Wikipedia:Featured article review/Libya
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[edit] Libya
[edit] Review commentary
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- Notified projects/users: WikiProject Libya, Jaw101ie, Xyzzy n and FayssalF
I have conserns about 1b, and some minor conserns about 1c. Major facts and details that should have been included, is i.e.
- the conflict between Libya and Chad, and Gadaffis attempt to make a libyan-chadish union.
- The armed forces/defense of Libya
- Divisions/Subdivisions; the municipalities used is outdated.
- Economy: The article doesn't tell anything about unemployness, and is spare when it comes to information about business activities in Libya, and also about export/import.
- Economy: "an extensive and impressive level of social security" is somewhat unclear, when it does not tell what the social security is.
- Demography: The age of the population, and birth mortality.
- The culture section is spare, not mentioning important issues like sport in Libya, or food.
- Under religion: The time for the oldest jewish settlement is wrong compared to the given source.
Grrahnbahr (talk) 21:44, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
