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 00:19, 28 March, 2008
- There is no article on wikipedia yet for this. Once its created I will gladly add it.--Kumioko (talk) 20:22, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
Support though I had a thought last night. If you gave each section here their own page instead of having 5 or 6 lists and then redirects to all others, brought them all to FLC and passed them, you could use this page as the main one for a Featured Topic. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 14:24, 29 March, 2008
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- Thanks, My plan has been to get all the Medal of Honor lists up to featured status. Once approved this will be the 2nd, I am working on the Korean war now and should have it ready in a few more days and then I will submit the next one (Probaly either the Philippine-American War, or the Boxer rebellion but I have to create missing pages for most of the ones that are left). The only problem with this is that most of the ones that are left on this page in my opinion don't have enough (less than 10 rows) to make a good list and therefore likely would not pass on their own. I suppose it is possible to simply incorporate these small lists into the main articles but in some cases the main articles are already very long. I do like the idea of making it a featured topic though.--Kumioko (talk) 13:22, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comment Great list. One quick thing.
This along with the *, indicates that the Medal of Honor was awarded posthumously
Any reason to have both the background and *. I believe the background color is sufficient. PGPirate 15:31, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
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- I would tend to agree however that is the format used by all the other articles with posthumous recipients that have made it to FL status. I can easily remove the * but I only want to do that if we make a consensus to do it for all of the others as well. Otherwise it will be confusing to the readers if we have some one way and other another way.--Kumioko (talk) 16:47, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, I have to disagree with PGPirate here, for a change ;-) ! Check out the manual of style, read Wikipedia:MOSCOLOR#Formatting issues where it suggests that colour coding alone is insufficient. The asterisk + colour colour coding meets WP:MOS. All good. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:49, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- I would tend to agree however that is the format used by all the other articles with posthumous recipients that have made it to FL status. I can easily remove the * but I only want to do that if we make a consensus to do it for all of the others as well. Otherwise it will be confusing to the readers if we have some one way and other another way.--Kumioko (talk) 16:47, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments Definately a good list. I only have a few comments/suggestions. First, the wdith of the columns should ideally be kept consistent. This is an aethetic issue, but it also has ramifications for the content: the notes section in some of the tables gets really really squished. Take a look at Ross L. Iams' entry and you'll see what I mean. To solve this problem, you could probably shrink the name column(s) a bit. Additionally, the Korean Expedition table should be kept consistent as well, even though there's no images to its right. Also part of the problem is that some of the notes are very wordy, and at times POV. For instance: "desperate hand-to-hand combat", "selflessly hurled himself", "remained unflinchingly in this dangerous position and gave his soundings with coolness and accuracy under a heavy fire.", etc. Lastly, the posthumous awards is a good, but I'm not sure why you need the grey box AND the star. Just the grey background should suffice. Drewcifer (talk) 20:11, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Again, on the colour/star issue, read Wikipedia:MOSCOLOR#Formatting issues please. Colours alone are not enough. Thanks. The Rambling Man (talk) 23:32, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments by ERcheck:
- List_of_Medal_of_Honor_recipients#American_Civil_War — "nearly 1522 were awarded" — the word "nearly" does not make sense in this context as 1522 is an exact number.
- List_of_Medal_of_Honor_recipients#Invasion_and_occupation_of_Haiti — The way the lead paragraph is worded, it begs the question of whether any Medals of Honor were awarded for the later occupations. If not, then rather than distract with that detail, omit "first" and just put the year.
- List_of_Medal_of_Honor_recipients#Korean Expedition — "the reason for the presence of the American military expeditionary force in Korea was..." — please provide citation.
- Lead-in paragraphs for each section — The introductory paragraphs in each section are inconsistent:
- Some provide citations with regard to details of the conflict, others don't. I favor citations — especially when the phrase "the reason for..." is used, I look for a citation.
- Some list the number of recipients and others don't — this applies to both the sections with or without main articles. I think each section should give the number of recepients, not just a synposis of the conflict.
- In general, the language/syntax needs to be tightened up in the prose.
— ERcheck (talk) 14:54, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Edmonton Oilers seasons
I'll withdraw this and come back after I fix everything below. Thanks - Milk's favorite Cookie 15:40, 12 April 2008 (UTC) I have worked hard on this list. It is well referenced, well written, the lead looks good, and is very informative. It overall looks like a good featured list. Thanks. - Milks F'avorite Cookie 22:23, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose No major issues with the tables, but the lead contains some language more suited to a magazine than an encyclopedia, and overuses the passive voice.
- What does "charter member" mean? (I'm pretty sure I know, but it is unclear to the general reader)
upstart WHA - something of a colloquialism, and has a slight feel of POV. Cinderella run is another example.- known as the Alberta Oilers for their first season after their Calgary counterparts were unable to play. Who are these Calgary counterparts, and what relation does it bear to the name Alberta Oilers?
- Passive voice - phrasing such as They would quickly find success and the Oilers would achieve what is generally regarded as the last dynasty is cleaner and clearer when the simple past tense is used; They found success quickly, the Oilers achieved what is generally regarded as the last dynasty.
Edmonton fell to the Winnipeg Jets. They lost. No falling was involved.The 1990s was dominated by playoff failures "Dominated" is inappropriate here.- In the tables, division names could do with wikilinking upon the first mention for context. Oldelpaso (talk) 11:19, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- "This list documents the records and playoff results the Oilers 35 year history " missing some part of the sentence here?
- Per Oldelpaso, the are a few phrases which need de-journalising and re-encyclopaedia-ing.
- If you use WHA and NHL then at least explain them as abbreviations so the first time you say National Hockey League, put (NHL) afterwards.
- Don't like the way the reference cells come and go.
- You could merge both tables and then make the result sortable.
- Split the Finish column. What does "5th, Canadian" mean to a non-expert?
- Interesting you include the Alberta Oilers while the Carolina Hurricanes seasons is very dedicated to not include anything other than that specific franchise.
- Yes, for consistency that one season should have it's own article and be nommed as a FL! -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 23:27, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- So, oppose until these are resolved. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:09, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- Why aren't the tables rendered in the same way as the other FL hockey season pages, Frölunda HC seasons and Calgary Flames seasons?
- My above reply to TRM's comment isn't supposed to be taken seriously
-- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 23:27, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment Good work so far, but I have to say I agree that the table should mimic the other NHL articles for consistency. Also, I'm not sure inline citations are necessary in this list. A general references section would be sufficient, and is cleaner. Resolute 02:39, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- *Interesting you include the Alberta Oilers while the Carolina Hurricanes seasons is very dedicated to not include anything other than that specific franchise.
- That would be because it is the same specific franchise. The "Alberta Oilers" and the "Edmonton Oilers" were the same incarnation of the same franchise, simply renamed. Akin to the Mighty Ducks of Anaheim and the Anaheim Ducks. Same franchise, same incarnation, just a simple rename. Resolute 02:39, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- So the NHL season lists are confusing I'm afraid. To you puck happy fans this is all obvious but featured content has to be accessible and understandable to non-expert readers. Telling me that the MD of A and the AD are the same equals the Alberta Oilers = Edmonton Oilers makes no sense. The first franchise is a rename of the franchise, not a "relocation", the second is the same name of the franchise, just a different location. How confusing for non-experts. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:00, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, no the second is not a different location either. Edmonton is in Alberta, and the team always played in Edmonton, and only Edmonton. As was noted above, this needed to be clarified better in the article. My argument was that this is not comparable to the Carolina Hurricanes list. Resolute 14:37, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- So the NHL season lists are confusing I'm afraid. To you puck happy fans this is all obvious but featured content has to be accessible and understandable to non-expert readers. Telling me that the MD of A and the AD are the same equals the Alberta Oilers = Edmonton Oilers makes no sense. The first franchise is a rename of the franchise, not a "relocation", the second is the same name of the franchise, just a different location. How confusing for non-experts. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:00, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- That would be because it is the same specific franchise. The "Alberta Oilers" and the "Edmonton Oilers" were the same incarnation of the same franchise, simply renamed. Akin to the Mighty Ducks of Anaheim and the Anaheim Ducks. Same franchise, same incarnation, just a simple rename. Resolute 02:39, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- I'll agree with you that there needs to be some uniform consistency established in this regard, but there needs to be some clarification: The Albera Oilers were based in Edmonton, and after the first season renamed themselves the Edmonton Oilers. Part of the confusion is that this was done in the WHA, which in itself was a rather confusing experiment in the history of hockey. Kaiser matias (talk) 02:27, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment Not really sure why its so difficult to understand that when a team is in a different location it is a very different situation from a team in the same city with a different name. -Djsasso (talk) 17:06, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- When the team moved, did it take all the players, managers, behind-the-scenes people, or did they all lose their jobs and the team rehired new everybody. A location change coupled with a name change doesn't change the fact that the team is the same -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:40, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- A location and name change certainly do add up to a legitimate place to split an article. Because the most important thing changed. The fans. And I am not saying they aren't the same team. I am just saying that it became the consensus in the past to split articles at the point where they changed locations. (ie Montreal Expos/Washington Nationals in MLB. Winnipeg Jets/Phoenix Coyotes in hockey) -Djsasso (talk) 19:44, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- If the fans were the most important thing, why doesn't Fans of Edmonton Oilers exist? And did not one single fan follow the team when it moved? It's also not the consensus across all sports: Manchester City, Wimbledon F.C. and Tottenham Hotspurs, Wigan Warriors, though these are English teams, granted. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 20:36, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- I meant that comment as in, the people who are going to look up the page are less likely to care about the history from when the team wasn't in their city etc. and if they do they can follow the well placed link to the other incarnation's page. When pages get too large you are supposed to split out parts of it at places that make sense to seperate out. The most obvious place to do so in sports franchises is when they move locations. -Djsasso (talk) 20:48, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- If the fans were the most important thing, why doesn't Fans of Edmonton Oilers exist? And did not one single fan follow the team when it moved? It's also not the consensus across all sports: Manchester City, Wimbledon F.C. and Tottenham Hotspurs, Wigan Warriors, though these are English teams, granted. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 20:36, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- A location and name change certainly do add up to a legitimate place to split an article. Because the most important thing changed. The fans. And I am not saying they aren't the same team. I am just saying that it became the consensus in the past to split articles at the point where they changed locations. (ie Montreal Expos/Washington Nationals in MLB. Winnipeg Jets/Phoenix Coyotes in hockey) -Djsasso (talk) 19:44, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- lead english needs to be improved
- lead should specify what oilers are, e.g. professional ice hockey club
- title should be 'List of Edmonton Oilers seasons' per WP:SAL
Alaney2k (talk) 20:06, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- I don't really edit these articles myself. But I believe these articles aren't considered stand alone lists. Which is why Calgary Flames seasons was featured without being List of. That being said I see you just went and moved them all without checking the reasoning for the lack of List of in the title. I believe this falls under the timelines exception on WP:SAL. -Djsasso (talk) 20:08, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Stand-alone means an article on its own, embedded is within an article. Alaney2k (talk) 20:10, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- If you read further in the sentence though it says that consists of a list of links. These pages do not mearly contain a list of links. They contain prose and information as well. -Djsasso (talk) 20:12, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Team Name seasons is the standard across all sports for how these pages are named. See New York Yankees seasons, New York Jets seasons and Los Angeles Lakers seasons for example. -Djsasso (talk) 20:15, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
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Stand-alone lists and "lists of links" are Wikipedia articles that contain primarily a list. The list usually consist of links to articles in a particular subject area, such as people or places or a timeline of events.
