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[edit] Space Shuttle Columbia disaster

A major bit of history and a tragic event. Deserves to be on the frontpage for a day - User:Tom_walker

  • Object. It could be great, but there are several problems that are sticking out currently:
  1. Image:TIME_feb_2003.jpg has no fair use rationale.
  2. Lead is very short for the size of the article.
  3. References are missing. What was used as sources to write this article? Newspaper articles, books, etc?
  4. Layout could do with some working, all of the images are of different sizes and it looks messy.
  5. 'Response from the President' section is a bit short.
  6. A few sentences in the Memorial section are sort of choppy, it doesn't provide a nice flow.

I couldn't spot anything else from my look at the article. You might want to refer it to WP:Peer review for more comments/suggestions. — Wackymacs 19:46, 20 November 2005 (UTC)