Talk:Divided Kingdom

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[edit] Overhaul

I think this article needs an overhaul. The last edit had poor grammar and was false (e.g., Sanguines aren't near as angry all the time as Cholerics, whose colour is yellow, and Phlegmatics (Blue Quarter) aren't as spiritual as Melancholics, whose colour is green. Other than that, plot summary is missing/weak, and there is no mention of the integration of psychology. If no one plans to rework the article, then I will.

Radiatrixzero 17:40, 27 June 2007 (UTC)Radiatrixzero