Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Dubhaltach Mac Fhirbhisigh/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted 02:34, 13 December 2007.

[edit] Dubhaltach Mac Fhirbhisigh

I'm nominating this article for featured article because its being a while since I wrote an article I felt was worthy enough. Also, it has a good number of links within the article which should be of interest to anyone curious on more aspects of this subject. Fergananim (talk) 21:14, 5 December 2007 (UTC)

• Oppose, sorry, but you should really consider sending this article to peer review first. A couple of things to consider: WP:WIAFA requires inline citations/footnotes, the lead should be expanded per WP:LEAD, and there are a couple of WP:MOS problems (for example, see headings). AZ _t 00:44, 6 December 2007 (UTC)

• Oppose. Agreed, definitely needs to go through a peer review. I would like to see an infobox if at all possible since this is a person. Most of your sections are too short so those could be combined. And then, what AZ mentioned. Inline citations, longer lead, incorrect heading format and thats without even really reading the article. Get a Peer Review, maybe even put it up for GA first, then come back here.↔NMajdan•talk 20:49, 6 December 2007 (UTC)
• Oppose No references, short lead, no images and a lot of other problems. Not even close to GA. --Kaypoh (talk) 10:54, 10 December 2007 (UTC)
• Oppose bad quality--Keerllston 17:28, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.