Talk:DNA vaccination
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[edit] Bird Flu results
Amended 1st para which stated 'no results', with news circa June 2006 re bird flu DNA vaccine from PowderMed: [1].
Added reference to the recent approval of a DNA vaccine for protection of horses from West Nile virus. [2]
[edit] Complete rewrite
I've done a complete rewrite of this article. Biochemza 20:22, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] TODO: Add section on Safety
Including: Safety Issues, Integration, Tolerance, Autoimmunity, Anti-DNA antibodies. Biochemza 22:06, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Introduction/lead
Hi there, the introduction should be part of the summary, this is explained in the guide to authors on layout - Wikipedia:Guide to layout, part of the main Wikipedia:Manual of Style. Hope this helps, Tim Vickers (talk) 22:52, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
Surely this lead paragraph is too long though? Biochemza 15:12, 23 November 2007 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Biochemza (talk • contribs)
- Yes, it does need to be condensed a little bit, but the lead isn't like the abstract of a paper, more a cross between an abstract and an introduction. Have a look at some of the other scientific featured articles, such as bacteria, DNA or enzyme to get an example of format. Tim Vickers (talk) 18:15, 23 November 2007 (UTC)