Wikipedia:Featured article review/Tom Brinkman/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 17:40, 9 May 2008.

[edit] Tom Brinkman

[edit] Review commentary

Notified User:PedanticallySpeaking, User:Spencer, User:Stepshep, Wikipedia:WikiProject Ohio, and Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography

The article was promoted to FA almost three years ago and I believe that it no longer meets the criteria as a Featured Article. It fails 2(c) but also it requires of cleanup in several areas. --Daysleeper47 (talk) 13:03, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

• The references need to be completely redone, the main image features a banner reading "McEwen" when the article is about Brinkman, and it's very short. Another thing that bothers me is the slightest of details like this sentence:"Will, Stephen, Daniel, Kelley, Kevin, Michael." which really isn't even a sentence. From my understandings the quotes and other things are formatted incorrectly. At this time from the article's current condition I vote in favor of a delisting. §tepshep • ¡Talk to me! 19:58, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

[edit] FARC commentary

Suggested FA criteria concern is referencing (1c). Marskell (talk) 12:41, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

• Delist - also the formatting and short paragraphs. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 06:36, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
• Remove, a wreck. External jumps, inline URL citations, uncited text, uncited direct quotes. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 00:49, 5 May 2008 (UTC)

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