Talk:Epigenesis (biology)

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Made a minor tweak of the article removing a direct quote and replacing it with a paraphrase. Reads better that way, direct quote wasn't necessary. Ceramufary (talk) 20:50, 31 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] This article needs work.

I put in the needs-work template because this article reads like a stub, but it has too much information to not be better organized. It needs, in my humble opinion:

  • A better opening topic sentance
  • Some sections
  • Some coherency between sections which allow for the information to flow a little.
    • Not so much techno-babble, maybe some more information that laypeople can relate to?
  • The references are nice, but they could be formatted better, using Wikipedia's citation templates (for books), I believe.

{{cite book | last = | first = | authorlink = | coauthors = | title = | publisher = | date = | location = | pages = | url = | doi = | id = | isbn = }} There you go. Have fun. Rhetth (talk) 03:36, 8 March 2008 (UTC)