Talk:Earthenware
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Thank you for your message. As you note Wikipedia is a collaborative encyclopaedia, however the changes I have made to the entries have been to correct errors in what have most certainly not been “existing accurate information”, and these have included: 1. Cones are made of "chemically refined clay" This is meaningless and shows ignorance of how ceramic raw materials and processed and used 2. More than clay is for cones. A range of compositions of different minerals dependent on their rating 3. The entry only mentions Orton cones where other manufacturers exist 4. There is no mention of other pyrometric devices 5. Your messages describes “Wedgewood” .. at least spell the name correctly: Wedgwood 6. I corrected an entry on earthenware, not least to replace the suggestion that potash is an ingredient. Have you ever formulated a body ... if you had you would know that the use potash, or potassium carbonate, is unknown 7. Earthenware again: classically most is not red as many examples are white or off white Kiln entry: they do not ‘chemically refine clay objects’ For a start the objects will be comprised of more than just clay, and again “chemically refine” is a meaningless. Although not definitive something better would be ”To induce permanent physical and chemical changes that converts a relatively weak and porous material consisting of innumerable particles into a strong, single mass composed on a glassy phase interspersed with pores and crystalline material.” 8. Change entry on soft –paste porcelain. The original entry suggested the glass was used .. correct for the early developments but with the very occasionally exception, such as Belleck, its not been used for 200 years. Similarly for soapstone and lime
And with respect your statement "as a working potter, I can assure you that I will evaluate and discuss your contributions and that worthy material" is arrogant. To refer back to your statement that Wikipedia is a collaborative encyclopaedia" Have you ever considered that others may have better understanding of the subject than yourself, yet you deem yourself to a worthy moderator?
I’m sorry that my contributions are not welcome, not least as I thought Wikipedia was an open source. How many other knowledgeable contributors do you wish to exclude?
Change & reason: Reference of Hamer & Hamer removed as the information in the article was not taken from there Regards, Andy
- I can't evaluate the accuracy of the information you are adding and subtracting, but I observe that every time you edit the page, you break things. On various edits, you have:
- stripped all links out of paragraphs you did not otherwise edit.
- removed the picture
- removed formatting for no obvious reason
- removed information that seems correct, with no explanation
- broken formatting for things like °C (making it 0C instead)
- Given these issues with your edits, people naturally do not assume high quality for the information you are attempting to add. If you want to be taken seriously and have your edits "stick", you need to not mess up the article so much in the process. If you make it easier for people to revert your additions than to fix them, they will. I am not personally able to verify any of the information you've added, but I'll try to merge some of it into the article text. Hopefully someone else can fact-check it.
- About the reference: Do not delete references from articles. If something is listed as a "reference" it means that a previous editor referred to that book while working on the article. It doesn't matter whether you can tell that some information in the article came from that source. Material need not have been directly quoted from the reference. About the only time it would be acceptable to delete a reference from an article would be if either it was believed to have been added in bad faith, or if one is certain that the material that was influenced by the reference has been deleted. Even then, unless the reference is of no use whatsoever, it would be better to leave it.
--Srleffler 05:26, 1 February 2006 (UTC)
Hello Srleffler, Thank you for your comments and I’ll take note of the guidance. I’ve correct a few bits of the text, hopefully without damaging the format, and these are:
1. Removed the reference to potash as this is not a raw material
2. As the firing temperatures of all ceramics, including earthenware, vary depending on a number of factors stating a single value would be misleading. However typically earthenware will be fired at a lower temperature than say porcelain. On this entry I’ve added a range of typically found temperatures
3. The temperatures noted for biscuit and glost were 1000 and 1100oC. However generally the glost temperature is lower
Although the emphasis on quartz rather than sand is an inprovement but the inclusion of the latter is not just unnecessory but likely to lead to confusion. Ceramic raw materials are minerals whilst sand is simply a grain size. Althogh some large grain size raw materials find occasional use, such as grog, the quartz used in earthenware bodies is much finer than sand
I’m also unclear about you comments regarding references. When an entry no longer contains information from a reference why should it be kept. Not only is it irrelevant to the text but also would be confusing to a reader
Regards, Andy
Your edit looks good. I don't know if you missed this before, but when you edit the text of an article you will see many "codes" formed from punctuation characters, which are in the source text but are not displayed in the actual article. These control the formatting of the text. The most important of these are square brackets, which are used to create links to other articles and websites. You can get more information on these codes on the help pages. There are some links to useful information in the welcome message I put on your talk page. If you're not sure what to do with the codes, that's OK. Just edit around them and leave the codes as they are.
About references: in principle, every fact on wikipedia should be supported by references to published sources. Are you asserting that there is not one single fact in this article that can be found in that reference? It need not be a direct quote. If there is any fact in this article that can be found in the reference, then the reference is correctly placed. Besides this, a reference can provide a good resource for further reading. Someone reading the article on earthenware might be interested in the information found in The Potter's Dictionary of Materials and Techniques. In any event, clearly another editor felt that this book was a good reference for this article. You would have to know that book pretty well to be certain that other editor was mistaken.
About potash and sand: I'm wondering if those were included by someone who knew something about ancient earthenware. Early potters would not have known much about the chemistry and minerology of their clays, and might have arrived at formulations by trial and error. Their source of quartz would likely have been sand. Perhaps they used potash, even though this is no longer used. Just speculating. You're probably right that the comment about sand should be deleted unless someone can write a more definite statement about early earthenware clays.
By the way, if you have or know of a book or other reference that confirms your "generic" composition, the name and author, etc., would be a useful piece of information to add to the article.--Srleffler 23:44, 1 February 2006 (UTC)
Firing temperatures. Andy says: "3. The temperatures noted for biscuit and glost were 1000 and 1100oC. However generally the glost temperature is lower." This is not accurate. What is described is the practice in industrial potteries but craft potters follow a different practice in which bisque is fired typically between 900oC and 1050oC and glaze between 1040oC and 1150oC. I am going to make an edit along these lines. Marshall46 11:21, 3 January 2007 (UTC)
Picture. I think the picture is of stoneware, not of earthenware. If I am right I will replace it in due course. Marshall46 11:50, 3 January 2007 (UTC)
