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[edit] Nikola Tesla

Re-nomination. Originally nominated in July 2004. The article is coming along nicely; it currently has beautiful wikification and good narrative arc; and is one of the finest biographies I've seen. It remains long, but has greatly improved the incisiveness and style of its text, added new sources, and controversies have been mediated by editors who are not zealous Teslaphiles. +sj + 06:36, 14 July 2005 (UTC)

  • Object. Structural things: Why is there a separate section on his education, wouldn't this be better merged into the relevant parts of his life? The ===h3=== heading in the honors section are over doing it considering the amount of text. External links should probably f ollow after references. Text things: The lead seems quite underdeveloped. --nixie 06:59, 14 July 2005 (UTC)