- WP:SAL has been around since 2003. Not likely that it predates it. And it doesn't primarily consist of a list of links. It primarily consists of statistical information. -Djsasso (talk) 20:21, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- An equivalent might be List_of_social_networking_websites, mentioned on WP:SAL Alaney2k (talk) 20:36, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- I don't see that as an equivalent as it is still just a directory of links. This is more than a directory of links. -Djsasso (talk) 20:37, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- There are links and info. Like the Oilers one. And why would WP:SAL not be higher precedence than sports convention? Sports is in every-day life, not a high-ranking category. Alaney2k (talk) 20:40, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Again because this is closer to an article than a list. The example you showed was links with names for the links and the purpose of the page was the links. This page is about the statistics, not about the coincidental links to other pages. The purpose of this page isn't to make a directory for the season articles. These pages were split off from the main team pages to save on the size of the main team pages. -Djsasso (talk) 20:42, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- There is –far– more info in the particular season pages. There are two purposes to Edmonton Oilers seasons. 1. Link to season articles. 2. List of seasons as a whole. The info is anecdotal. Smells like a stand-alone list to me. :-) It's not a prose article at all. It has a lead, and that is covered in WP:SAL. Alaney2k (talk) 20:58, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Again because this is closer to an article than a list. The example you showed was links with names for the links and the purpose of the page was the links. This page is about the statistics, not about the coincidental links to other pages. The purpose of this page isn't to make a directory for the season articles. These pages were split off from the main team pages to save on the size of the main team pages. -Djsasso (talk) 20:42, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- There are links and info. Like the Oilers one. And why would WP:SAL not be higher precedence than sports convention? Sports is in every-day life, not a high-ranking category. Alaney2k (talk) 20:40, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- I don't see that as an equivalent as it is still just a directory of links. This is more than a directory of links. -Djsasso (talk) 20:37, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- An equivalent might be List_of_social_networking_websites, mentioned on WP:SAL Alaney2k (talk) 20:36, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- WP:SAL has been around since 2003. Not likely that it predates it. And it doesn't primarily consist of a list of links. It primarily consists of statistical information. -Djsasso (talk) 20:21, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Stand-alone means an article on its own, embedded is within an article. Alaney2k (talk) 20:10, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
Comment Unlike the Carolina Hurricanes season article up for FL, this one does include the WHA years and should be applauded for having it there. It is not the standard for WP:HOCKEY though why couldn't it be the standard for WP:HOCKEY? Alaney2k (talk) 22:17, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Because the WHA days of the Whalers/Hurricanes franchise is contained within Hartford Whalers seasons. The Edmonton Oilers have had a continuous history in one market since the team was founded. Resolute 23:44, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Metallica discography
Self nomination I've been working on this periodically for a while now and really got into it about a week ago. It's ready now. I left out the b-sides because they are all demos, live, and covers. There are no actual non-album tracks. If you want to see them, they can be found here. I'm welcome to any comments and suggestions. Thanks, Burningclean [speak] 21:55, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
Support Cool man. Drewcifer (talk) 02:32, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Some of the certification cells are center aligned.
- A few are still wacky.
- How?
The Tributes and Live albums sections are still center aligned. Those columns could still be made less wide with a<br
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- How?
- A few are still wacky.
A pound sign and an abbreviation to go along with the catalog numbers would make them clearer.Alot of the column widths are all over the place. Try and keep similar columns consistent between tables.I've set album widths to 250 and song widths to 200.Looks good, except the EP table.Done.
The "RIAA" column in the singles isn't clear enough. I assume you wanted to keep it a relatively narrow column, so you could put "cert." on the next line, keeping the column the same width.I think "format" should probably be "formats", since all of the reseases have been released in multiple formats.Drewcifer (talk) 02:00, 6 April 2008 (UTC)- Thanks Drew. Burningclean [speak] 16:29, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- Some of the certification cells are center aligned.
- Also, fairly minor, but some of the wider columns could be made a little less wide with a simple
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certification". Those cells are already tall enough to allow a second line, might as well use it. Drewcifer (talk) 05:45, 7 April 2008 (UTC)- Done. This discog is a beast! Burningclean [speak] 22:57, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yea man, I'm working on a similarly beastly discog right now too.
One more thing, why is the Directors column so small? Alot of the rows are unnecessarily tall because the text in that column is so squished.Drewcifer (talk) 07:15, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Thanks again. Burningclean [speak] 01:11, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
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- See The Prodigy discography for a neater way to keep a certifications (from more than two Certifiers) for the Albums. The code is kinda complex for Prodigy, so you can make it just like The Strokes discography.
- I think I'll go with the latter. The Prodigy discog make my brain numb :P
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- Just as a note, I made the code in the Prodigy discography the way it is so that the actual certification names would be aligned along a common line, as opposed to back and forth. I dunno if it was worth all the code, but that's why it's like that. Drewcifer (talk) 06:54, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah Burning, I know what you mean, I wrote The Strokes discog, and attempted the Prodigy certs code...
- Just as a note, I made the code in the Prodigy discography the way it is so that the actual certification names would be aligned along a common line, as opposed to back and forth. I dunno if it was worth all the code, but that's why it's like that. Drewcifer (talk) 06:54, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
Keep EPs after studio album. Also, the billboard peak can just be a bullet point.US main, mod -->Main, Mod. platinum, gold -->Platinum, Gold (throughout)."I Disappear" single entry is ugly. Remove a couple of the cites (BEL can definitely go, no need to list each and every territory. obviously there are a number of countries in the world where the band charted but its not listed here.) and expand the album column.The Music videos column widths suck :DViedos: Billboard peak --> Billboard 200 peak? Be specific. Column widths suck again.- More bullet point info for the Film.
- Like what? I stole the format from Tenacious D discography.
The Paradise Lost and Rock Band songs should each have their own row.- Lead needs rewriting (not just a ce), why no mention that the Black Album was their most commercial and that it brought the to the mainstream? Too much info on their next album/current status. And what does "Rick Rubin is producing the album; he is the first new producer for Metallica since 1990's Metallica, which was produced by Rock." mean?
- Hmm... I'll figure one out. The lead is the part I hate when writing :P
- Refs need formatting. Link first instance of publisher, article name in "quotes" blah blah.
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- Oh wait I was looking at the Metallica article. Fix those then :P.
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- I just might :D/=<
- If Sound of the Beast hasn't been used as a ref, why is it listed under References? I recommend checking books for chart positions, because many online sources may be be incomplete about the 1980s; we're having such a problem with R.E.M.'s discography. It seems very odd that none of Metallica's early singles (and "Master of Puppets"!) never charted. indopug (talk) 06:43, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Sound of the Beast is used in ref 5. Metallica didn't release any songs to airplay until ...And Justice for All. The only way their early singles were available were at gigs for the most part. I can't find a reliable source for that, I just know it (my dad was a gigger in the 80s and caught the 'tallica) Burningclean [speak] 18:48, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- I too am reasonably sure that "One" was the band's first single to chart. However just to be safe, you should look at the chart information at allmusic.com as well, which is strangely more complete than the chart info at billboard.com (going back to our work on the R.E.M. discography, I noticed that whole swaths of singles I knew had charted weren't listed for some reason). WesleyDodds (talk) 22:55, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, I checked AMG; nothing different. Burningclean [speak] 23:00, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- See The Prodigy discography for a neater way to keep a certifications (from more than two Certifiers) for the Albums. The code is kinda complex for Prodigy, so you can make it just like The Strokes discography.
- Comment Where does the discography mention the following;
Metallica's cover of "The Ecstacy of Gold", featured on the tribute album We All Love Ennio Morricone.Metallica's cover of "53rd & 3rd", featured on the tribute album We're A Happy Family - A Tribute To The Ramones.Metallica's cover of Queen's "Stone Cold Crazy", originally featured on the tribute album Rubaiyat – Elektra's 40th Anniversary.
Until the above three are featured in the discography, it's incomplete. LuciferMorgan (talk) 12:52, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks. Do you have any interest in any other comments/support/oppose? Burningclean [speak] 19:54, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- The Ramones tribute album which featured Metallica was actually released in 2003, and not 1999. LuciferMorgan (talk) 19:06, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- Fixed. Thanks. Burningclean [speak] 22:53, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, Stone Cold Crazy is on the Garage, Inc album - I was thinking that there were some missing songs, like "The Prince", and "Killing Time", from the Black album era singles, but those are all on the Garage, Inc album, too. Skeletor2112 (talk) 05:35, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, if you check Garage, Inc.'s liner notes, you'd discover "Stone Cold Crazy" was originally on Rubaiyat. In fact, all the songs on the second disc were previously released elsewhere on singles, comps etc. LuciferMorgan (talk) 18:57, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
- I knew that. Did you want me to mention it or something? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Burningclean (talk • contribs)
- Yea, I know it was on the Electra comp, but nearly all of the tracks from disc 2 of Garage Inc are from different releases, Breadfan, Killing Time, The Prince, even Stone Cold Crazy was the B side of a Black album-era single, IIRC.(I had all of those "cassete singles" back in the day) - should all of those tracks be listed twice on the discog? Skeletor2112 (talk) 11:37, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- They are all listed under the b-sides. Burningclean [speak] 22:03, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yea, I know it was on the Electra comp, but nearly all of the tracks from disc 2 of Garage Inc are from different releases, Breadfan, Killing Time, The Prince, even Stone Cold Crazy was the B side of a Black album-era single, IIRC.(I had all of those "cassete singles" back in the day) - should all of those tracks be listed twice on the discog? Skeletor2112 (talk) 11:37, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- I knew that. Did you want me to mention it or something? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Burningclean (talk • contribs)
- Actually, if you check Garage, Inc.'s liner notes, you'd discover "Stone Cold Crazy" was originally on Rubaiyat. In fact, all the songs on the second disc were previously released elsewhere on singles, comps etc. LuciferMorgan (talk) 18:57, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, Stone Cold Crazy is on the Garage, Inc album - I was thinking that there were some missing songs, like "The Prince", and "Killing Time", from the Black album era singles, but those are all on the Garage, Inc album, too. Skeletor2112 (talk) 05:35, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Fixed. Thanks. Burningclean [speak] 22:53, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- The Ramones tribute album which featured Metallica was actually released in 2003, and not 1999. LuciferMorgan (talk) 19:06, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
- Big glaring omission Now I'm not sure how many miscellaneous track Metallica released before the Black Album, but one that's definitely missing is "Hit the Lights", the very first Metallica recording from the Metal Massacre compilation. Additionally, didn't they re-record that song for a later version of the comp? WesleyDodds (talk) 00:58, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Wow! I missed alot of compilation appearences. I found them all here though. Thanks for mentioning it. I don't know anything about a re-recording though. Never heard about that. Burningclean [speak] 22:53, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
- There are a few different versions, the original, that was done at the last second, which only appears on the first pressing of Metal Massacre, then there is a re-mix that was on all subsequent pressings. There is the No Life 'Til Leather demo version, which has Dave Mustaine and Ron McGovney, and then there is the Kill 'em All album version. Do other discogs leave out demos? Cuz No Life till Leather is a pretty popular one. Skeletor2112 (talk) 05:48, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment Hey man, looks pretty good. Here are a few things I noticed:
- While they originally formed in LA, Metallica is most defenetly a San Fransisco/Bay Aream based band, they left LA in 1982 and havent lived here since.
