Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Michigan State Capitol
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[edit] Michigan State Capitol
This article has failed its first attempt at FA. However, after rereading the article, I believe that most, if not all, of the problems have been fixed (I asked Carnildo about the images, and he says that so far he has no objections with some of the images that currently can't be obtained through free means). Hence, I am taking the chance and giving this article a second shot at FA (as a sidenote this is, to my knowledge, the fourth FAC that relates exclusively to the State of Michigan). PentawingTalk 04:57, 25 January 2006 (UTC)
- Support. Excellent article. — Lovelac7 14:56, 25 January 2006 (UTC)
- Support, well done. Rlevse 15:04, 25 January 2006 (UTC)
- Comment. I'm sure you've tried, but something has to be done about the first sentence. There's got to be a way not to be so redundant, make it clear this article is about the building, and still link to the necessary articles. Also the bit about the filming is really out of place and doesn't make for a full paragraph. Otherwise good stuff. - Taxman Talk 19:31, 25 January 2006 (UTC)
- Per your suggestion, I reworked the first sentence and shortened and moved the MGTV item to a better location. You're right about that one paragraph sticking out. Jtmichcock 02:11, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
- Much better, but now the two notable trees is in a similar position. Is there anything additional important about related ceremonial items, rocks, plaques, etc that could flesh out that paragraph? - Taxman Talk 19:49, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
- I have added two other trees that are of historical significance that were in prior edits. These adds two more sentences to the paragraph and fleshes it out. Jtmichcock 21:59, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
- Much better, but now the two notable trees is in a similar position. Is there anything additional important about related ceremonial items, rocks, plaques, etc that could flesh out that paragraph? - Taxman Talk 19:49, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
- Support. Very nice. Gflores Talk 07:27, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
- Support, well done! :) - Mailer Diablo 18:06, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
- Support. Excellent. -- Wikipedical
- Support. It looks very good, and is pretty well-written. My only suggestion is to add a paragraph or two directly under "History" and "The capitol today". Tuf-Kat 15:35, 27 January 2006 (UTC)
