Talk:Father Stephen T. Badin High School
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
This edit looks like a copy of the edit for Fenwick High school, but some things were copied that should not have been copied. For example in the table it lists the school paper as the Fenwick school paper. Please correct. Mfields1 22:44, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
I recommend a rewrite of the article. I placed a POV tag on the page. The overall information is good, but it should be rewritten to avoid statements like "We celebrate the past and renew our commitment to the future. We hope you will be a part of that tradition well into the next century." the problem is this statement seems to indicate that Wikipedia endorse the school in this manner. I'm sure the administration of the school feels this way, as well as former alumni, but the article could be rewritten to improve this viewpoint. Also the article needs to be wikified, adding links, etc. There is not a link back to Stephen Badin. His contributions are too important to ignore a link back to his article. Mfields1 22:53, 26 June 2006 (UTC)