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[edit] Monster in My Pocket

I've had the article peer reviewed, and I'm not sure how it could be improved without some seriously obscure material coming to light. --Scottandrewhutchins 20:58, 12 September 2006 (UTC)

  • Object Lead is too short and doesn't summarize article. See WP:Lead. See also goes above refs, no need for copyright section and it's in the wrong spot anyway, refs much preferred in cite php format. Rlevse 01:20, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
I've made all the suggestions for alteration except Cite php--the references below the cite php are the general sources being summarized, such as the comics. I figured the copyright thing would be a problem, but it was there before I got to it, and I wasn't sure, so I let it stay. --Scottandrewhutchins 01:46, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Object; directly cite your information. Everyking 03:47, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
You mean I should put the page number of everything I mention occurs in the comic book? That seems to me to be overkill. Please let me know where [citation needed]. --Scottandrewhutchins 13:48, 13 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Object Numerous link problems. I see names where the first and last names are separate links, numerous links to disambiguation pages, and several words that shouldn't be linked. Images lack fair use rationale, references belong after punctuation, references lack necessary information such as author and access date(see {{cite web}} for formatting). Pagrashtak 15:16, 15 September 2006 (UTC)
First and last names are linked separately becuase characters that appeared in 1-4 issues of a comic book aren't notable enough to have their own pages. Please be more specific about "numerous links to disambiguation pages, and several words that shouldn't be linked". The only disambiguation pages I know of that are still among the linkst are linked to are those that link to a bunch of red links or something that otherwise can't be linked more directly. Even the names are made sure to link, for example, to Jack (name).
Exactly — they're not notable, so don't link them. Just because a dab page contain many red links doesn't mean it's all right to link there. You need to make the link specific, even if it's a red link. Pagrashtak 03:36, 21 September 2006 (UTC)