Talk:Downloaded (Battlestar Galactica)

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[edit] GA Review

Hey. As a big fan of the show, I've decided to review the article.

Infobox-

  • If it could be found, a fair use image of a portion of the episode I feel would greatly improve the article.

Lead-

  • The lead needs to be expanded a bit. Information on what time and channels it premiered on, both in the US and internationally, should be added.
  • The first sentence of the second paragraph of the lead seems awkward. I'd place this paragraph after the paragraph with premiere dates and such, and began it with something pertaining directly to the events of the show, such as months spent in space, then survivors left, and possibly something else.
  • The end of the paragraph contains one large sentence. I'd split it into 2 or 3 separate sentences.
  • Adama and Roslin should be linked

Plot

  • Six, Cylon, and Boomer have already been linked in the intro, they need to be de-linked.
  • Last sentence of the first paragraph, "....efforts of infiltrating human society." Sounds a bit weird here.

Production

  • Sci-Fi needs a link.
  • D'Anna has already been linked once.

Reception

  • Hera's already been linked once.
  • All of the reviews given here are positive, are there any negative ones that could be added?
  • The award nomination needs to be clarified for what society is presenting the award.

External Links

  • It's usually customary to link an episode page to the page for the episode at imdb.com.

Other than these things, it looks good. Mastrchf91 (t/c) 23:35, 16 February 2008 (UTC)

Done all but the image and the reception. With the reception, the episode is one of those that everybody likes - you normally get that with award-nominated episodes, so it's difficult to find negative reviews. With the image, I'll cap one from the episode in a minute. Will (talk) 00:18, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
  • Done the image. Will (talk) 00:33, 17 February 2008 (UTC)