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[edit] Jusuf Prazina
Self-nomination. I've worked on this article extensively, using numerous sources to write a good-sized text about a fairly obscure topic. I'm more or less satisfied with my work now and feel it's time to nominate it for FA status. Live Forever 06:22, 6 October 2006 (UTC)
- Comment A few more redlinks than I'm comfortable with, especially in "See Also": two of the three names are redlinks. Please either create stubs or black them. -Fsotrain09 00:55, 7 October 2006 (UTC)
- Oppose the commentaries in brackets "(presumably in the latter half of 1962, as various media reported him as being thirty-years-old in both '92 and '93)" are they really necessary why not just say born in late 1962 then cite sources. Over all the majority of paragraphs have these, the size of paragraphs needs to be reduced, 10-12 line paragraphs is too much. A see also section shouldn't have Red links it should only list existing articles. Gnangarra 12:57, 7 October 2006 (UTC)
- Comment I copy edited the lead, some rewording. Suggest that the use of Juka be limited to quotes and commentary from 3rd parties, he should be referred to more formally. Gnangarra 13:12, 7 October 2006 (UTC)
