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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 06:28, 17 May 2007.

[edit] Uma Thurman

[edit] Review commentary

Messages left at User talk:Fallout boy, Bio, Arts and entertainment, Films, Entertainment and Actors and Filmmakers. LuciferMorgan 19:49, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

I believe this article does not meet 1(c) and 2(a) featured article criteria. There are many {{fact}} tags, unsourced paragraphs, and the citations are not formatted properly. Several of the citations miss access dates, publisher info, etc. I also noticed a couple of external jumps. The lead section (one paragraph with 4 sentences) does not summarize the article as well as a featured article should. Plus, it contains a trivia section that "should be integrated into other appropriate areas of the article or removed". In the 2003–present section, the last four paragraphs look like a list, not a prose. Anyway, I hope all of my concerns are resolved in 2 weeks, and the article avoids going through FARC. Thanks, Crzycheetah 23:02, 14 April 2007 (UTC)

  • Move to FARC — No changes or discussion whatsoever.--Crzycheetah 19:15, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] FARC commentary

Suggested FA criteria concerns are reference sufficiency and formatting (1c), and LEAD (2a). Marskell 12:05, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Remove — per 1(c) and 2(a) Crzycheetah 19:25, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Remove unless someone's gonna work on this. MoS issues in refs, undercited, stubby paragraphs, short lead and some dubious fair use screencaps. Trebor 14:45, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
  • Remove per Trebor's reasoning. LuciferMorgan 08:22, 16 May 2007 (UTC)
The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.