Wikipedia:Featured article review/Seabiscuit/archive1

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The article was removed 03:50, 21 April 2007.

[edit] Seabiscuit

[edit] Review commentary

Message left at GWO. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 21:35, 30 March 2007 (UTC)

Messages left at Seabiscuit and Thoroughbred racing.

Doesn't satisfy 1(c). One source, and for something that barely matters in the article. Doesn't really satisfy 1(a) either. Jerichi~Profile~Talk~ 15:30, 22 March 2007 (UTC)

Hi Jerichi. We don't "sup", "opp", "rm" or "kp" at this point. We try for a couple weeks of commentary, and hopefully improvements, and then move the review to FARC. Marskell 16:31, 22 March 2007 (UTC)

My bad. I'm a little new to the Featured Article area; I tend to work more around the GA area. Jerichi~Profile~Talk~ 19:11, 22 March 2007 (UTC)

• remove there are no secondary sources, and only one thing is sourced.--Sefringle 20:32, 1 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] FARC commentary

Suggested FA criteria concern is citations (1c), and prose (1a). Marskell 08:01, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

• Additional concern There are two unfree images, neither of which contain a fair use rationale. Jay32183 18:27, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
• Strong Remove for deficiency of references. -- King of ♥ ♦ ♣ ♠ 18:48, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
• Remove per 1c. Send me a message if things change drastically change. Quadzilla99 09:25, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
• Remove - If anyone can help add citations and fair use rationales, let us know. This article needs a lot of citations and the two unfree images must contain fair use rationales. This article really needs a lot of work on the citations and fair use rationales on the two unfree images. Sjones23 20:39, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

Oh, wait, prose is needed. Sjones23 20:40, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

I have added "citation needed" tags to various places where applicable. Anything else? Sjones23 20:52, 7 April 2007 (UTC)

• Remove per 1c. LuciferMorgan 22:35, 8 April 2007 (UTC)
• Remove per Nomination Jerichi~Profile~Talk~ 01:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

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