Talk:El Shaddai (movement)
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[edit] Biased
the current article was very biased. written by a member of el shaddai. the criticisms against velarde has been taken out and modified to give a positive look on this controversial organization. can the moderator of this page please review the history and compare which version is more neutral. -TO TELL YOU PLEASE CHECK THE PRESENT SITUATION OF THE COMMUNITY, THAT ISSUE HAS ENDED ALREADY! THEY ARE NOT HERETICS!
[edit] Rewrite
Definitely has to be rewritten using a NPOV. The explanation of the name could be shortened and instead point to the Names of God article. The FAQ section is also not appropriate in terms of format and content. --Radbasa 05:35, 29 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] POV Check
I rewrote the intro somewhat, but a large portion of the article seems extremely POV-heavy and I'm not sure it's salvageable. I didn't want to go deleting swaths of text without a second opinion, though. -Big Smooth 22:50, 1 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Soft Rewrite Attempt
I made a fairly significant attempt to temper most of the article to show the number of assertions and unsubstantiated facts in the article, although we're far from getting anyway with making this even close to factual. There are entire sections that need sources to be cited and I don't even know where to begin. I'm not even religious and don't really feel inspired to start googling for information for a group I don't think has done much to document their history or numbers thus far. --rOckY 01:26, 14 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Deleteng Criticisms
You have no basis on that, please contact me at dolph_tirtin@yahoo.com, we can have more information
[edit] Deleted to Bias
This article has a too much of a bias opnion and focuses to much on an opnion rater than a staement. Just because of these scandals among Protestant Tele Evangelists does not mean to put a suspsion on this group to. This article needs to be expanded and needs to get more information and more cretible information.
