Wikipedia:Featured article review/Names of God in Judaism/archive1

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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 12:11, 13 January 2007.

[edit] Names of God in Judaism

[edit] Review commentary

Messages left at Zappaz, Judaism, Religion and Orthodox Judaism. Sandy (Talk) 22:11, 5 December 2006 (UTC)

This article definitely needs some inline citations. Also has some deprecated image tags. Judgesurreal777 19:15, 5 December 2006 (UTC)

  • Comment Needs inline citations. LuciferMorgan 19:23, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
  • Move to FARC, no improvement. Sandy (Talk) 18:50, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] FARC commentary

Suggested FA criteria concern is citations (1c) and images (3). Marskell 19:43, 25 December 2006 (UTC)
  • Comment: I don't see any specific issues raised here. "Needs inline citations" is insufficient: please indicate what points in the article may be disputed and thus need inline citations. Ditto for images: please name those with deprecated tags. In addition, please consider raising concerns first on the article talk page instead of going straight to FAR. Beit Or 22:47, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
  • Keep based on Beit Or's comment. 6SJ7 20:38, 2 January 2007 (UTC)
  • Remove Zero inline citations. LuciferMorgan 22:51, 2 January 2007 (UTC)
  • Remove. Even the existing citations do not have the proper format. Additionally, there are structure problems: Some sections consist of just half sentence!--Yannismarou 18:50, 4 January 2007 (UTC)
  • Remove. WP:MSH confusion, and undercited (one random weasly uncited example: Many Jews do not actually ever write God's name on paper or say it, this is to sanctify his name and not to come to desecrate God’s name.) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:04, 5 January 2007 (UTC)
  • Remove as per reviewers above. Tony 06:14, 6 January 2007 (UTC)
The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.