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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted 16:25, 16 April 2008.

[edit] The Bhoys from Seville

Nominator,I have (and a few other people) have been working on this page and i now believe it meets the standard to be a featured article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Bobo6balde66 (talk • contribs) 01:50, April 15, 2008

Withdrawn ~~~~ —Preceding unsigned comment added by Bobo6balde66 (talk • contribs) 16:17, April 16, 2008

  • Strong object- suggest withdrawal - There are a lot of problems with this article.
  • There are many single sentence paragraphs. Many short paragraphs.
  • The lead is too short and does not accurately summarise the article.
  • Inconsistent presentation, eg UEFA and Uefa
  • Succession box placed in teh middle of the article
  • Some unsourced standalone paragraphs
  • References not filled in properly, some incomplete and some inconsistently.
  • Matches need more detail as well

Blnguyen (bananabucket) 02:29, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

Strongly suggest withdraw - a number of paragraphs lack citations, expansion tag on one section, many short stubby paragraphs. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:50, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

  • Strongly urge withdrawal: Images are fine, but article was brought to FAC with cleanup banner - prima facie indication that proper preparation and consideration of FA criteria has not been undertaken. My concerns echo those already presented (stubs, insufficient lead, missing references, etc.) ЭLСОВВОLД talk 15:11, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
  • Oppose — a stub-section + the prose isn't fantastic; please delete the image in the incipit. MOJSKA 666 - Leave a message here 18:02, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
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