Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Centennial Light/archive3

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted 00:03, 15 February 2008.

[edit] Centennial Light

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This article has been submitted for FA twice already, but was recently promoted to GA, so I thought I'd have another go at FA. The article is relatively short, however the FA criteria only says that articles need to be "of appropriate length, staying focused on the main topic without going into unnecessary detail" and I believe this article does just that. If there is a way that the article could be longer then please advise, but don't just claim it's too short to be a FA because it's not. --The_stuart (talk) 21:25, 8 February 2008 (UTC)

• Comment Oppose Refs should include the publisher, author, publishing date and access date. Epbr123 (talk) 21:53, 8 February 2008 (UTC)
  • And all the information in the Publicity section should have citations, including indications of the coverage by all the news agencies, as well as a citation to the webcam site, which many readers will be looking for when they read that paragraph.--ragesoss (talk) 05:08, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
• Comments. The last two sections are unsourced, as is Bernal owned the Livermore Power and Water Company and donated the bulb to the fire station when he sold the company. This story has been supported by firefighter volunteers of that era. ...turned off a handful of times isn't very professionally written, and it seems weasly vague. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 04:43, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
• Comments The last paragraph is unsourced, and there are slight writing issues. Juliancolton Talk 22:09, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

• Note: nominator has not edited the article since the nomination, issues raised above (and in last nomination) still not addressed. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 03:32, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

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