Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Seinfeld/archive1
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- Great Show, Great Article. Detailed Article, and has sources cited and deserves to be a featured article for meeting criteria. FireSpike 23:31, 18 November 2005 (UTC)
- Comments: I'll withhold a vote for now, but have a few issues which need to be addressed. All screenshots and other fair use images need fair use rationales, and please get rid of the funny lines used as dividers in the characters section. More problems will probably surface with others too. Tell me, has the article undergone a peer review? Harro5 00:31, 19 November 2005 (UTC)
- Object. Too many non-free images. I'd suggest getting rid of all the non-free images except Image:Seinfeld.png and [[:Image:Seinfeld characters.jpg]. Also, Image:Seinfeld characters.jpg needs information on its source. --Carnildo 01:00, 19 November 2005 (UTC)
- Object. Plenty of work to be done:
- The structure of the article needs work. "Overview" is just too general. The lead, if anything, is the overview. A more logical and informative section hierarchy is needed.
- "Memorable incidents" is pure trivia and doesn't even belong in a sub-article as far as I'm concerned.
- "Product placement" is not unique to the show and I don't see why it should require separate treatment, let alone a whole section.
- "Music" and "Awards" are merely over-specific lists sprinkled with prose.
- "Criticism" seems to be merely fan opinions with plenty of weasely "some"s in it. Summarize this quite brutally and insert into a history of the show (or something like it). And the opinions of a general audience and critics, not fandom, is what should be focused on.
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- Peter Isotalo 02:37, 19 November 2005 (UTC)
