Talk:Der Plan

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[edit] let the revision begin!

I created the initial entry for this German New wave group by translating the article from German.

But I am not quite sure whether this English entry is described in a formal grammar.

If you find any grammatical mistakes, please revise it.

Thank you, T.Aita 16:14, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Proof reader

Just proof-read the article. Mostly, your English grammar is very good ! :-)

Wasn't sure what to do with the second part of:

"The images on the sleeve were remarkably coordinated in black." as I'm not sure what you mean.

If you can explain a bit more what you mean, I can adjust it into natural English. thisisace 23:30, 16 June 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for your proofreading!

The original German description of the sentence you cited above was:

> Auffällig ist das ganz in schwarz gehaltene Cover der LP.

I tried to depict a image of this eye-catching cover jacket: [1].

Could you please improve the expression of the current English article? T.Aita 05:58, 17 June 2007 (UTC)

I have now seen a picture of the record sleeve. With your description, I have changed it to:

"The sleeve is very eye-catching, as the wording and the main monochrome image are almost entirely in black."

TRANSLATION AND PROOF READING COMPLETED thisisace 23:07, 19 June 2007 (UTC)

SEHR GUT! Thanks for polishing this article!

T.Aita 11:50, 20 June 2007 (UTC)