Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Diana, Princess of Wales

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[edit] Diana, Princess of Wales

Nominated by User:Hic, self-nom. The article was previously nominated in February; the old FAC discussion is here. Most of the objections made at that time have now been addressed.

• mild object because: 1) Cite your sources in a References section 2) The order of the sections is a bit awkward, listing her charity work before her birth and youth. slambo 00:25, Mar 24, 2005 (UTC)

• Object Most of the article is about her death. Whilst this topic should be covered, I feel a biographical article should concentrate on the subject's life. She may have died young, but she did a lot - loads of long books have been written about her. I think it's a long way from featured status as it's nowhere near comprehensive enough. Also, you'll need to redact most of the stuff about her death (with the redacted bits going to a sub-article). Good luck with it! jguk 06:47, 24 Mar 2005 (UTC)

• Object - I agree with jguk that there is too much detail on her death in this article. A summary of that is needed here and the current detail should go into creating a separate article. Then the whole remaining main Diana article needs to be significantly expanded (at least doubled in size). --mav 22:59, 27 Mar 2005 (UTC)