User talk:Elvira100

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Hello, Elvira100, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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[edit] Re: Unsourced Section

Hi Elvira. That's a great start on the sourcing, nice job. A lot of the language in the later paragraphs of that section read like blatant advertising, so I changed the wording, and in a couple cases, removed material not in the sources. There were some complains on the talk page about the advertisement-like bias as well. I placed {{fact}} tags after some sentences which really needed verification, and left others (that still should have them, but that I know are accurate) alone. Feel free to keep adding! DMCer (talk) 11:46, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

Thanks. I will keep working on it.Elvira100 (talk) 14:06, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
Nice job! Feel free to remove tags anywhere when you think it's appropriate to do so! I've made some more improvements, but it looks good as far as sources/links/neutrality. Thanks.--DMCer (talk) 19:55, 23 December 2007 (UTC)

Yes, good job! I think a good next step would be to get it reviewed by a relevant Wikipedia:Project. --Ronz (talk) 19:12, 28 December 2007 (UTC)