Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Faten Hamama/archive1
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
[edit] Faten Hamama
I think that this article deserves to be a featured article now. It meets featured article criteria.
--Meno25 02:49, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
- Comment Take my vote at face value, this is my first article to review... so I am open to feedback on my review. First, the third paragraph is nothing more than events and dates, this is not compelling reading---especially this early in an article. Why was her return received with "heed?" The first two sentences in the Controversy section need to be smoothed out. "her acting declined"---subjective decline or quantity of roles? Most of the references are websites. I'm not going to vote, but if I were it would probably be a weak object.Balloonman 05:19, 30 November 2006 (UTC)