Talk:Donna Dewberry

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I have to say, this is reading like a bit of a puff piece as it stands. Could probably use some serious hacking from the NPOV police. Also, maybe I'm just being a sloppy reader, but it seems like there's oddly little said about what this One Stroke^TM technique actually is. Finally, would probbly be worth mentioning something about her new deal with Polyform Products, makers of Sculpey polymer clay... --Oolong 11:36, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

This sounds like an official publicists' blurb, possibly written within the marketing department of Dewberry's sponsoring company Plaid. I know next to nothing about Donna myself, but I agree with Oolong -- this very much needs a rewrite to sound less like plagiarised commercial shilling.