- "The position for lead guitar was originally held by Lloyd Grant, but he was replaced by Dave Mustaine,[2] with the position for bass guitar was passed on to Ron McGovney.[3]" sounds a little weird.. Lloyd Grant was never really a member, he played one solo on one demo, so I'm not sure he is notable enought to be mentioned here. And the bass sentence sounds odd, 'with the position for bass guitar was passed on to.." you could just say, "with Ron McGovney on bass." And I think the official word is that McGovney was fired.
- "Ex-Flotsam and Jetsam bassist Jason Newsted replaced Burton and recorded four studio albums, two live albums, one cover album, and one EP with the band before leaving tension with other band members saw him leave." The sentence sounds jumbled, especially the last part. Do you need to list off all of the releases w/Newstead? there is already a big list of eps, releases, singles, ect above. you could just say he was with the band from 1988 to 2003 or somthing. And the last part of the sentence is confusing: "and one EP with the band before leaving tension with other band members saw him leave" Somthing like "left due to tension with Hetfield" or somthing like that.
- "He was Metallica's longest standing bassist." - sounds weird, also pretty short.
- " Robert Trujillo (ex-Ozzy Osbourne, Suicidal Tendancies) was offered one million dollars to join Metallica on bass guitar, and accepted.[9] " - Actually, he joined the band and they gave him a million as a "bonus"... the $ thing is not really needed there, you could just say he joined the band.
- "Rick Rubin is producing the album; he is the first new producer for Metallica since 1990's Metallica, which was produced by Rock" - sounds a little choppy. Does this info really need to be included on the discog page?
- "Metallica has sold over 100 million records worldwide, with over 57 million records in the United States alone. This makes the band the most successful thrash metal band of all time." - Second sentence sounds a little weird on its own, Combine them to say "As the most successful thrash metal band of all time, Metallica has sold over 100 million records worldwide, with over 57 million records in the United States alone."
Other than that, looks pretty good, dude, good work! Skeletor2112 (talk) 05:31, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, I'm re-writting the entire lead. Burningclean [speak] 22:05, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
Hey, looking at some of the demo pages for the band - there are quite a few more recordings, (some I've never heard of) but there are some well known ones, like Hit the Lights (album), Power Metal (Metallica album) and No Life 'Til Leather. I'm not up on discogs, but if the Metal Massacre "Hit the Lights" is included, these probably should, too. Skeletor2112 (talk) 06:08, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
- Nahh. Actually I don't think demos are even notable enough to warrent their own articles. Burningclean [speak] 22:05, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
Comment Garage Inc. should be listed as a compilation. WesleyDodds (talk) 06:04, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
- Why? It is all covers. Burningclean [speak] 22:05, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
- But the album was created by compiling previously recorded/released tracks. indopug (talk) 05:54, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- To set the record straight, that can only be said of the second disc. The songs on the first disc were not previously recorded or released. LuciferMorgan (talk) 10:37, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
- But the album was created by compiling previously recorded/released tracks. indopug (talk) 05:54, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
Withdraw nom I'm am going to with draw the nom. I've been busy lately and I need to rewrite the lead. Not much time on my hands to do that. I'll work on the lead as well as any other issues listed here, and then renominate. It shouldn't be too long until it is back up here. I'd say maby a week or two. Thanks for the reviews everyone. Burningclean [speak] 19:41, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Carolina Hurricanes seasons
I *believe* this is a FL. I have reviewed other FLC and fixed most of the mistakes. I do believe it needs a picture, but I haven't found a free photo yet. This can be added later. PGPirate 14:11, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Support as nom
- Comment You need more refs in the lead - one is nowhere near enough. You might (note the emphasis) want to include the results for the other two incarnations as well, because the list seems very short at the minute. weburiedoursecretsinthegarden 16:33, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- I was told that information in the lede only needs to be sourced if not mentioned in the list itself. PGPirate 17:33, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment Pirate, you are correct. WP:LEAD states that no information should be included in the lead that is not in the main body, and a reference should be in the article if the peice of information is not included in the lead. Also, you might want to consider moving it to List of Carolina Hurricane seasons. Juliancolton The storm still blows... 19:32, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- All sports season list I have dealt with use this form.
- Comment Pirate, you are correct. WP:LEAD states that no information should be included in the lead that is not in the main body, and a reference should be in the article if the peice of information is not included in the lead. Also, you might want to consider moving it to List of Carolina Hurricane seasons. Juliancolton The storm still blows... 19:32, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- I was told that information in the lede only needs to be sourced if not mentioned in the list itself. PGPirate 17:33, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Oops.. I expected this to be about hurricanes in The Carolinas, sorted by winter, spring, summer and fall!
- Sorry about the confusion. Some aspects of that list would be short. I can only think of one hurricane in the winter.
- Is there an image to go in the lead? Perhaps a stadium photo or something?
- There isn't one on wikipedia, that I have found yet. I am going to look on flickr for a free image.
- Wikipedia:LEDE#Citations says that cites aren't needed if the rest of the article cites it, however, I see no further mention of them being called New England Whalers or Hartford Whalers
- In the references section, there is Carolina Hurricanes Franchise Timeline which mentions it. Should there be a inline citation as well?
- Finally, and this is the reason that I oppose, the title suggests it's a list of all seasons not just NHL seasons, and as this list is very short anyway I feel it would be better if it was merged with that of New England Whalers' and Hartford Whalers', which would give a complete season-by-season coverage. And also, even if they were using a different name, aren't they essentially the same franchise? -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:33, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- I believe they are different teams. And I would believe most Hurricanes/Whalers fans would think the same thing. Also, Calgary Flames moved from Atlanta, and has two different seasons articles (The Flamers seasons is a FL): Calgary Flames seasons and Atlanta Flames seasons. The only rebuttal with this is the Flames has about 20 more years more in Calgary.
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- Y Done Don't use the small fonts in the key, what's the point? Just makes it more difficult to read.
- "35th for the Hurricanes franchise" but only nine seasons in this list? It's incomplete per Matthew's comments. You could easily split the table into the various named teams. Or you need to modify the name to state clearly what I'm going to see. Either way there's a discrepancy which non-experts will find confusing.
- I change the sentence to this "The 2007–08 season represents the 10th in Raleigh." Is that OK?
- Y Done Don't overcapitalise - Regular Season and Post Season, just season is fine.
- Y Done What is "² " next to the 2005–06 season?
- Y Done Why is 2007–08 season bold?
- Notes should have full stops.
- Notes should be full sentences?
- Y Done "in parenthesis. " parentheses.
So, as per Matthew, I have to oppose primarily over concerns with this list not actually being what it says it is. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:16, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment Would it be ok if I take out most of the Whalers information in the lede to make it a Hurricanes specific list?
- Support Doesn't say it is supposed to cover the Hartford seasons. It is fairly standard to split the incarnations of franchises into seperate articles. This article is well written now and more than meets the standard of other such FLs. -Djsasso (talk) 15:10, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Absolutely nothing "standard" about this. All seasons should be merged here with redirects where appropriate. NFL lists do that. Take a look at Washington Redskins seasons which is also an FL. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:27, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Montreal Expos and Washington Nationals. Calgary Flames and Atlanta Flames, Colorado Avalanche and Quebec Nordiques. Numerous times this has come up and numerous times it was consensus that when a franchise moves it should have a seperate article. -Djsasso (talk) 15:36, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Well it seems odd that you'd do that while the NFL guys have it differently. And their lists are complete. Especially useful when you have fickle franchises who move every few years, I'm sure you'll agree. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:40, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- The idea is usually that each team has its own history and is often considered its own team albeit linked to the old location. Another reason it is often brought up is that there is no reason to try and cram everything onto one page when it can quite succinctly be seperated into two pages to stay under the page size limits. Now the old incaration will obviously not grow anymore. But the new team will continue to grow and eventually the list will be too big and the two teams will be split anyways. -Djsasso (talk) 15:43, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Unless the franchise moves? Sorry, not convinced. It should be on a franchise basis per the NFL seasons which are good, complete, not misleading. Featured lists which are English football club season articles exist with over 100 seasons, they're just fine. I don't think you need to worry about your list becoming too big. Especially compared to the NHL player lists. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:46, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- How is it missleading? The title is Carolina Hurricanes seasons. Not Carolina Huricanes franchise seasons. Its not Hartford Whalers seasons. Its quite clear that the seasons are for the team called the Carolina Hurricanes and not its franchise. It even says it in bold in the first line. Your arguement against the FL smells pretty heavily of WP:POINT because people who edit hockey articles are objecting to one of your soccer lists. -Djsasso (talk) 15:51, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- No not at all. I don't understand why you'd split the franchise. The NFL guys don't, the NHL guys do. Why? And you didn't respond about the length, you won't have a problem with that. As for WP:POINT, I find that accusation a little rude. Until the whole "100% complete list" is resolved, I'm not budging. I've said this at the List of Medal of Honor recipients so don't take it personally. I want to understand what is and what isn't acceptable. An attempt to make a football list acceptable it was suggested it was moved to "...who have made 100 or more appearances". Thus removing the subjectivity. It was rejected. What can we do? I don't know. But if the NHL and the NFL are doing it differently then something's wrong. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:55, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- I would note, that not all of those were NHL teams. Some were professional baseball. NFL actually seems to be the exception to the rule. We never objected to the renaming of the article, we actually supported that idea. -Djsasso (talk) 15:59, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- But the community didn't, so that's that. Until a "general" consensus is achieved, I cannot support partial lists. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:01, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- I would note, that not all of those were NHL teams. Some were professional baseball. NFL actually seems to be the exception to the rule. We never objected to the renaming of the article, we actually supported that idea. -Djsasso (talk) 15:59, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- No not at all. I don't understand why you'd split the franchise. The NFL guys don't, the NHL guys do. Why? And you didn't respond about the length, you won't have a problem with that. As for WP:POINT, I find that accusation a little rude. Until the whole "100% complete list" is resolved, I'm not budging. I've said this at the List of Medal of Honor recipients so don't take it personally. I want to understand what is and what isn't acceptable. An attempt to make a football list acceptable it was suggested it was moved to "...who have made 100 or more appearances". Thus removing the subjectivity. It was rejected. What can we do? I don't know. But if the NHL and the NFL are doing it differently then something's wrong. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:55, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- How is it missleading? The title is Carolina Hurricanes seasons. Not Carolina Huricanes franchise seasons. Its not Hartford Whalers seasons. Its quite clear that the seasons are for the team called the Carolina Hurricanes and not its franchise. It even says it in bold in the first line. Your arguement against the FL smells pretty heavily of WP:POINT because people who edit hockey articles are objecting to one of your soccer lists. -Djsasso (talk) 15:51, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Unless the franchise moves? Sorry, not convinced. It should be on a franchise basis per the NFL seasons which are good, complete, not misleading. Featured lists which are English football club season articles exist with over 100 seasons, they're just fine. I don't think you need to worry about your list becoming too big. Especially compared to the NHL player lists. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:46, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- The idea is usually that each team has its own history and is often considered its own team albeit linked to the old location. Another reason it is often brought up is that there is no reason to try and cram everything onto one page when it can quite succinctly be seperated into two pages to stay under the page size limits. Now the old incaration will obviously not grow anymore. But the new team will continue to grow and eventually the list will be too big and the two teams will be split anyways. -Djsasso (talk) 15:43, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Well it seems odd that you'd do that while the NFL guys have it differently. And their lists are complete. Especially useful when you have fickle franchises who move every few years, I'm sure you'll agree. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:40, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Montreal Expos and Washington Nationals. Calgary Flames and Atlanta Flames, Colorado Avalanche and Quebec Nordiques. Numerous times this has come up and numerous times it was consensus that when a franchise moves it should have a seperate article. -Djsasso (talk) 15:36, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Absolutely nothing "standard" about this. All seasons should be merged here with redirects where appropriate. NFL lists do that. Take a look at Washington Redskins seasons which is also an FL. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:27, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
Which says in the lead that the "Carolina Hurricanes franchise was founded in 1971" and I believe the list should contain the seasons for the franchise. Otherwise it's the list of seasons for when the franchise was known as the Carolina Hurricanes. It should be per the NFL lists. Chicago Bears seasons deals with different leagues as well. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:06, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Ok I guess we will have to agree to disagree. I personally think the sentence This list documents the records and playoff results for all nine seasons the Carolina Hurricanes have completed in the NHL since their relocation from Hartford, Connecticut in 1997. More than covers the ambiguity. -Djsasso (talk) 16:11, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Indeed we will! I look forward to the day someone submits a FLC for an NHL franchise which moved to a new location for a single season. Even nine seasons here is pushing its luck as a list when both NFL and English football seasons sometimes deal with around 100 seasons... The Rambling Man (talk) 16:13, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment What did I do?:) PGPirate 17:56, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- What should I do now?
