Talk:Fearns Sports College
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Although it may seem like an advertisement it discuss what the school offers for it's students. So therefore it isn't exactly an advertisement just background to the school —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.67.209.75 (talk)
[edit] Article needs some serious work
In my opinion this article needs some serious work. As it stands, it seems extremely substandard. It sounds a bit like an advertisement, and it is formated poorly. I have made a few minor changes, but they are nowhere near enough. Just my 2¢ WacoJacko 22:15, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
I have found a UK goverment site that lists some of the schools vital statistics, as well as performance statistics. It could possibly used to add some more verfiiable information to the article. I have included the link below:
.WacoJacko 12:14, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Possibly removing advert notice
Well, I have tried to clean up the article a bit(if you can call it that) For example including the results from the school inspection and also taking out any POV words/statements. I did not create the article, but originally stumbled across looking for vandalism. What does everyone think? Can the advert notice be removed? I believe it can. However, I don't want to remove it with out reaching a consensus.WacoJacko 11:34, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
- I've been bold and removed it. – Tivedshambo (talk) 19:19, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
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- Awesome, thanks!!!WacoJacko 11:19, 8 July 2007 (UTC)