Talk:Devourment

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Article milestones Date Process Result September 14, 2007 Articles for deletion Kept February 10, 2008 Peer review Reviewed February 16, 2008 Good article nominee Listed Current Status: Good article

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[edit] Why it should'nt be deleted

The band is considered highly influential in the brutal death metal sub-genre. They have released two full length albums and are well known worldwide. They have over 5000 listeners on last.fm and have a page in allmusic.com. Bloodredchaos 09:22, 16 September 2007 (UTC)

Was this page previously deleted? I seem to remember reading Devourment's article on WP. In any case, they are fairly prominent in the death metal scene, so deletion should be carefully considered. C1k3 01:10, 29 August 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA on hold

• In the infobox, the Former members should be one below the other
  • Y Done J Milburn (talk) 01:56, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
• "However, the band achieved little shortly after formation" - the "shortly after formation" sounds odd here...probably better just to remove it
  • Y Done Rephrased. J Milburn (talk) 01:56, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
• "production of Molesting the Decapitated, again produced by" - repetition
  • Y Done Rephrased. J Milburn (talk) 01:56, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
• "Shortly afterwards, Rosas was arrested and jailed for two and a half years" - why?
  • All the sources just say because he was a "fugitive from justice". Does that mean anything specific? J Milburn (talk) 01:56, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
    • Hmm...not really, no. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂0) 02:02, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
• "but then split up again" - any idea why?
  • There's not much written about the two little reformations in the middle- they just didn't work, I can't find any specifics. J Milburn (talk) 01:56, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
• "said it was odd that the album was self-released by the band." - why?
  • Y Done J Milburn (talk) 01:56, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
• "saying-" - use a semi colon here
  • Y Done J Milburn (talk) 01:56, 16 February 2008 (UTC)

Leave a note on my talk page when done. Review some stuff at WP:GAN. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H₂0) 01:36, 16 February 2008 (UTC)

Passed. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂0) 02:02, 16 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] merging Devourment band members

Devourment band members can easily be turned into a chart on the main page. Anyone disagree with this course?--Mike Selinker (talk) 02:34, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

It was split off after it was deemed too long during a peer review. If you want to create a table to insert, be my guest, but I am not certain it will look appropriate in the article. J Milburn (talk) 16:52, 18 March 2008 (UTC)