- I think if you're happy just having the current franchise then do nothing and I'll oppose. If you decide to go the NFL route then I'll support and, I would guess, Djsasso will oppose. Hope for more interest so these minority arguments don't carry so much weight! The Rambling Man (talk) 18:03, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
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- To me, just because a team/franchise in any sport has changed its name or moved to a different stadium (albeit in a different city), doesn't mean they are different. Their histories can all be traced back to the same event at the same point in time, and if it were not for the New England and Hartford Whalers, I doubt the team would exist in the same capacity as it does today. I'm still inclined to oppose, even if the response you get from WP:HOCKEY is that they're different, as they mightn't see it from an outsider's perspective.
- I'm not a football fan, but as an example, Manchester City was originally known as "St. Marks (West Gorton)" and then "Ardwick A.F.C." when it moved to Ardwick. Then they joined the Football league, then changed their name to Man City. Are these three different clubs? I don't think so, and Manchester City F.C. seasons, a Featured List doesn't present it as such. Spurs is another one with name changes and location changes, and their statistics include the earlier named clubs'. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:07, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Name changes in the same location we tend to keep one article. It's the change of cities that we tend to have seperate articles. When pages get larger you are supposed to split out sections into sub articles, as such a natural place to split out part of an article would be when it moves cities. I suppose this is more for the main team articles than lists associated with the team. But I don't see why the lists couldn't follow the examples of the team articles. -Djsasso (talk) 19:11, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- I would like to give my thoughts on this conversation. As a Hurricanes fan, I personally do not care about the Whalers seasons. I believe most fans only care about the team while they are at a specific location. I do not think many New Yorkers would/do follow the LA Dodgers or SF Giants (Both moved from NY) or Baltimore with Indianapolis Colts. Yes on the technical sense, all have lineage to previous locations, but I do not think they are the same team by any stretch. PGPirate 19:46, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Name changes in the same location we tend to keep one article. It's the change of cities that we tend to have seperate articles. When pages get larger you are supposed to split out sections into sub articles, as such a natural place to split out part of an article would be when it moves cities. I suppose this is more for the main team articles than lists associated with the team. But I don't see why the lists couldn't follow the examples of the team articles. -Djsasso (talk) 19:11, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Comment This is an interesting debate, and one I went through on my nomination for Calgary Flames seasons. Rambling Man, I also believe this to be comparable to our debate over the FL status of List of Arsenal F.C. players. Specifically, the need for completeness of a data set. As I argued in that debate, even if the set is split over multiple articles, so long as they are clearly interlinked, and the data set is complete, then each article should be judged worthy. In this case, we have Carolina Hurricanes seasons. What we need is Hartford Whalers seasons. That would complete the set. I'll look to create that article later today. As far as the contention that we should be following the NFL wikiproject's lead, I would respectfully disagree. There is no policy or guideline that argues each project has to mime that of others. WP:HOCKEY has consistently split articles along franchise iterations, and in that vein, lists such as this should follow their parent articles. This article defines itself as being a list of Carolina Hurricanes seasons. The Carolina Hurricanes have only existed since 1997, so this list contains the complete history of seasons for the Carolina Hurricanes incarnation of the franchise. This specific incarnation is obviously closely linked to the New England/Hartford Whalers, and those links should be noted and completed. Beyond that, however, this specific article stands on its own merit. Resolute 20:25, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment interesting reading. But your franchise view of the world is bizarre to us who have the same club for 140 years. Are you suggesting that a franchise who exists for one year is entitled to a FL? I think the NHL project needs a rethink and needs to consider the history of the franchise, not individual instances of it. You guys are pretty different, as far as I know only Wimbledon F.C. (out of around 100 English clubs) has "franchised". As such most English clubs have 100+ years of history and seasons. The seasons are played in different leagues, the leagues have different names, but the English football articles cope. Why can't the NHL articles? As I said, if a franchise lasts a year, you seriously think a FL is appropriate? If so, why? If not why not? The Rambling Man (talk) 23:21, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Obviously not, simply because there isn't enough history. We've seen this already with other types of lists, such as Mark Messier Leadership Award and List of Nunavut general elections, both of which are part of featured topics, though neither is capable of becoming a FL. Specific to this article, I believe the ten year history of the Carolina Hurricanes is sufficient for FL status.
- I'm not sure how the disposition of European football clubs is relevant to that of North American clubs. It is fairly rare for a team to switch leagues, and especially so at the major league levels. Teams operate as part of the league, and as such, are considered franchises of it. while the Whalers/Hurricanes franchise as a whole has a continuous history, even the franchise itself tends to treat each iteration as a relatively independent part of the whole. i.e.: The Hurricanes this year wore a commemorative patch on their jersies celebrating their tenth year in Carolina. That it is the franchises' 35th year has been completely ignored. This reflects the common view of such teams, as expressed above by the nominator: While someone who follows hockey will be aware that the Hurricanes existed previously as the Whalers, when they think about the Carolina Hurricanes, they are thinking of the team that has existed since 1997, not the franchise that was founded in 1972. Resolute
- Comment interesting reading. But your franchise view of the world is bizarre to us who have the same club for 140 years. Are you suggesting that a franchise who exists for one year is entitled to a FL? I think the NHL project needs a rethink and needs to consider the history of the franchise, not individual instances of it. You guys are pretty different, as far as I know only Wimbledon F.C. (out of around 100 English clubs) has "franchised". As such most English clubs have 100+ years of history and seasons. The seasons are played in different leagues, the leagues have different names, but the English football articles cope. Why can't the NHL articles? As I said, if a franchise lasts a year, you seriously think a FL is appropriate? If so, why? If not why not? The Rambling Man (talk) 23:21, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- A minor detail about the NFL and their version of relocated franchises, more a point of personal annoyance but relevent just the same: The Cleveland Browns were relocated to Baltimore in 1996 to become the Baltimore Ravens. Popular opinion proved to be very against this in Cleveland, and so the NFL created a new team in Cleveland, but allowed it to be a reincarnation of the old Browns. This new team got to keep the original Browns history, records, etc, while the Baltimore Ravens are listed as an expansion team.
In short, it proves that the NFL is not exactly uniform when concerning its relocated teams. One team moves and acts as an expansion team, while a true expansion team gets to pretend its been around for 50 years. If anything, this helps to explain that relocated teams are in effect different than the former team it was. Kaiser matias (talk) 07:49, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Support. An image would be ideal, but not necessary. Hopefully someone can get a picture of the Hurricanes Stanley Cup banner, as that would make an ideal image. Resolute 02:42, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
- Comment Irrespective of the points of view, it would be a better article to be like the Redskins season article (IMHO very good) and have the Whalers info. As is, it seems 'not whole', not very strong, missing info. It was a club move, not a 'reinvent', a clear succession. That said, it is what was done with Calgary Flames seasons, per WP:HOCKEY, and it seems weak for that reason too, although they've been around longer. Was that a good precedent? Hmm. Cleveland? That is a special case with negotiated legal terms to govern that special case. Alaney2k (talk) 22:12, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] Bloc Party discography
Self-nomination. This is a list of all releases by British rock group Bloc Party. The list meets all of the criteria, is well sourced and has a comprehensive lead section, it is accurate and detailed without going overboard with useless trivia. weburiedoursecretsinthegarden 18:46, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
- Support This is well sourced, and a nicely written list. Disclaimer: Avoid bold links in the lead per WP:LEAD#Bold title. - Milks F'avorite Cookie 18:58, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
- But look at Feeder discography and Crowded House discography? P.S. Your new sig is very long, code-wise. weburiedoursecretsinthegarden 19:08, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose Definitely a good start, but the list is generally inconsistent with the vast majority of FLC discographies, in ways that I don't think benefit the list in any way. A few examples:
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- These two tables are inconsistent also with the following tables. Again, the tables are colorized unneccessarily.
- Song samples are generally not allowed in discographies since they are fair-use. Furthermore, there is no fair-use rationale for either.
- I'm also not sure what the point is of having the Singles and Compilations albums sortable. I'd recommend making them unsortable, then merging similar cells.
- Also blank cells for releases that didn't chart shouldn't use 9999 in the same font color, but should have a — instead, along with a legend below the table.
- Overall its a good start, but it still needs alot of work. I'd recommend taking a look at other FL discographies for some ideas. Drewcifer (talk) 20:09, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
- The tables with dashes need a legend. Something like
"—" denotes releases that did not chart.
- The dash isn't neccesary in the certifications cell of silent alarm remixed. Just leave that one blank.
- The singles charts need sources.
- The "reissue" dates for the two albums are unnecessary.
- The B-sides section is unneccessary. If you really want to put b-side info in there, why not add another column to the singles table instead of a whole new section?
- The Label/Producer column in compilations is overwikilinked. Only wikilink the first instance of it.
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- Also related to the sources, publisher values should use the site's/publisher's proper name whenever possible (Billboard as opposed www.billboard.com for instance).
- Some of the sources are also problematic. A blog, for instance, is not a reliable source.
