Wikipedia:Featured article review/Athanasius Kircher/archive2

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The article was removed 18:25, 13 March 2008.

[edit] Athanasius Kircher

[edit] Review commentary

Notified WikiProject Biography, WikiProject Germany, WikiProject Geology, WikiProject Medicine and the article's main editors: Henry Flower (talk · contribs) (known as Markalexander100 when he first nominated the article for FA in 2004) and Susurrus (talk · contribs).

Kircher was promoted to FA in 2004. The article does not meet 1b, 1c, 2a of the FA criteria.

Explanation:

• 1b - Article seems like it could be significantly expanded; "Medicine" section is quite underdeveloped, considering Kircher's work on his germ theory of disease (which has been covered by a number of scholarly sources).
• 1c - No inline citations, whatsoever. All references are from websites, some of which may not be reliable.
• 2a - Short lead, needs to be expanded/rewritten to serve as a standalone outline of the entire article.

These issues can easily be fixed, but it may take a while. It would be best that the article be put through FAC again once the issues are resolved. Nishkid64 (talk) 05:21, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for the invite. The reference issue seems to me relatively trivial: inline citations could be added by anyone with an afternoon to spare much faster than it will take us to talk about it; as for all the references being from websites, would the Catholic Encyclopedia be more reliable if we cited the paper version?

However, I do agree that the article seems rather brief by today's standards, and could probably do with expansion. Henry^Flower 08:52, 6 February 2008 (UTC)

The New Catholic Encyclopedia (which is dead-tree only) would be much preferable. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 01:01, 12 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] FARC commentary

Suggested FA criteria concerns are comprehensiveness (1b), citations (1c), and LEAD (2a). Marskell (talk) 19:27, 20 February 2008 (UTC)

• The article is nice, but there are some open issues: MoS inconsistencies (some wikilinking of single years), referencing inconsistencies (such as external jumps: "his celebrity, his technomania and his bizarre eclecticism" [2]"), tags for lack of citations etc. The lead is not bad IMO. The content is, again IMO, comprehensive. I think the article could be saved, in case somebody works a bit on it! I am a weak remover, hoping there will be some interest in the article.--Yannismarou (talk) 15:07, 10 March 2008 (UTC)

• Remove, nothing happening, needs a tuneup, strange arrangement of appendices, citation needed tags throughout, and at least three different citation styles. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:06, 12 March 2008 (UTC)

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