Talk:Fantastic Children

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[edit] Horribly written.

This is the most horribly written anime article I've ever read on wikipedia. I'll be totally revamping this shortly. If anyone want s to help me that'd be a big help. Sabator 15:51, 2 January 2007 (UTC)

I have proof-read the article and removed the Plot Summary which was repeating a lot of facts that were already in the character section (and was written like an essay as so tagged by another editor). A proper lead would help now and if there is to be a plot summary it would need to be less narritive and redundant. --Squilibob 13:59, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

I rewrote the Enma section, as some of it was based on assumptions, and there were some critical points missing. I don't have the time to go over the whole article at the moment, though. Sabator 05:12, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Expansion and rewrite

I've recently undertaken a major expansion, cleanup and through rewrite of the article, expanding and creating numerous new sections, such as the staff and other media sections, and creating new articles, such as the characters and terminology sections, which I will aim to rewrite and expand upon very soon. The plot section has already undergone a rewrite, and I'll be working on further expanding upon it in the coming weeks. I'm also currently working on an episodes article, which I also hope to add to the article quite soon. Hopefully, the article will grow in quality and stature, and I'm hoping to bring it close to featured status (^_^). ···巌流^{? · Talk to Ganryuu} 07:13, 17 February 2007 (UTC)

Not to complain on the work done on the article so far, but the plot still needs to be expanded. It's not possible to understand what goes on in the series without reading further articles. I understand there might have been a fear of spoilers before, but since these are (officially) moot in Wikipedia now, nothing should stop those details from being posted. -Wilfredo Martinez 16:28, 1 September 2007 (UTC)

agree with wilfredo plot needs expandng~Binarymoron