- The EPs table isn't consistent with the others. Instead of a comments column, just add the bullet points to the Album details column.
Good work so far! Here's a few more (much minor) suggestions/concerns I have:
- "Chart positions" and "Peak positions" isn't specific enough, it should be changed to "Peak chart positions" or "Chart peak positions", to be more clear. And, obviously, the same thing for both the albums and singles tables
- The width of similar rows in similar columns should be kept consistent wherever possible.
- An External links section would be nice as well. Drewcifer (talk) 00:05, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Note Please don't edit other people's comments, including putting them into hide boxes, it's rude. Also, I didn't consider all of the concerns you moved into the hide box to be fully addressed. Also, I agree with most of indopug's comments, so you can consider those more reasons for my Oppose vote (except for the B-sides thing. As mathew put it, it's a discography, not a songography). Drewcifer (talk) 03:47, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry. weburiedoursecretsinthegarden 13:30, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- Where are the chart positions for EPs?
- Avoid linking in bold lead, per WP:LEAD#Bold title. The above two articles were wrong, and have been fixed. Also, WP:OSE is no excuse for wrongness. Y Done
- Union is a disambig page. Either link to the correct article, or none at all Y Done
- "B-Sides" is an unpopulated section, and should be removed. Y Done
- Don't populate the "B-Sides" section, as this is a discography, not a songography Y Done
- Don't make text too small for poor-sighted people to read. Y Done, bigger (90% compared to 75%)
Otherwise it's okay. I was actually going to work on this about a month ago and nom it myself, but I got sidetracked! -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 23:53, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
I've done most of those things now, if you'd like to check. weburiedoursecretsinthegarden 10:30, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
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I disagree with the above reviewer; link Bloc Party in the bolded lead, it is the first mention. See ALL other discographies and you'll see the same being done. WP:OSE is certainly valid here.THe lead is WAY too long. Absolutely no need to mention AMG ratings or charting positions of singles (unless very important in their career). For a band that has existed for three years, I'd say two medium-sized--if not one big--paragraphs is enough.
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- Better. There's still some stuff that can go and the lead could use a copy-edit. Eg: Mercury prize-nominated is not worthy of mention and the first sentence is a bit too long (shift the founding members to the next sentence). The Irish and Aussie chartings for "The Prayer" can go.
"It was in essence their breakthrough album" - awful POV and unencyclopedic tone too. That sentence also never seems to end, going on and on and on...- Their first single, She's Hearing Voices - MoS?
- Numbers below 10 should be named (seven, not 7). I think listing eighteen would be better than 18 too.
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- 38? --> thirty-eight; you've worded the others.
For the record label no need of Recordings, Wichita/V2 will do.Where are the refs for chart positions for each country in the studio albums table? Make it like, say, The Prodigy discography.- Where are the B-sides? If you think it was better with the B-sides, you don't need to remove it. I prefer them there, especially if they are decent/important songs. Plenty of other discogs have a b-sides table; not including them is the stylistic choice of the above reviweer which you don't need to follow.
- If you are removing the B-sides then why have such a detailed Compilation appearances; it might be enough to just list stuff not found on Studio albums/otherwise unreleased stuff. Place refs next to individual songs, not in a separate column.
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- Look at The Libertines discography for what I think is a neater way to have the Compilation appearances section. The current name implies that no original music is recorded for these albums at all (being their appearances on compilations), while actually quite a few soundtracks have original music. Change "O.S.T" to "soundtrack" (small case). Also, the Label column is kinda unnecessary and the Type column is kinda obvious (Just click on the album). A Comments column tells where else the song is found, i.e, which Bloc Party album or if it were an original recording. Thoughts?
Not really related but that band template right at the bottom should be updated to the way it is for other bands.That ref with album details is odd. Remove it, as that info is kinda self-referential to the albums themselves.- Silent Alarm Remixed should be somehwere else, or at least mention that it is a remix album. It was rather puzzling to see that the 2nd album performed so poorly compared to the others.
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- Might be better to include it in another table called Compilations. A ref saying that its a remix album isn't the way; below Label, have a sentence that says that it is a remix. The single charting can be included that way too, *[[UK Albums Chart]] peak: 54<ref>
- In the albums column make Certifications --> UK certifications, linked to British Phonographic Industry.
- UK, IRE, AUS... Reduce size, again see Prodigy discog.
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- For the Singles table? Keep the refs consistently below the Chart name there.
- Check if the refs are formatted properly.
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- USA -->US. Change throughout.
- overlinking: after the albums section no need to link the albums/record labels once again.
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- Studio albums/EPs still linked in the Singles table.
- indopug (talk) 07:22, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- OK, you've essentially said the exact opposite to what Matthew did. Does it matter if I follow one person's over the other? weburiedoursecretsinthegarden 08:07, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Not really. There may be many more people who disagree with me. The way I see it though is as I said above. A discog lists releases. B sides appear on releases that are already mentioned. But if you're going to be super-consise and add B-sides, then why not the tracks that appear on all the albums? If someone wants to see the single's B-sides, they click on the single's release. If they want to see an album's tracks, they cick on the album. As for compilations, that for me is different as not each compilation has an article, so for thoroughness, the tracks should be mentioned. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 17:10, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- OK, you've essentially said the exact opposite to what Matthew did. Does it matter if I follow one person's over the other? weburiedoursecretsinthegarden 08:07, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
- Can't believe this hasn't been brought up yet; haven't the band made any Music videos!? (check mvdbase.com) What about video albums/DVDs? Check for it. indopug (talk) 06:18, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] List of state highways in Washington
It has recently gone through a major renovation and is a very clean list. — ComputerGuy890100Talk to meWhat I've done to help Wikipedia 21:18, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose
- The lead needs to be expanded.
- The Notes located in the lead should be converted to footnotes.
- The "Notes" column should be removed, since there are only three notes, which could be converted to footnotes, as well. Currently, this column can't be sorted anyway.
- Combine the miles and kilometers into one column titled "Length". Write the km in parenthesis.
- Round miles and km to the nearest whole number.
- Why are some of the rows colored gray? Explanation is needed.
- Overall, too many redlinks throughout the list.
--Crzycheetah 21:55, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
- To answer 6 and 7, the gray rows are deleted routes and the red links are for the articles that 'will be created by WP:WASH or Wikipedia:WikiProject Washington. — ComputerGuy890100Talk to meWhat I've done to help Wikipedia 22:01, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- I concur with the above comments although I think the length column should be rounded to the nearest tenth, some of them are less than a mile, so the tenths digit is needed
- What exactly do you mean when you say the highway was deleted?
- It needs a "description" column to go into a little more detail than just where it begins and ends. In fact merge those two columns into the description column. For example, I-5 goes through Seattle, but the list doesn't tell me that.
- I am confused as to what the difference is between "formed" and "became a state highway"
- It appears the "formed" and "deleted" columns are unreferenced.
--Holderca1 talk 22:43, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- There's a difference between state routes, interstates and U.S. Routes. It might be better if separate articles were created for them, which would also reduce the size of this list considerably. And also a separate list for deleted highways.
- The lead is too short.
- That notes column is very odd, with the huge gaps. It also doesn't sort.
- 1893-1953 and the other date ranges should be separated by an ndash (–), not hyphen, per WP:DASH.
- What do those other state routes in parentheses represent in the Formed column?
- There's a lot of red links which should be turned blue by creating articles
- "SR339 (ferries)" What does this mean?
- What does deleted mean? The designation was removed, or the road was demolished, or something else?
- Those that were proposed – were any lengths available, or were they highways that were proposed to have a length of 0?
- Please check out List of Interstate Highways in Texas for an excellent example of a Featured List regarding highways.
That's all. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:08, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
I made the list, and I don't think it's ready. I'm not going to try to improve it to FL status, but I would like to comment on a few of the objections:
- Ideally there would be more entries in the notes column.
- Why should lengths be rounded? We have them all to the nearest 0.01 mile through WSDOT.
- Gray means that the designation is deleted (no longer exists). This should be explained in the notes above the table.
- Formed is when the designation was created (again this should be explained above); became a state highway is when the roadway itself became a state highway.
- Formed and eliminated are indeed unreferenced; I don't have a full source for the state laws that designated the routes.
- Separating the list into several would remove a lot of the functionality with respect to sorting.
- "If a route was renumbered, the old or new number is given in the "formed" or "eliminated" column."
- "Deleted" refers to the designation (and this should be explained above).
- I haven't been able to find the planned lengths of proposed routes.
--NE2 19:42, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
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[edit] 1928 Summer Olympics medal count
Complete list of medals per country for the 1928 Summer Olympics, with a comprehensive lead section to introduce the data. – Ilse@ 18:20, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Wow, back then there were 1/3 of the events there are now and Canada won 15 medals, they'll be lucky if they hit that number this summer. Anyway, it's a very nice list, I'm going to make a few tweaks, but I get the sense that it missing something that would make it a truly excellent list, perhaps the table is a little narrow or maybe it needs more text. Not a lot of complaints, it would be nice if it was sortable, it would also be nice to have a couple more images. -- Scorpion0422 18:42, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comment — There are 45 of these lists, and to my knowledge this is the first time we've tried to make any of them a featured list, so any improvements applied here ought to be done consistently to the rest. (I'm not sure why 1928, of all Games, is the "guinea pig" here...) — Andrwsc (talk · contribs) 18:52, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comments very nice. If this is to become a precedent, let's get it perfect.
- Consider making the list sortable (it'll probably work out of the box)
- Not convinced over the use of US English but won't oppose on it.
- Otherwise, it's a nice piece of work. I guess I'll hold off support until other people have commented because I may have missed some obvious bits and pieces. And, as we've discussed, get this one right and another 44 FLs will follow! The Rambling Man (talk) 19:13, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comments. I'm thinking that to make it a true FL, it really needs some meat.
- It would probably make sense to have at least one section of text that puts into perspective the medals won at these games. In other words, explain the reaction to the US winning double the medals as anyone else, or perhaps find somewhere where medals were disputed. I just think in general the topic has to be looked into so that a good chunk of text can be written.
- Also, maybe think about what to do with the whole "this table is ranked this way because..." section. It should probably be repeated somehow on all the pages eventually, so there must be an easier and more appealing way to show it than to repeat it on every page.
- Overall, good. I'll also hold off on my support. Jared (t) 20:27, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from Andrwsc on content:
- I agree with Jared's comments about the need for more prose text in the introduction.
- I don't think "lavender blue" and "boldface" need wikilinks here. They are not in the context of this topic. Also, the table legend ought to be put next to the table, not left in the page introduction section.
- You'll see that I added the "Events contested" section. This is something I've had in mind for a long time, and now seems the perfect time to deal with it. I've always thought that these medal count lists require proper explanation of the gold/silver/bronze totals, especially since they almost never add up the same. Feel free to improve the section I added, but I think the principle is necessary.
