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[edit] Hero of the Russian Federation

I sent this artilce to peer review twice in 2005, mostly had issues about grammar. They have been resolved overtime by various editors. While this is shorter than Hero of Belarus or Hero of Ukraine, but this article does not depend on listing many people who achieved the title or even much graphics (had about 3, now down to one). I just hope it is concise and NPOV, since I touched on some awardings that were given due to fraud and also to people who have been charged by outside groups for war crimes, such as Rasman Kadyrov (son of slain Chechen leader, Ahkmad). User:Zscout370 (Return Fire) 06:29, 4 April 2006 (UTC)

  • Oppose. Too short. Everyking 13:34, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
    • Comment - "Too short" is not an actionable comment. Unless you give advice as to what specifically should be lengthened, this isn't really grounds for failure. The Disco King 19:41, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Object. The sections "Creation" and "Criteria" are too short and the writing is strange in some areas. —Eternal Equinox | talk 20:17, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Object. Not well enough written (2a) and not comprehensive (2c). Where does the award stand in relation to other awards in Russia? More social and political context, please. Tony 07:55, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Comment
  • Weak Object An excellent article, but not really the best we've got.I agree with Tony above, needs more context on how it fits in on the social grounds. —This unsigned comment was added by Dee man 45 (talk • contribs) .
  • A few photos of the most famous heroes in the text would probably be a good idea (and expand the article a little bit).--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 01:51, 7 April 2006 (UTC)