User talk:Elr201

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I deleted your recent article because was written like an advertisement, with unsourced spammy phrases such as

• a centre of inspiration
• creating an impressive collection
• The staff and trustees ... ensure that resources are gathered and managed effectively, guaranteeing the continued survival of the harpsichord as a vibrant, living medium.
• ...given by world renowned experts
• ...exceptional teaching.

Articles must be written in a neutral style with claims supported by independent verifiable sources. There also appeared to be a significant overlap with the first reference, and the first sentence in particular looked like a straight copyright violation. A previous editor also queried whether the Piccola Accademia met the Articles must providing students of historical performance with notability guidelines. Hope this helps, Jimfbleak 17:51, 9 October 2007 (UTC)

I think the current version is OK; it asserts notability, and whilst I'm not sure it's exactly neutral, the worst excesses have been trimmed. You might want to tidy the references - I've done the first one to show you - the format is [address name] Jimfbleak 15:16, 10 October 2007 (UTC)