- I have added the information about not adding up to the lead section, and I removed the "Events contested" section because I think this should not be in the medal count list, but in the main article about the 1928 Summer Olympics, as it currently is. – Ilse@ 00:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- I still maintain it's necessary to show something that better illustrates how to add up the medal totals. These Games are "easy" to explain because the only discrepancy is a single event, but other Games are far more complex, and I would like to see a standard way of showing how the totals add up. — Andrwsc (talk · contribs) 00:59, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- I have added the information about not adding up to the lead section, and I removed the "Events contested" section because I think this should not be in the medal count list, but in the main article about the 1928 Summer Olympics, as it currently is. – Ilse@ 00:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- All-time Olympic Games medal count is linked from the navbox, so is it necessary to repeat it in the "See also" section? Similarly, I think Summer Olympic Games ought to be linked from the prose text in the introduction somehow, instead of being in the "See also".
- I don't like the "General" and "Specific" sections for references, especially since one of them is listed in both places.
- I am uncertain about the need of an external link to a Canadian broadcaster website for this list, especially since it does not support the entire list (e.g. medal count only lists 11 nations). Also, the IOC website is kept up to date, whereas many of these kinds of external links are not. I have run into discrepancies (for other years) between the IOC published totals and alternate websites (from Russia, Germany, etc.), as can happen when medal totals change. This actually happens more than you think, such as the retrospective upgrade of curling at the 1924 Winter Olympics to official status only a couple of years ago, and the changes due to drug violations etc. (e.g. Marion Jones for 2000). In any case, I just don't think the quality of that external link justifies its inclusion here.
- The significant reference notably missing from this article is for the official report itself. I've just added it to the "general" section, but I'd like it to be moved to a proper inline reference when you update the introductory prose.
- Since International Olympic Committee is linked from the article, we don't need to keep linking it as the publisher of some of the references.
- Thanks for your work here! — Andrwsc (talk · contribs) 21:13, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
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- I have fixed most of your concerns. About the "general references" section, I added it, and I prefer to use one general ref for a table (because techinally each row should have its own cite) and also it makes it easier for users to find the ref we used for the table. -- Scorpion0422 22:11, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
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- Maybe we can add a section which country/countries won their first medal at that Games? And which country/countries won their first gold medal at that Games? Doma-w (talk) 22:33, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- That's sort of what I was thinking could be included in the prose-section. Just stuff about the medals and the countries that won them. Jared (t) 22:55, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- I think this kind of information should not be in a medal count, but in the general article about the 1928 Olympic Games. – Ilse@ 01:03, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- That's sort of what I was thinking could be included in the prose-section. Just stuff about the medals and the countries that won them. Jared (t) 22:55, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
Comments I'm not sure I can help much with the Olympic-related stuff as while I enjoy the games it's not something I'm knowledgeable about. I'll try to help with the Wikipedia and language-related stuff instead.
Why "De Coubertin's Paris" and not just "Paris"?Go for "Paris, France" and "Los Angeles, United States" rather than just the citiesAre "celebrated" and "celebration" correct terminology in "were celebrated in" and "the previous celebration's financial loss"? "Hosted" and "events" seems more natural.The Highlights bulletpoint section seems to be verging on the side of WP:TRIVIA, especially with the inclusion of things like the Tarzan guy. I'd also prefer to see it as prose. They should all be referenced, too.The "Medals awarded" could do with being elaborated, and personally, I don't like to see "See..." as in "See the medal winners, ordered by sport".Is "debuted" a real word in British English? Firefox spell check doesn't recognise it in British or Aus English, but does in American and Candadian
That's it. Sorry I can't be of more help cause I like the idea of this -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 03:38, 25 March, 2008
- Thank you for your help. I think you took 1928 Summer Olympics for your comments instead of 1928 Summer Olympics medal count. – Ilse@ 09:09, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- Oops, you're right. I clicked on the wrong link above. I've removed the linking so no-one else makes the same mistake and I'll get onto looking at the right page right now! -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 20:33, 25 March, 2008
- We can also add the medal count from the art competitions? Doma-w (talk) 09:41, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- I think this is a good idea when it is done in a separate table. – Ilse@ 11:33, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- I have added the table. – Ilse@ 12:09, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- I have restructured the article. – Ilse@ 13:29, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry, but I think this is a really bad idea. The art competitions have not been official Olympic "events" for 60 years, and they do not appear in the IOC medal database, anybody's medal tables, and so on. Therefore, I would say that it is "undue weight" to include them on these medal count pages. I certainly believe that they should be properly documented, so I created Art competitions at the 1928 Summer Olympics today (including the medal table) to accomplish that. I think these competitions should be similarly to the other non-medal events at each Games, such as demonstration events, for which we have pages such as Lacrosse at the 1928 Summer Olympics, linked from the main Games page and linked from the events navbox. But I strongly believe that these totals are out of place on this article. — Andrwsc (talk · contribs) 19:33, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- I think I agree with Andrwsc here, somewhat. I think it wouldn't be a problem to have some sort of prose describing why it is that there were art competitions and also why they aren't included, but no table should show it. The separate page works well at doing this, so a link to that would suffice. Jared (t) 21:22, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- I don't see any problem in including them. Since the art competition have not been official Olympic event for 60 years, in the medal counts of the last 60 years no art medals will appear. In the earlier years there were an Olympic art competitions, so for this 1928 list the art medals should be included. And these medals are in a seperate table, so they are not confused or mixed with the sports medals. – Ilse@ 13:25, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
- I think I agree with Andrwsc here, somewhat. I think it wouldn't be a problem to have some sort of prose describing why it is that there were art competitions and also why they aren't included, but no table should show it. The separate page works well at doing this, so a link to that would suffice. Jared (t) 21:22, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry, but I think this is a really bad idea. The art competitions have not been official Olympic "events" for 60 years, and they do not appear in the IOC medal database, anybody's medal tables, and so on. Therefore, I would say that it is "undue weight" to include them on these medal count pages. I certainly believe that they should be properly documented, so I created Art competitions at the 1928 Summer Olympics today (including the medal table) to accomplish that. I think these competitions should be similarly to the other non-medal events at each Games, such as demonstration events, for which we have pages such as Lacrosse at the 1928 Summer Olympics, linked from the main Games page and linked from the events navbox. But I strongly believe that these totals are out of place on this article. — Andrwsc (talk · contribs) 19:33, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- This looks good, but I think Switzerland had to be ninth and Denmark tenth.
- Don't we want to write the rank only once when countries tied, like it is written on all other medal tables e.g. Athletics at the 1928 Summer Olympics?
- I think we still need an image of a medal... (like official report p. 130) Doma-w (talk) 15:07, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- I agree with this. We did it for 1896 Summer Olympics medal count, and we should do the same for all Games for which we can get a
non-free (copyright expired) image. — Andrwsc (talk · contribs) 19:33, 25 March 2008 (UTC)- I assume you mean "free image". Could one of you maybe upload one for 1928? – Ilse@ 22:14, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
I believe it could be uploaded under this license.– Ilse@ 22:48, 30 March 2008 (UTC)- The designer of the medal, Giuseppe Cassioli (1865–1942), died less than 70 years ago. – Ilse@ 23:27, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
- I agree with this. We did it for 1896 Summer Olympics medal count, and we should do the same for all Games for which we can get a
Comments Let's try again...
- My only issue is the number and type of references. WP:PSTS and WP:SOURCES says the article should rely on secondary and tertiary sources. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 20:41, 25 March, 2008
- For a sports tournament such as the 1928 Summer Olympics the authority of the organization is decisive in recognizing medals, and therefore I believe that the medal count can be based on these sources. – Ilse@ 22:52, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
- Then I
oppose. I can't believe that there are no secondary sources laying around that can be used to verify. There has to be plenty of books on the Olympics, or even maybe a sports almanac and/or old newspaper articles? The above links are not guidelines, but policies, and it doesn't matter how good or complete it is, if it cannot be independently verified. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:43, 31 March 2008 (UTC)- Since when aren't we allowed to use primary sources as our main source? Under your logic, dozens and dozens of FLs would have to be delisted. -- Scorpion0422 19:50, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- I posted this issue on Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard#Award databases, because it involves several articles. – Ilse@ 10:50, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
- Perhaps my interpretation of WP:PSTS is wrong, then. To me it says care should be taken when using primary sources and the information garnered from those should be verifiable by secondary sources, which Wikipedia articles "should rely on". -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 13:12, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
- Hmm.. Someone over there told me that secondary sources are inherited from the parent article (!) Sounds ridiculous to me if that's true.. Anyway, it's still not enough for me so I'll change to neutral. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 18:22, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Perhaps my interpretation of WP:PSTS is wrong, then. To me it says care should be taken when using primary sources and the information garnered from those should be verifiable by secondary sources, which Wikipedia articles "should rely on". -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 13:12, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
- I posted this issue on Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard#Award databases, because it involves several articles. – Ilse@ 10:50, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
- Since when aren't we allowed to use primary sources as our main source? Under your logic, dozens and dozens of FLs would have to be delisted. -- Scorpion0422 19:50, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Then I
- For a sports tournament such as the 1928 Summer Olympics the authority of the organization is decisive in recognizing medals, and therefore I believe that the medal count can be based on these sources. – Ilse@ 22:52, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
Oppose, regretfully. I have followed these 45 pages for a couple of years, so I was intrigued at the possibility of promoting them to feature lists. However, in good faith I cannot support the nomination of this list in its current form. I think it fails criteria 1d of WP:Featured list criteria, as the inclusion of the art competitions is controversial disputed. Art competitions are given undue weight in this article, as they comprised only one of fifteen competitions at the Games yet the sub-total for them is given the same weight as the combined total for the other fourteen. Equally important, there is no contemporary source that can be used as a secondary source that includes these totals. I strongly feel that nothing more than a "see also" reference is appropriate. — Andrwsc (talk · contribs) 16:58, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
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- I don't think the personal opinion of Andrwsc is the same thing as a controversy. During the 1928 Summer Olympics the art competition was an official event, thus intended by the founding father of the modern Olympic Games, Pierre de Coubertin. Let me quote the article Art competitions at the Olympic Games:
- Art competitions formed part of the modern Olympic Games during its early years, from 1912 to 1948. The competitions were part of the original intention of the Olympic Movement's founder, Pierre de Frédy, Baron de Coubertin. Medals were awarded for works of art inspired by sport, divided into five categories: architecture, literature, music, painting, and sculpture.
