Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Dream Days at the Hotel Existence

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted 16:28, 18 November 2007.

[edit] Dream Days at the Hotel Existence

previous FAC

I've worked a lot on this since the last FAC, fixing prose etc., as have other people from WP:FING, WP:AUSMUS, WP:ALTROCK, and other random projects. So yeah, here's the second FAC - I await your suggestions. Dihydrogen Monoxide 08:53, 13 November 2007 (UTC)

• Support, with a couple of suggestions:-
  • The "Controversy" section header could be changed to a title which is more specific, given all the "controversy" mentioned in that is the one incident (the Island trials).
  • What song number was "Black Tears"? First line of the same section as above.
  • The "Cover art" section is underreferenced for the information in there.
  • Is the "Across the Great Divide Tour" subsection really needed? I reckon it'd look fine without the third level header.
  • "DVD Orchard rated the album 9/10" - the first time I read this, I thought it meant it was rated in ninth position out of a selection of ten albums. Any ideas on modifying it to make it more clear?

Cheers, Daniel 07:27, 17 November 2007 (UTC)

OK, I renamed the section and added the track #. I also removed the L3 header. I reworded the DVD orchard thing. As for the cover art - it's all referenced from the cover art image, I haven't been able to find RS that talk about it. I suppose I could trim it down so it's more obvious, less OR-ish... Dihydrogen Monoxide 07:33, 17 November 2007 (UTC)

I trimmed the cover art section to remove stuff that you can't see clearly on the image used as a source. Dihydrogen Monoxide 07:36, 17 November 2007 (UTC)

Fantastic, thanks :) Strong support. Daniel 07:53, 17 November 2007 (UTC)

• Support - I think the prose is looking good now. Just what is meant by "more crafty than" ? cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:42, 17 November 2007 (UTC)

  Thanks Cas. The "more crafty than"...I dunno how else to word it - it's just more technologically "advanced", I guess... Dihydrogen Monoxide 00:39, 18 November 2007 (UTC)

• Support - Well written prose, excellently referenced, and improvements based on Daniel's suggestions were right on the mark. Definite support. Regards, Neranei (talk) 00:57, 18 November 2007 (UTC)

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