Talk:Desert of Wales

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[edit] Grammar??

"...although the substantial area of moorland to the north of this road including the reservoirs of Nant y Moch and Llyn Clywedog."

There's something wrong with this phrase, it seems to lack an active verb. "Including" isn't a verb even though "include" is.

Try taking take the words "to the north...Clywedog" and substituting "here" - you could then paraphrase the whole thing as "although the moorland here." See what I mean?

Perhaps this phrase has been inadequately translated from Welsh? At any rate, it definitely doesn't make sense as it stands! Edetic (talk) 05:59, 3 March 2008 (UTC)