- The 1928 Summer Olympics medal count should include all medals awarded during the 1928 Summer Olympics. The quotation leaves beyond any doubt that this includes the medals for the events in the arts competition, because the art competitions were part of the Olympics from 1912 until 1948. Andrwsc would be right if the article was named 1928 Summer Olympics sports competition medal count instead. Thus, the argument that the nominated article fails criterion #1(d) does not hold. – Ilse@ 18:49, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Ok, how about disputed instead of controversial. It's not just my own opinion; it's the opinion of other members of WP:WikiProject Olympics who have contributed to this discussion, and it's the consensus for these lists for the past few years. Never in the history of these lists have art competitions been added until now. — Andrwsc (talk · contribs) 19:27, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- If the art competitions were officially part of the Olympics, but not included in the article, it would then fail on criteria 1b and 1c. Wikipedia should present true facts, not people's idea of facts, especially when those facts can be verified. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:43, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- I am not disputing the "officialness" (at the time) of the art competitions; in fact, I spent considerable time last week creating seven new articles in Category:Art competitions at the Olympic Games as I felt those events were under-documented on Wikipedia. What I'm objecting to is the "elevation" of those events so that the medal totals are presented in the same context as the totals officially endorsed by the IOC. Even putting a disclaimer on this page is insufficient, in my mind; if a screenful of table data exists in this article, it is undue weight. With respect to your request for secondary sources higher up in this discussion thread; none of those such sources (like the partial lists found here, here, and here) include the art competition events. — Andrwsc (talk · contribs) 20:53, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- If the art competitions were officially part of the Olympics, but not included in the article, it would then fail on criteria 1b and 1c. Wikipedia should present true facts, not people's idea of facts, especially when those facts can be verified. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 19:43, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Ok, how about disputed instead of controversial. It's not just my own opinion; it's the opinion of other members of WP:WikiProject Olympics who have contributed to this discussion, and it's the consensus for these lists for the past few years. Never in the history of these lists have art competitions been added until now. — Andrwsc (talk · contribs) 19:27, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- I don't think the personal opinion of Andrwsc is the same thing as a controversy. During the 1928 Summer Olympics the art competition was an official event, thus intended by the founding father of the modern Olympic Games, Pierre de Coubertin. Let me quote the article Art competitions at the Olympic Games:
- I still think we need a section which explains the specialities of this medal count. In my opinion stats are really more interesting when they are described. Maybe:
- The host Nederlands finished "only" eighth - the weakest finish of a host at that time (Belgium finished fifth 1920)
- India won their first ever gold medal
- The Philippines won their first ever medal
- Hans Bourquin was the youngest gold medalist (men) 14 years and 222 days
- Virginie Hériot was the oldest gold medalist (women) 38 years 15 days
- also the section "Events contested" (now deleted) was a good explanation of the count
Kind regards Doma-w (talk) 23:36, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Let me clarify the scope of the article 1928 Summer Olympics medal count. Information about the number of medals or the ranking of countries should be in this article. Nevertheless, there should be made a clear difference between 1928 Summer Olympics medal count and an atricle about Medals at the 1928 Summer Olympics. Details about individual medals and about the events contested should be in the article 1928 Summer Olympics or in ... at the 1928 Summer Olympics instead.
This being said, I think your first three bullets should be dealt with, the last three fall outside the scope of this article. Information about which countries are new on the list (medal count) is fairly easy to add. But it is not always possible to give reasons why a certain country is ranked on a certain position, other than: they won X medals. Do you know why "The host Nederlands finished "only" eighth"?
I will add information about 'new countries' soon, but feel free to be first. – Ilse@ 09:13, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
To be honest, I haven't read much of the above, but just looking at the list another time, I feel as though its quality has just gotten worse. There are hardly any citations, there is a separate medal table (which, as mentioned above, should not be there, in my opinion), and the information written out in prose is generic information not particularly about these games. Sometimes information in pages has to overlap, and I think that it is crucial for a medal count to explain the medals won at these games. I'm not seeing any explanations here. I am still not going to oppose this nomination, but as much as I would want WP:OLYMPICS to have another FL, I don't feel as though this is quality work, and accurately represents the depth that this page should theoretically have. I am certain there is information out there. Perhaps starting with a more recent medal page would make for an easier time getting the page to FL status. It would then serve as a good model. Jared (t) 20:48, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 04:02, 8 April 2008.
[edit] List of best-selling albums worldwide
An extensive list of sales, EVERY claim is sourced. There are no tags requiring citations although there is one dubious tag. Despite this one dubious tag there doesnt seem to bee too much controversy surrounding it as it hasnt sparked too much debate on the talk page. The article is stable as a result of the semi protection i requested. Realist2 (talk) 01:57, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
Oppose Definitely a good start, but there's a couple somewhat major issues I see:
- Multiple artists are typically written with a "/" in between, except Elton John and Hans Zimmer. (DONE)
- I don't think the long section headers are necessary. I'm sure there some way to reword them so they aren't so long. (DONE)
- The sound of music entry says "Julie Andrews ao". (DONE)
- I'm also not sure why its necessary to flag double albums. It's double the music, but it's still sold as one package. (DONE)
- The order of the last three sections should go See also, References, External links. (DONE)
- I'd also recommend centering the Year columns. (DONE)
- The lead doesn't summarize the article (as per WP:Lead). Instead, it goes right into talking about how unreliable and incomplete the list is. Mentioning why the list might not be complete/official is fine, but I don't think you should do so right off the bat. Introduce the list, summarize the main points, then talk about how it might be incomplete/inaccurate. (DONE)
- All 82 of the citations have numerous formatting/MOS problems. Mainly they don't give proper attribution, only the title of the page. I would recommend using WP:Citation templates, since they do all the work for you. Also, I would recommend putting all of the citations into their own column at the far right.
- The column widths should ideally be kept consistent throughout the article. (DONE)
- Many of the tables are inconsistent with each other. 40-50 and 15-20 say "Year of release" while the others say "Released". (DONE)
That's about it for now. There's still a few more minor things I've noticed, but I'll stop here to avoid piling it on. Drewcifer (talk) 05:05, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
I have done most of then now. I cant format sources however. I need help on that. Realist2 (talk) 12:06, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
- Good work so far. I've hidden the comments you've addressed, but some of the ones you've labeled as done still need some work. The lead still doesn't sumamarize the list. It's longer, but it doesn't say which album is the best-selling, how many albums there are total, etc. As for the citations, I'd usually offer to do them myself, but 82 references is alot. Again, I'd recommend using WP:Citation templates, since it's just a mtter of plugging in the information: the template does all the formatting for you. Also, the column widths still appear inconcistent to me. Also, the Year columns are still inconsistent. Some say "Release" some say "Released". Drewcifer (talk) 16:58, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- Col widths still not consistent on my browser (Safari).
- Ref 8 is "dubious" - must be fixed for FL.
- Remove spaces between citations and text per WP:CITE, or even consider a references column.
- Every claim is cited, so what about "Additionally fans, record companies and the media are prone to exaggerating sales figures to boost the image of the relevant act."? sounds like WP:OR to me...
- Talk about Thriller in the lead as it's miles ahead of anyone else. Plus presumably its recent re-release will have boosted sales further?
- Should Alanis Morissette really order by A or M?
- References should use the {{cite web}} template.
- Three non-functioning links when I tried to use this.
So oppose for now. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:32, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
Is there a GOOD list candidates page , maybe i applied at the wrong place, i only wanted to get it up to the equivalent of GA. I was redirected to you guys by a fellow wiki.... lol....Realist2 (talk) 12:39, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
- Not specifically but no reason why it shouldn't qualify for WP:GAN... The Rambling Man (talk) 13:37, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
Na you cant do lists there. Realist2 (talk) 14:23, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
Feel free to remove this article if you dont think it comes close to reaching FA, I cant resolve the issue of formatting citations.Realist2 (talk) 18:54, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
- What exactly do you wish to do with formatting citations? I'm Mr Citation by the way! The Rambling Man (talk) 19:04, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
These wierd {{cite web}} template things need using. I cant do it. Realist2 (talk) 19:08, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
- Here, see this diff which shows me converting one of the references into a Cite web. Once you get the hang of it, it's really straight forward. You need to fill in, as a minimum, the
url
,title
andaccessdate
parameters (although there are many other parameters you can use as well). Hope that helps. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:03, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose as the sources are inadequate.
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- Drop "based solely on claims made by reliable sources such as newspapers, record companies and documented sales certifications". It is up to you as editor to use reliable sources. The reader should take that for granted.
- "Groupings are based on different sales benchmarks." Not sure what you mean by "benchmarks" but the section grouping is so obvious (if arbitrary) that you don't need to mention it.
- You need to state your inclusion criteria. For example, "every album with more than 15 million sales worldwide". You don't need to say "irrelevant of language, age or genre".
- "Claims of " Drop the "claims" from the section headings. If you don't think the claims are reliable, don't include them. If there are albums in the list with unreliable claims or unreliable sources, move them to the talk page so that you and other editors can collaborate on finding reliable sources for them.
- A featured list is expected to be comprehensive. Therefore if some of your entries are removed from the list due to inadequate sourcing, you need to fix that. Similarly, if someone is able to find an album you have not included, then its comprehensiveness is in doubt. Clearly, if you can find one or two good sources that list all these bestsellers then that would help.
- Don't know why Michael Jackson needs five citations. Just pick one good one.
- Quite a number of your references are personal home pages, amateur fan sites, amateur music sites, forums and blogs. (e.g., this is a forum and totally unreliable.) For such best selling albums, you should be able to find the info on quality news sites (in the UK, the bbc news site and the guardian newspaper are good for searching), official band sites and quality music sites. Have a look on the Wikipedia article for each album/band and see if you can find a better source from one on that page. Colin°Talk 11:38, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Lol the michael Jackson one has so many sources because the 104 figure keeps getting deleted by haters of michael jackson. Realist2 (talk) 13:35, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 07:07, 6 April 2008.
[edit] List of billionaires (2006)
Nominating this list in tandem with List of billionaires (2008). Both lists are based off of List of billionaires (2007), a recent WP:FL. Gary King (talk) 21:54, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
CommentsSupport Thanks. PPR links to a dab page. I'd write TWA in full. Ray Ban should be hyphenated. The only thing I would suggest is making it clear that people made their money through investments, because when I first went through it I thought it was a company! There was one (Schaeffler Group) that linked to the founder, which I don't mind too much, but presumably if it made them billions then the actual group would warrant an article of its own. Anyway, great effort. PeterSymonds | talk 22:10, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- As for the 2008 list, there is no need for a General reference in this list either
- More secondary and tertiary sources should be included. The Forbes one is good for the list itself, but try to find others for the source of wealth especially, as the Forbes page doesn't give that and is currently OR.
-- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 23:21, 25 March, 2008
- Is it OR when a reputable magazine like Forbes did the research? Also, the article is written to reflect the list from Forbes; it's not a statement of the actual richest persons in the world, because I'm sure the 'real' list would be different. It all depends on the metrics you use to measure this - in the case of these articles, they are explicitly based on the lists that Forbes releases. Gary King (talk) 23:31, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- But the Forbes article doesn't give the source of wealth (unless I missed it). Including this without sources is OR. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 23:34, 25 March, 2008
- Forbes article does give sources of wealth, when you click the names.Gary King (talk) 23:35, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- Aah. I didn't know that. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 23:44, 25 March, 2008
- Forbes article does give sources of wealth, when you click the names.Gary King (talk) 23:35, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- But the Forbes article doesn't give the source of wealth (unless I missed it). Including this without sources is OR. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 23:34, 25 March, 2008
- Oppose per WP:NOT. We don't act as a statistical repository for old data. See List of countries by Human Development Index and Global Peace Index for examples. Apart from a few sporting lists, Wikipedia presents current data. If a featured list contains data that is updated periodically, we expect editors to keep it refreshed in a timely manner or else it is defeatured. Similar lists have been deleted. See also 2008 below. Colin°Talk 13:02, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Well, what about articles such as Opinion polling for the United States presidential election, 2008 which is just a list of statistics (opinion polls, no less, meaning they may not even have any bearing on the final outcome), and I would say is far more unwieldy than this article. Gary King (talk) 16:05, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- That's an awful dump of random statistics. It isn't a FLC is it? Not what WP is for at all. Of course, the actual presidential election polling results could be a FL and would be for an instance in time. Wikipedia's purpose isn't to provide raw data for trend analysis of billionaires over time. The reader is generally interested in the current list, whether updated daily, quarterly or yearly is somewhat irrelevant. The reason these 2005/2006/2007/2008 lists exist is because Forbes update their list annually. They've been doing this for over 20 years -- surely you don't intent to bore us with 20 years of billionaires? As I said, there is a precedent for such out-of-date lists to be AfDed (can't find an example just now) and I'd certainly suggest you focus on creating a great current list and move onto another topic. Colin°Talk 17:17, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
Oppose For same reasons already mentioned in the 2008 nomination. Drewcifer (talk) 01:56, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 18:56, 3 April 2008.
[edit] List of One Tree Hill episodes
The list is well formatted, and easily accessable for changes. Links are provided to seasonal pages for expanded information, and individual episode pages where necessary. Information that needs to be cited is. The lead paragraph may need some work which can be adressed her if needed. Despite season five still airing having future episodes symbolizes the incompleteness of the show rather than the list itself and episodes are only added once they appear on the shows official site, one week before broadcast. The list is also simular to List of Smallville episodes and List of The Simpsons episodes
Russell [ Talk ] 18:57, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
- Hahaha! That intro looks word-for-word very much like the one I wrote for the DVD releases page of One Tree Hill. So I can't find fault with it at all! :P -- Matthew
- Comment I think the episode numbers should be done along the lines of "23-101" rather than 23(1). -- Scorpion0422 05:05, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
- Do people prefer (1) or "-201". Smallville uses brackets and that was promoted to FL. I personally favour the brackets but what do others think?
Ep # | Title | Writer(s) | Director(s) | Airdate |
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23(1) | "The Desperate Kingdom of Love" | Mark Schwahn | Greg Prange | September 21, 2004 |
23-201 | "The Desperate Kingdom of Love" | Mark Schwahn | Greg Prange | September 21, 2004 |
Russell [ Talk ] 13:44, 9 March 2008 (UTC)
I prefer:
Season # |
Series # |
Title | Writer(s) | Director(s) | Airdate |
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1 | 23 | "The Desperate Kingdom of Love" | Mark Schwahn | Greg Prange | September 21, 2004 |
-- Matthew | talk | Contribs 04:26, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
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- I tried this is preview mode, and it made the page look messyRussell [ Talk ] 19:36, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
- In what way? It shouldn't, because {{episode list}} renders it correctly. -- Matthew | talk | Contribs 20:25, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
- I tried this is preview mode, and it made the page look messyRussell [ Talk ] 19:36, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comment First, I want to say that I am in favor of the Matthew's design; season and series #'s should be in diferent columns. If you want to leave it as is, then I'd like to see season # first with the series # in brackets(). The reason is that "The Same Deep Water as You", for example, is more popular as the first episode of season 4, then 68th overall episode. Also, I don't prefer coloring every other row in the tables, it looks like a list from a fan site, rather than an encyclopedia. I'd suggest to use shades closer to white if you want to keep coloring every other row. For example, for season one, it may be better if a light grey be used instead of orange. --Crzycheetah 00:15, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
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- Like he said in the nomination proposal though, List of Smallville episodes and List of The Simpsons episodes, which is what he based this on, have all those rainbow colours. -- Matthew | talk | Contribs 06:29, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
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- I know, but that only explains why he did that. It doesn't change my view that coloring every other row with bright colors looks childish and unprofessional.--Crzycheetah 06:35, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
- True, and WP:OSE and WP:PRETTY make good arguments why it should be changed. -- Matthew | talk | Contribs 16:21, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
- I just think that all LoE@Wiki should have similar design/format and be consistent with each other. After a quick glance, only Simpson's lists, Smallville's, and this one use this coloring. Lost's LoE uses gray and white which doesn't hurt my eyes as much as those bright colors used here.--Crzycheetah 19:04, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
- Just a small note about the colouring used on the Simpsons list, the colours are based on the colour of the DVD set for that season. -- Scorpion0422 03:56, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
- To be honest, it does look like a page from Skittleopedia though. Perhaps it might work with simply the table headers coloured in, and remove the alternate shading for each episode. (And I mean One Tree Hill here, although I don't thnk it would be detremental to the functionality of the Simpsons one either.) -- Matthew | talk | Contribs 05:45, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
- Well the colors were meant to represent the DVD colours. would you suggest alternitive grey like Lost, if so which gery would you suggest?Russell [ Talk ] 22:37, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
- I think that simply shading the headers would be acceptable, but using the pastelly shadings rather than those bright ones. I've just nominated List of 7th Heaven episodes and that's how I've done it. -- Matthew | talk | Contribs 04:51, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
- Well the colors were meant to represent the DVD colours. would you suggest alternitive grey like Lost, if so which gery would you suggest?Russell [ Talk ] 22:37, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
- To be honest, it does look like a page from Skittleopedia though. Perhaps it might work with simply the table headers coloured in, and remove the alternate shading for each episode. (And I mean One Tree Hill here, although I don't thnk it would be detremental to the functionality of the Simpsons one either.) -- Matthew | talk | Contribs 05:45, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
- Just a small note about the colouring used on the Simpsons list, the colours are based on the colour of the DVD set for that season. -- Scorpion0422 03:56, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
- I just think that all LoE@Wiki should have similar design/format and be consistent with each other. After a quick glance, only Simpson's lists, Smallville's, and this one use this coloring. Lost's LoE uses gray and white which doesn't hurt my eyes as much as those bright colors used here.--Crzycheetah 19:04, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
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The list was not promoted 19:52, 3 April 2008.
[edit] List of football clubs in England by major honours won
This list has gone through a peer review following which I feel the list meets the criteria for listed status. Peanut4 (talk) 02:28, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comments good, I participated at the PR, a couple of comments before I can support the FLC.
- "with Manchester United winning most FA Cups with the 2004 title being their 11th" two withs makes awkward reading here.
- The three sentences that discuss the formation of the European cups read a little choppy, could you improve the flow of the prose there?
- Any reason why the UEFA Super Cup isn't included?
- Can you make those red links go blue? (Always worth asking this, it helps expand the encyclopaedia, even if you create stubs...)
- Use the {{Cite web}} template for the External links.
- That's about it though, very well referenced, nice one. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:27, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comment I understand the Cardiff comment in the Lead, but I'm not sure everyone else would, as it's not explicit that you've included them despite them not being "in England". --Dweller (talk) 14:10, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comment to avoid the current hint of NPOV, you need a source that defines "major honours". --Dweller (talk) 14:11, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
- Indeed. I completely chanced upon this article when it was in its infancy and carried on editing away at it. I simply took over with the current trophies as listed. I will do my best to find some sources.
- Obviously of those trophies open to essentially every club in the country, it doesn't include Charity Shield, European Super Cup and any World Club Cup / World Club Championship. And also the defunct Simod Cup. Any suggestions would be most welcome. Peanut4 (talk) 15:00, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
- Well, I'd agree with your choices, but I'm sure someone else might not, so there is a problem. Ideally, you want a reliable football source that defines the term "major trophy". I'll have a look if I have a mo'. --Dweller (talk) 15:42, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
- I've found this source. What do you think? It backs up the selection, which is probably one reason why I like it (!) though the selection was already there when I took over anyway and I agree with them. Peanut4 (talk) 15:57, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
- Well, I'd agree with your choices, but I'm sure someone else might not, so there is a problem. Ideally, you want a reliable football source that defines the term "major trophy". I'll have a look if I have a mo'. --Dweller (talk) 15:42, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
- Just out of interest why is the Cup Winners' Cup referred to as the European Cup Winners' Cup and not UEFA Cup Winners' Cup?
- "when it founded the League Cup invitiation to which is restricted to the 92 members of the league." reads abit uneasily I would reword it slightly. Also invitation is spelt incorrectly
- "League football followed the following decade" reads a little uneasily I would change it to "League football followed in the subsequent decade"
Comments
- Isn't "major honours" a little WP:POV?
- I'm not a football buff, but isn't there a Milk Cup? And what's that one match that happens before the season starts, between the winner of one cup and the winner of the other? (Or something like that)
- I think the key should be moved to before the table so readers know what they're looking at.
- I'd say most keys come after tables themselves. Peanut4 (talk) 01:49, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
- Are you sure? Otherwise the reader is wondering what all those initials mean, and then figure out that the key is at the bottom, read through it, scroll back to the top of the list, try to remember the key, then read the list again. And I know it's not football, but the hockey lists that have been featured have the key first IIRC. -- Matthew | talk | Contribs 06:18, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
- I'd say most keys come after tables themselves. Peanut4 (talk) 01:49, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
- Is there a template table for the bottom of the page?
That's it. -- Matthew | talk | Contribs 01:44, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
Comments I participated at the peer review. One or two more bits.
- Lead. Not sure "League football followed the subsequent decade" works, maybe in the subsequent decade.
- "It remained the highest division..." what did?
- Key. With all the abbreviations in the headings, it might be better to have the key at the top as well. I've taken the liberty of adding one in, please have a look and see if you think it works, and please revert or change the format if you don't like it.
That's all I can think of, cheers, Struway2 (talk) 17:34, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
Further comment Please would you explain why you've removed the Inter-Cities Fairs Cup from the table. Perhaps this has been discussed somewhere, but I haven't seen it.
It's not entirely accurate to say it's not "recognised" by UEFA. It never was a UEFA competition; they took over the running of it in 1971, so it's not surprising that they don't consider it as part of clubs' European record, which they presumably define as "record in our competitions". In your reference #14, they do list the results of all the ICFC finals, so they recognise that when people look up all-time UEFA Cup finals, they'll expect to find the Fairs Cup ones as well. Their UEFA Cup history page devotes the first three paragraphs (of seven) to it, and says In 1968 Leeds United AFC became the first northern European club to win the trophy, heralding a run of six successive wins by English clubs. The fifth of these was in 1971/72, won by Tottenham Hotspur FC, and the first to be known as the UEFA Cup. The change of name was recognition of the fact the competition was now run by UEFA. I don't see any evidence there of the ICFC being any less "major" a trophy than its successor. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 07:10, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
- I decided to remove the Fairs Cup after asking TRM and Dweller, prompted by the UEFA Cup page. However, I think your query backs up my worries that the title, particularly the word major, is misleading. My only concern is once you take out major, you're left having to add every trophy, including Football League Group Cup, Texaco Cup, Anglo-Italian, etc. I think this list needs a bit more work / thinking about to be honest. Peanut4 (talk) 20:08, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
Comment - not wishing to be too controversial but there appears to be a miniature witch-hunt going on for vaguely ambiguous list titles (see the List of Arsenal F.C. players delist debate going on) - while there may be a generally agreed WP:FOOTBALL version of "major honours", it won't stop a non-WP:FOOTBALLer popping up to tell you it doesn't cut the mustard (although probably not in such an Imperialist tone!). I'd think long and hard over the title of this if you wish it to succeed. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:43, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
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